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| Ghost01 | 11 Sep 2015, 16:50 Post #1 |
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![]() What is the name of your character? : Kyara McRae(Unknown) Raven "The Beast" (As known on Gilgamesh) What is your characters age? : 25 Which race is your character? :Spartan 1.1 What is your character's class? : Assassin What is your character's rank? : NA What is your character's title? : Placed on ONI's Most Wanted List What is your character’s description?: Build (Height, Weight, Physique, etc.): Well toned build, not without its feminine charm. Standing at 5'10, and weighing at a health 160lbs with the lean physique of an athlete Body Color: Pale Eye Color: Red Hair Color: Purple Gender: Female Any Uncommon or Specific Features?: Raven's back is littered with scars in the form of several crisscrossing and intersecting thin abrasions. What is your character’s personality?: Silent, deadly, not exactly good for a healthy conversation, however she gets the job done. Her attitude is largely professional. She's a killer to the core, and given the abilities bestowed on her at birth it's difficult for Raven to identify with other people. A side note would point toward Raven possibly having a split personality. The other side being Mischievous, playful, and quite literally bloodthirsty. One could easily spot the differences though this has yet to be confirmed as an actual disorder or if she simply cuts loose from time to time. What is your character's history? : Her early life is largely unknown. Her name, her birth as a whole, her family never existed. A sympathizer and family friend saw to raven receiving numerous augmentation durring her infancy, but they were not of the highest caliber which may have ended playing an effect in her slight mental instabilities growing up. while her intelligence was quite superb. Her sense of understanding was different. With Raven and her family marked for kill/capture by ONI section Zero and being hunted from a young age resulted in Raven holding a deep sense of hatred for the UEG as a whole. The boiling point was the day her mother was killed right in front of her. An AM round has nasty effects on the human throat. Reason’s being her father was a former Orion operative, her mother a young ONI spook. Given the fact that someone had tried to come after his daughter Vincent had threatened to flip on the UNSC. Though in reality all he wanted was to move his family from under the UEG’s eyes and live in peace. Unfortunately someone didn’t quite like that. And despite the fact of how much Vince had bleed for what he once believed he cared for more than anything. His sentiment wasn’t shared by the black operations community as he was marked as a traitor and his family listed as conspirators. While some were arrested others were killed. Mainly those with close ties. As a result Vince couldn’t have his wife and daughter properly sheltered. Forcing him to turn to others outside of the UNSC’s reach for protection. While he would exact his own justice on what he believed to be the corrupt. He knew why they wanted his daughter, and why he had been marked. And because of what he let them do to his body she was a target for god knew what else. He wouldn’t fold to them. Unfortunately he was powerless to stop the assassination of his wife and the subsequent injury of his daughter. Upon seeing the body one could say he lost all sense. And despite the needs of his daughter he pushed her into the life of a close friend, he himself opting to work against the UNSC more directly, just another insurrectionist for them to target. With the sight of her mother being decapitated by a bullet fresh in her mind Raven's psyche was trapped in a very dark place. Hating her father for forcing the situation onto them, and hating the UNSC for its role in making her life hell. She initially went off the grid completely. Separating herself from her father and diving into the deepest, darkest levels of the insurrection wanting to plot out her own sense of revenge on those who harmed her, changed her...ruined all that she could've been. Two years later after running from the source of shelter she was tossed to by her father Kyara ended up in Gilgamesh. Not exactly the best place to be for a young girl of fourteen. Despite this she found someone willing to show her the things she wanted…for a price. Luckily she wouldn’t have to pay right away, though despite the agreement Kyara didn’t understand what she had done that day. Her body mind and soul were consumed by something very dark that day. Yet that night, no one would hear her screams of pain. Within four months Kyara had succumbed to intense indoctrination, her threshold of pain had long since passed what most grown hardened men could handle…however he mind. More damaged than any could ever survive. To coup Kyara had to adopt a separate personality to deal with what she had become…someone else to deal with the blame she placed on herself. It was a period of rest and recovery. Her body was weak and broken…used in which she was given time to recover. A source of hate focused on a singular individual. Her training began with hand to hand combat, mistakes resulted in more physical abuse which would lead to her becoming perfect. Physically she was strong, her body having developed into a ‘work of art’ something her master would say to her as he molded her into his personal little killer. Soon they moved on to firearms in where Kyra or rather Raven would take a liking to the MA2B. She had developed a natural knack for gun-kata given her roots to hand to hand over firearms. To make her even better the two would be combined. During a struggle for power between the lords of the underworld of Gilgamesh Raven’s own trek of revenge would be put on hold as she did the bidding of others. Deliveries, protection, many many kills later. However following an unknown amount of years Raven got her first chance. Taking a knife to her father and delivering his severed head to the nearest source of the UNSC. A test of her resolve and overall ability to seemingly kill a man that many believed to be untouchable. She was able to deliver the severed head to the doorstep of an ONI agent tasked with tracking his location. Only fun part about it, the young operative had only taken the assignment a few days earlier. Leading one to wonder how it was Raven came across the information so quickly. Vincent had been with the insurrection