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| My version of Super Mario Galaxy | |
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| Topic Started: Jun 16 2008, 08:40 PM (179 Views) | |
| Yoshi_Blue | Jun 16 2008, 08:40 PM Post #1 |
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This is like Super Mario Galaxy, but I REALLY changed it up. Now it may say some bad words in it...But it won't really matter. Enjoy Ever since the universe was born, shooting stars and comets passed by the center of the universe. It happened every 50 years. That's when they had the festival. Princess Peach wrote a letter to Mario. Dear Mario, I'll be waiting for you at the castle. There is something I'd like to give you. From, Peach Mario was running to the castle, as there was the festival going on. Then Toad spotted Mario. Toad: Mario, glad you came! Peach is waiting for you at the castle. Mario: Well, I'm on my way. Mario was headed to the castle, then he notice someone. Some wearing red dress, and covered her head with a hood. But Mario thought he was imagining things, but he also noticed the girl was holding a wakie-takie. Mario just quietly walked away. Girl:*Speaking in the walkie-talkie* It's time. Suddenly, ships came shooting bullets everywhere. Everyone was frightened, Mario got hit, and laid in front of the castle door. Bowser came up to the balcony where Peach was at. Bowser: Princess Peach! You are formally "invited"......To the creation of my new galaxy! Now Tasha! Tasha: Yes Bowser, sir. Suddenly, Peach's castle was being....tooken away. The ships tried to pull Peach's castle into space. Mario was looking around. Then Kamek and Tasha, jumped in front of them, and seeing that same girl with the walkie-talkie, smriking at him. Tasha: Hey Mario. We're sorry, but your not invited to our galaxy! Kamek: Enjoy your flight! Kamek, got his wand out, and casted a spell at Mario, Mario went flying away. Mario fell asleep, then he felt tapping on him. Mario woked up. To be continued |
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| Yoshi_Blue | Jun 17 2008, 06:21 AM Post #2 |
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Mario noticed he was on a different plant. It was an apricot star, the star turned into a bunny. Star/bunny: Finally your awake! Mario: Well, here I am. Star/bunny: Come with me! The star bunny(Whatever you can call it) was hopping away. Mario was trying to follow it. Then he saw 2 more star bunnies. Starbunny: Let's play freeze tag. If you can "freeze" us all, than we'll tell you where you are. First you have to count to ten, then you can go find us. Mario was slowly counting to ten, then as he was finished, he was searching for the three star bunnies. Mario passed by some trees, and noticed that there was a star bunny. Mario was chasing after the starbunny, Mario finally caught him. Starbunny: Oh no! You caught me! *Tries to stand still* See if you can find the rest of us. Mario was looking, for the other two star bunnies. As he passed by a feild of grass, he saw another star bunny. He was running after it, and then Mario finally caught the 2nd star bunny. Star Bunny: Awww! You caught me!*Tries to look frozen* Mario was trying to look for the last star bunny, it was hard. Mario:*Thinking in his head* That last star bunny is a good hider. I looked every where, but I just can't find him! Maro notices a pipe, he went in there, than we saw the last star bunny. Mario was running as fast as he could to get the last Star Bunny. Mario finally caught the last star bunny. Star Bunny: Ohh, I can't believe I let myself get caught! Mario: Really? You are such a good hider! I've been looking around everywhere! StarBunny:You have?*Turns into an apricot star* Maybe you can help mama! Suddenly there was a light. Mario looked at it. He came closer. Then he noticed the other Star Bunnies, but they were yellow stars. Then Mario noticed a lady wearing a teal dress, and had light blonde hair with part of it covering her eye. She was wearing a silver crown. Lady: I've been watching you, from beyond the starry skies. My name is Rosalina, and I watch over and protect the cosmos of the sky. Right now you are at the gateway to the starry sky. And we shall help you save your special ones. This Luma, shall enthrust you with his care. The apricot star(Luma) was next to Rosalina, as Rosalina grabbed her wand, and the Luma went inside Mario, as Mario had the power to spin. Rosalina: Disater has stuct the skies! Please help ussave the grand stars! Rosalina disaperred. One of the yellow Lumas went up to Mario. Yellow Luma: Break things that look breakable, just spin! Mario was spinning, and breaking the glass in front of him. Then a huge looking star appeard. Yellow: That over there is a launch star! Just spin and you'll be blasted away! Goodluck! To be continued |
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| Zeldalina | Jun 17 2008, 09:01 PM Post #3 |
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Cool! Please write more when you have the time.
