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| Peach's Nightmare; I made this story when in grade 3. | |
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| Topic Started: Feb 18 2008, 10:40 PM (291 Views) | |
| peach_hachaa | Feb 18 2008, 10:40 PM Post #1 |
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Peach the Princess just had nightmares. She always dreamt that Bowser was kidnapping her. Bowser is a mean dragon that always kidnaps Peach but Mario saves her. Mario is an Italian man and he always rescues Peach the Princess. Peach dreamt that Mario saves her for the money so Peach doesn’t trust him. Peach really likes Donkey Kong but she doesn’t tell him. Donkey Kong is a cute and strong ape even Yoshi likes Donkey Kong better than Mario. Yoshi is a green cute dinosaur he is Mario and Peach’s pet but Yoshi doesn’t like Mario one bit because Mario is mean to him so Yoshi stays with Peach. Mario and Peach used to live together when Peach and Mario got a letter that said ‘ever want to go on a trip to Hawaii well is your lucky day you have got a voucher for two people to go for FREE”. Peach just said “I don’t want to go but you can take Luigi with you if that’s alright with you” Mario just said “its all right I’ll take Luigi with me” so Mario walked to the Airport (because there’s one near their castle) Peach just said “goodbye” and went to sleep ____________________________________________________________________ Will post The rest later.. just to create eagerness. :lol: 
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| Zeldalina | Feb 18 2008, 11:25 PM Post #2 |
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Nice! I like it! I'll post a story that I made in 3rd grade called Cinderella and the Halloween Ball, if I can ever find it, but I do have a story that I did in 1st Grade called Princess Isabella and the Dragon in my room ^.^ and my computer is still hooked up to the projector and surround sound speakers, and you know what stinks? I had to do ALL the work getting it set up and everything. <_< |
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| peach_hachaa | Feb 19 2008, 01:55 AM Post #3 |
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****.. oh well its ur sis b'day  HAPPY BIRTHDAY! ______________________ Continuation -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Mario went on the 25th of March and was returning on the 25th of July (Luigi is an Italian man too he is Mario’s brother). Lick Lick Peach wakes up with a squeal because Yoshi is licking her hand. Yoshi is trying to tell Peach something he is looking up where Peach always puts her crown before bed. “AHHHHHHHHHHHH MY CROWN IS MISSING!!!!” Toad comes running in. Toad is Peach’s servant. He always is taking good care of Peach. He is nice to everyone but is very scared of Bowser. He is human but looks like a mushroom. “What happened”? Toad asked Peach. “My crown is missing,” squealed Peach. “Oh that’s to bad Peach. “Don’t worry,” said Yoshi. Toad and I will help you find your crown. “You guys are the greatest” Peach said with joy.” First of all we need to write down a list of people who we think stole your crown “said Toad. “Lets see Bowser, Baby Bowser, Wario and Birdo” said Yoshi. Just then something came up in Peach’s mind” MARIO” she squealed. “Are you sure about this” said Toad with a worried look on is face “trust me” said Peach “we can’t do this on our own we need some help” said Peach I’ll call Princess Daisy said Peach. |
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| Zeldalina | Feb 19 2008, 10:45 AM Post #4 |
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Thanks ^.^ Oh and i'm going to start making forum rules, like no swearing unless you type the bad word in this symbol: * . And I like the story, please keep it up! I'm not going to make your warn level increase because I've been thinking about the forum rules... |
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| peach_hachaa | Feb 19 2008, 12:54 PM Post #5 |
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“Look through the windows Yoshi,” said Daisy. They were at Mario’s hideout. Yoshi looked through the window and quickly called Peach. While Peach was coming she heard a voice say”here you go” it sounds like Mario’s voice thought Peach “oh thankyou” said a mysterious girl’s voice. Peach ran so fast that she nearly fall to the ground luckily Daisy caught her just in time “thanks Daisy” said Peach and quickly rushed to the window. Peach was right it was Mario and a girl but Peach didn’t know who the girl was. “Happy birthday Pauline said Mario now Peach knows who this girl is its Mario’s girlfriend! She heard Luigi arguing saying “why should we blow up Peach’s castle Peach is my friend” “well if you don’t want to then get out” “I will” said Luigi. Just when Luigi was about to go someone came in took the crown and threw it to Peach. Peach recognised him by the necktie it was Donkey Kong. When Mario saw Donkey Kong he quickly lit the cannon ball and it was going to hit Peach’s castle. Luckily Luigi moved it to Mario and he and Donkey Kong jumped out of the window but they didn’t know if Mario and Pauline jumped out the other side. After the explosion had finished Peach said to Donkey Kong “I have something to tell you” but she was interrupted by the sound of racing karts. also take note of this! when i was young i liked dkxpeach!! Edit by Zeldalina: Next time, peach_hachaa, please edit your posts if you have something to add that you forgot, OK?
