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| Tweet Topic Started: 23 Oct 2015, 09:25 (162 Views) | |
| Pdox | 23 Oct 2015, 09:25 Post #1 |
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![]() What is the name of your character?: Akumi S-A/216 What is your characters age?: 27 (DoB: 9th Aug. 2526) Cryo age difference: 4 years Birthplace: SYSTEM-Eridanus system II PLANET-(Moon) Ehilend CITY - New Donmarr What is your character's class?: Hunter - Misdirecting, agile, lighting fast, and beyond an adept in stealth. SwordMaster/Gladiator - Her skills were honed in hand to hand combat, holding no peer, having bested Nick, Victoria, and eve Seth. Spartan Headhunters. What is your character's rank?: Warrant Officer Three What is your character's title?: Spartan, Ma'am What is your character’s description?: Build (Height, Weight, Physique, etc.): 5'6" Body Color: Cardio driven, muscular/Athletic, though Augmented not encumbered like so many of her make Eye Color: Blue/grey. Hair Color: Black. Gender: Female. Armor: BLACK Infiltrator FLEXIBILITY LIGHT LOAD VARIANT. -Locus Variant Helmet -x10 Throwing knives attached to a stomach harness -x3 Combat knives (2 attached to the small of her back and 1 on her left leg) -M6 Magnum (right thigh) FAVORED WEAPON - M45D Tactical Shotgun ![]() Appearance: Akumi Is an attractive Predator resembling a flower that devours what daftly draws near in nature. Cunning as well as intelligent. Most who meet her will take notice quickly as she does not take a frontal approach to how one fights; Suggesting a willingness to work outside the box to achieve her goals. Akumi's black hair and fair skin is evident of her oriental descent. Even her eyes were once brown to compliment her heritage until Augmented within the Spartan program during the start of her teenage years. The change did not happen as expected. Instead of building her bulk muscle development formed tiny fibers that acted as flexible fixtures to strain her mobility beyond a normal person. Akin to micro fibers meant for bone augmentation it seemingly 'bonded' with her muscle lining and tendons. Though her muscles did take on a small 117% increase it was realized that the effected regions doubled projected endurance and speed performances; more so resulting in a 278% increase. Her rapid eye movements, hand eye coordination, and reaction time increased by a large margin of 1287%. An anomaly by all accounts being that most subject were 300% below that statistic. Outlining her special change was her eyes which mutated in color to a silvery blue hue signature of most Spartans. Fast and agile, Akumi became a new Spartan completely. Her size only added to this outcome now only standing at 5'9 inches. The smallest Spartan to date. All the cadre that trained her knew she was no shock trooper but something more, something different. What is your character’s personality?:
ReBirth During her training the overseeing officers began to note her unique ability for close quarters combat which placed her above all her piers. Closing distance with her foes without fear she even elected to take on much bigger trainees. That combined with her incredible speed, hand to eye coordination, size, and flexibility made her body the ultimate weapon for this task alone. Later during Augmentation it became increasingly clear she was not a Spartan built for open conflict. ONI, seeing this as a means to another end, decided it best to pull her from Alpha Company and train her more in espionage, infiltration, and further more highlighting in depth hand-to-hand training focus. This oddity in the Spartan program would also pave way more so for the HeadHunter initiative. The Missions that followed became CLASSIFIED reports, or even myths, whispered within the main stream forces. Stories of ghosts on the outer rim in small teams killing armies or even high trier targets. It seemed fictional to most brass who even heard of the program. The reality of the HeadHunters was that only Spartan-III's with a select skill set were required before even being viewed for entry. Once the HeadHunter 'to be' was selected for the position she/he under went an in depth infiltration training regiment before evaluated for pairing. For HeadHunter teams only operated in teams of two. A process that broke down every aspect of the Spartan's psyche to be matched, percent wise, to another HeadHunter in order to maximize effectiveness working together as a team. The missions these teams were sent on often lead in the Spartan's death however. Which added to their existence as nothing more then myth. However ONI knew full well the HeadHunters were in the Galaxy doing what armies could not. Armed with only themselves, the top of the line gear they carried, and their unique skill set. Ultimately setting them apart from any other Spartan counterpart. After the death of her partner on a unknown Moon deep in Covenant Space Akumi was transferred to Earth after the Fall of Reach as a UNSC effort to collect high value assets for the battle to come. It was here she was paired with another HeadHunter which eventually lead to a physical relationship shaking the core of her beliefs. Now she felt that death was something to avoid in order to live with her new found bond, her family. Some time later an Op. that