for so long, aging gracefully and only getting stronger. Who knew his end would come by the swift hand of his daughter by a knife to the throat. Needless to say she killed her ‘master’ years ago, branching out on her own. Taking what she wanted and killing those that got in her way. She took on the life of a merc for the longest while before one of the few who worked their way gracefully into her life and mind managed to place her along a slightly cleaner path. Though the route to making it all a reality was dirty, something she kept swept under the rug, covered in all of the mess herself to insure his rise. She didn’t mind that, the end result would be exactly what she wanted. What is your character's affiliation?: Mercenary What do you see as your character's future? : Dependent fully upon lifespan. This character, as before simply lives in and for the moment...free. Explain the background and role of your applied race/class? : Assassin - The character must have practiced professionally as an Agent, Infiltrator or Spymaster for the bulk of her known life. Initially she was capable of being assimilated into larger groups, her ability to imitate due to her lack of identity made her ideal as a spy for her master's rivals in the underworld of Gilgamesh. These abilities allowed her to sabotage, ambush, and ultimately kill her enemies by any means at her disposal at the time. Her augmentation and natural abilities leave little to the imagination in this case.bit was simply her cognitive state that lead to her prowess here. She understood and learned through trial and error, not necessarily her own, but that twisted yet gifted mind of hers helped her obtain and mold the skills she needed to become as adept in the shadow as she was bathed in blood. Commando - The Pinnacle for the Warrior, exceptional combatants with a wealth of knowledge on a variety of ranged and melee weapon systems, executing precise maneuvers with ease and ample physical strength, endurance to see them through any firefight or brawl to the end. While Raven isn't a "Tank" by any means, her thresholds of pain, and her own relatively enhanced physical capabilities make her a force to be reckoned with. Her immense weapons training has seen to her ability to operate several weapons systems. while all are not done with ease it should be known that she has a knack for figuring such things out. Given the natural capabilities her birthright. Raven took to combatives and battledrills rather easily durring her training. Her body was well obdotioned to peeks that even the toughest soldiers couldn't hack. Muscle failure is something since long forgotten, her strength is greater than that of any average gym rat. While her frame is in no ways massive her strength and agility are unnatural. Despite this there's no way she could match an armored Spartan of the earlier phases (ie 2's and 3's) Continuous training and conditioning has lead to her capabilities increasing to a point that she refuses to be her peek however she has yet to pass the current hump of her prowess, being forced to realize that she may be at her best as it were. What would you consider to be your character’s shortcomings?: -Mental instability -Difficulty communicating with others -Lack of self control What would you consider to be your character’s strengths?: -Relentless -Charming in her own way -Free How many "NPCs" would your character lead and how? : None, she usually works alone. What sources have you used for your application? : My knowledge base of the Halo lore itself....though there isnt a hell of a whole lot of it displayed in this character application to begin with. Do you agree to follow Resurgence's rules when playing your character? : No. Your rules suck Kaos....but yeah I suppose I do. Edited by Ghost01, 2 Dec 2015, 03:56.
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| Adelric | 11 Sep 2015, 20:32 Post #2 |
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Please adhere to the template please and insert some dot-points either little "-" marks at the start of each point or this code.
Maybe change that #4 to something a little more Arbitrary to "ONI's Most Wanted List" or "One of ONI's most wanted"
It looks like you're applying for the "Augmented Human (Spartan 1.1)" Race, as Agent and Warrior are free and revocable classes, doesn't seem representative of your understanding of the Physiological abilities of Augmented Humans of this Calibre vs "Baseline Humans" |
| Ghost01 | 15 Sep 2015, 11:46 Post #3 |
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No its more like your ability to explain things and set a baseline example. It was assumed that class were done in a tier like setting where they would be developed over the course of characters in story career. So boo on you sir. And fuck your list code <.< now go review. It's your job after all. |
| Adelric | 18 Sep 2015, 02:07 Post #4 |
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You need to add in a little explanation of what the Spartan 1.1 "Augmented Human" Is Capable of, you're applying for three classes off of the bat; Commando, Assassin and Augmented Human. Have to be a little bit leery on details. For FYI the list codes are amazing Mister, but yeah. I suppose the history format as it stands works, it's dot-pointish enough. |
| Ghost01 | 19 Sep 2015, 00:14 Post #5 |
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Alright, look at this shit now. |
| Adelric | 19 Sep 2015, 01:01 Post #6 |
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Okay that's good, but it all begs the question of how Raven doesn't suffer from intense pain or drug addiction if she was born in secret. It's explicitly implied the UEG or ONI use chemical augmentation on children when they are born to ensure normal development, so my question is; Did Raven receive this chemical cocktail or has she been deprived of it her whole life and has gone on to suffer from Physical-Psychological damage because of it? |
| Ghost01 | 19 Sep 2015, 02:42 Post #7 |
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Yes to all of the above. |
| Adelric | 19 Sep 2015, 21:04 Post #8 |
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Okay, nothing looks to be out of order to me, you're a competent roleplayer and deserve a shot at Roleplaying this character, just remember to abide by the rules in regards to powergaming and everything will be good! Here is my official +1 |
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