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| Zeldalina | Feb 19 2008, 03:49 PM Post #6 |
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Please keep it up! |
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| peach_hachaa | Feb 19 2008, 10:38 PM Post #7 |
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It was Mario, Pauline behind Mario and Bowser. Luckily Peach, Toad, Donkey Kong, Yoshi and Luigi had there racing karts too but Daisy didn’t have one because she wasn’t in Mario Kart but she sat behind Luigi, Luigi was so proud. The race began. At first everyone was fine until Bowser threw a shell at Toad. He went flying but Peach caught him and Donkey Kong caught his kart. Luigi was coming last and he threw a shell at Mario. Mario and Pauline went flying and landed in Bowser’s castle. Next Bowser went for Peach and he threw a shell at Peach. She and Toad went flying but Luigi caught them and Daisy Caught Peach’s kart “Peach can I borrow your kart” asked Daisy “yeah sure” Peach replied. Daisy, Donkey Kong and Yoshi smashed into Bowser he went flying to his castle “that’s going to leave a mark” laughed Yoshi. |
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| Zeldalina | Feb 19 2008, 10:44 PM Post #8 |
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LOL! Please Continue, it's good! Today, I was writing the next part of my story, but it's not finished yet... |
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| peach_hachaa | Feb 20 2008, 01:05 AM Post #9 |
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When they were nearly to the castle it was raining so the rain drenched them all. When they got into the castle it looked spooky because it was midnight and the lights were off. Just then Peach turned on the lights then Luigi and Daisy remembered that they forgot to get a spare change of clothes. “Peach we forgot to get a spare change of clothes” said Daisy and Luigi at the same time. “I have spare clothes for you Luigi that Mario kept just in case you slept over. So go with Daisy and get her a spare change of clothes and go get yours and Daisy’s toothbrush same with you Donkey Kong and Yoshi said Peach, who were also spending the night here. “Peach can we borrow your kart?” asked Daisy “yeah sure” replied Peach. After they had brought all their stuff to the castle Peach started to sort out the beds there are four beds so two people have to share. Daisy and I will share one “said Peach and Toad and I will share one” said Yoshi with that they went to sleep. In the morning everyone woke up because they all heard someone knocking on the door. |
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| Zeldalina | Feb 20 2008, 08:00 AM Post #10 |
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:lol: Nice! It's Great! |
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| peach_hachaa | Feb 20 2008, 12:44 PM Post #11 |
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Peach went and opened the door and it was Birdo. Peach screamed because she thought Birdo was going to hurt her. Everyone came rushing towards the door. With that Yoshi was going to push Birdo out when Daisy yelled and said not to hurt Birdo because Daisy saw the trusty look on Birdo’s face. “What brings you here?” asked Daisy. “Well I am tired of people thinking that I am bad so I want to help you defeat Bowser and the rest of his bad gang”. “How did you know that we were having a fight with Bowser, Mario and the rest of their bad gang? ’’ asked Daisy. “ Well my friend went to check what Bowser and they were up to and he wants to defeat Bowser and his gang too. You must know him! his name is Boo”. “So can us two help defeat Bowser and his bad gang?” asked Birdo. “Okay” said Daisy “but if you do something bad you and Boo are out of here’’ said Daisy and the others. “ okay” agreed Birdo and Boo. First we must make a plan said Peach. |
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| Zeldalina | Feb 20 2008, 01:15 PM Post #12 |
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Nice! Kepp it up! |
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| peach_hachaa | Feb 20 2008, 08:55 PM Post #13 |
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. After discussing the plan Boo and Birdo went to spy on the evil gang. They heard that they where making a plan to kill Peach and her gang but all of a sudden baby Bowser saw Boo and Birdo spying on them. He told Bowser that they were spying and they started chasing them. That’s when they caught Boo, who told Birdo to run away. Finally when Birdo arrived at Peach’s castle she practically fainted on Yoshi. After when she woke up she told what had happened to Boo. “We got to come up with a plan to save Boo and triumph over Mario and his gang” said Peach to her gang. |
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| Zeldalina | Feb 20 2008, 09:09 PM Post #14 |
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Ok... What's Mario's gang? Great story so far
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| peach_hachaa | Feb 21 2008, 09:17 PM Post #15 |
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Just him Pauline bowser and his minions. ____________________________________________________________________ “Daisy come over here quickly” said Birdo they were all at Bowser’s castle. Birdo had found Boo with a belt around his waist to stop him from disappearing. Ahhh Toad screamed a glass had gone into his skin. With hearing the noise of Toad’s scream, Bowser came out with Pauline and Mario. Bowser tried to escape in his kart but Donkey Kong pulled him off and threw him into his kart but instead Bowser was knocked out. Birdo shot eggs from her nose while Yoshi helped her with his pile of eggs too. Mario had been knocked out and he landed on top of Bowser. Then with one great punch from peach Pauline landed on Mario and that’s when Boo threw a bomb at the kart and it exploded and they went flying into a portal which headed to Koopa land which was opened by Yoshi and Toad. With Bowser, Mario and Pauline beaten they were never to be seen again. “Yeah we won shouted everyone. |
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