went south caught Akumi and Victoria-B154 in its wake. Victoria would ultimately be set on the sidelines and replaced by another HeadHunter named Seth-B315. These events triggered a emotional break down in Akumi which Seth would further add too by applying threats to "remove" Victoria from Akumi forever. Not at all knowing that Victoria and Akumi had been in a relationship. Mentally stired, and faced with an ultimatum, Akumi lost the ability to speak to others communicating only with HUD to HUD text or green to red status updates. The only one Akumi would speak to at length was Victoria there after for the affection they cultivated as more then simply a pair... ![]() Still there was more to come for Akumi and her young Headhunter counterpart; Seth. When the nuclear device detonated on a joint operation the blast wave nearly killed her and Seth who detoured to save a wounded Akumi. The moment Seth risked his life Akumi realized she misunderstood his motives before when he threatened Victoria. Both survived the blast and Once healed up their relationship only got better from there. Once the pair returned to Victoria she and Nick, another former Headhunter paired with Victoria, were badly wounded from the recent battle for earth. Combat operations continued across the Planet directing the four Spartan's to mission after Mission. Only upon the climax of New Mombasa some miles away from their main effort in Australia. Akumi was gravely wounded when confronted by three hunters. Killing one only ignited a berserking rage in the remaining three. Victoria and a hand full of UNSC ODSTs managed to fight off the beasts before a killing blow could end Akumi's life. The Headhunter was evacuated to an urgent care facility under ONI guard. Mean while the team of Headhunters ventured into the unknown portal after the UNSC Frigate 'Forward unto Dawn'. The monsters that chased them there came to force retreat in the Spartan's and their crew. Opting to leave the Flood as the Master Chief ordered all remaining forces pull out. Akumi and Victoria were reunited after those events and remain committed to the UNSC as a Covert Operations Spartan Fire Team designated 'Mobius' aboard the UNSC Infinity. ![]() What is your character's affiliation?: UNSC Marine Corps, Office of Naval Intelligence Explain the background and role of your applied race/class?: I know my stuff. What would you consider to be your character’s shortcomings?:
What would you consider to be your character’s strengths?:
How many "NPCs" would your character lead and how?: None What sources have you used for your application?: Halo Games, Halo Novels, Halowiki. Do you agree to follow Resurgence's rules when playing your character?: Sure Quotes: "Spartans Never die......Well if that's the case. HeadHunters Never Lived." "Why is it that I can be what I'm born to be away from you. But when your near that purpose becomes blurred?" Theme Song: "Evanescence-bring me to life" Edited by Pdox, 19 Nov 2015, 22:24.
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| Adelric | 25 Oct 2015, 21:21 Post #2 |
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Hey Dox! Is this finished? I moved it because it had a "WIP" Tag. |
| Pdox | 25 Oct 2015, 22:23 Post #3 |
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not finished |
| Adelric | 25 Oct 2015, 23:11 Post #4 |
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All good! Just give it a bump or shout in the shoutbox when it is and I'll move her over mate. |
| Pdox | 19 Nov 2015, 22:24 Post #5 |
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bump |
| Adelric | 23 Nov 2015, 09:59 Post #6 |
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You want me to move this into the applications section mate? |
| Pdox | 23 Nov 2015, 12:56 Post #7 |
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Jah jah mon |
| Adelric | 23 Nov 2015, 13:33 Post #8 |
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Done, I'll give this a proper review soon Dox, I really need to sleep. |
| Pdox | 24 Nov 2015, 19:39 Post #9 |
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Bump? |
| Adelric | 25 Nov 2015, 01:39 Post #10 |
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Wow she's fuckin' tiny xD Anyway, getting onto the review, class selection and strengths is appropriate, all good there. Didn't see any details that struck me as off with the backstory to Akumi's character, it was actually quite nice to read. I'm a sucker for tragic characters man so you've got me with Akumi, just this one little detail though before I slap my +1 vote on it.
Okee Dokee, insofar as I know. There are no real percentages given for how much the augmentations increase efficiency when compared to baseline Humans, beyond descriptions of what they do, E.g Increased Muscle Mass & Density, but one detail here that seriously needs to be tweaked is the reaction time decrease. Out of Armor, all Spartans reaction times are decreased by 300%, while Akumi might be quicker than everything else, it's not going to be twice, three times or even four times everyone else, that's a little much Dox. You change that to some descriptor like "Considered to have sharp reflexes even among her Spartan peers." We'll be good to go mate. |
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