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| Yoshi_Blue | Jun 18 2008, 12:54 PM Post #4 |
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Mario spun, and he was blasted off to another planet.Then he bumped in to another yellow Luma. Luma: Hey, could you please hlep me! My friend is trapped, I key, but a metoir broke it, I have one peice of it....There are three peices we need to find two more! By the way, watch out for black holes!! Mario: Okay then. Mario was looking for the other two peices. He found one in ice. Mario thought it looked breakble so he spun. The ice crystal broke and Mario grabbed the key peice, then he found a goomba holding one. He stomped on it and grabbed the last key peice. He put it together, unlocked the cage that the Luma was in. Luma: Thanks for saving me! Follow us! Mario was following the Luma.The Luma went down a pipe, Mario went in after. Then he saw a huge star. Luma: We've been expecting you! See that huge star, it's called a Grand Star. We need to save it! The awful machine, is draining its power, try to find away to stop it. Mario went up to the machine. If he touched the machine he would be electrefied. Then he saw a switch. Mario thought, What if he filoed the switch? He gave it a try. Suddenly the machine, started to go reverse, and gave the Grand Star's Power back. Mario:*Thinking* Now how would would I get it back? Well at least I can touch the machine, without getting hurt. Of corse, I do have the power to spin right? Well, I can try to break the machine. So Mario gave it a try, then he actully did it! Mario took the grand star, and then he held on to it, as the Grand Star took him away. Then he was somewhere, the Grand Star went inside of something, then some of the lights turned on. He saw Rosalina talking to a black looking star. It was certainly not a Luma, he looked older. Black Star: The beacon shines again, may not be as powerful as a class star 6, but the Lumas will survive for now! Rosalina: Thankyou for saving this Grand Star, these people are very important to me, they are my family. This is Polari, he's my advisor. Polari(black star): Hello, nice to meet you. Mario: Hi. Rosalina: This is the comet observatory, this is my home, and home to the Lumas. This starship has been in a hibernating state, in which it cannot move. The people that took both of your special ones, took al the power of the stars. You should go in the Terrace, it is the only dome open, that you can get power stars from. Mario:*thinking* Special ones? I know Peach is special to me, but who is the other one? Well, it could be Luigi, but I never saw him get captured. Well, I guess I should go to the Terrace. Meanwhile. Tasha and BowserJr. were on one of the flying ships. BowserJr. was holding a girl in a yellow dress, Peach stared. Peach: Daisy? Tasha: That's right! It's your s***ty b**** friend! Peach:*thinking* Why would they capture Daisy too!? This is very confusing, Mario please help us! To be continued |
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| peach_hachaa | Jun 19 2008, 08:27 PM Post #5 |
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its good. but honestly i think that swearing at the end wasnt nessecary
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| Yoshi_Blue | Jul 16 2008, 06:52 PM Post #6 |
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Sorry I couldn't really finish my story. And peach_hachaa, I know the swearing at the end wasn't nessecary, but that's just Tasha. Now to continue. Polari and Mario were walking to the Terrace. Polari was explaining to Mario, about saving the power stars. Mario started his jorney to save the power stars. At the end of the day he only found six stars. Of couse saving stars can be very hard and tiring. Mario walked out of the terrace, and decided to rest for a while. Rosalina came and talked to Mario. Rosalina: So you're taking a little rest? Mario: Yeah. Finding power stars can be hard work! Rosalina: It sure is. I only found three. Mario: I found six......You went and found some stars too? Rosalina: Well, I thought we were working together, to save your friends. Mario: Yeah.....Well, usually I do it all myself....Sometimes my brother, Luigi helps me out....I wouldn't mind if you helped me out, I mean that would be great. Rosalina: Your brother's name is Luigi? Mario: Yes. Rosalina: What's your name? Mario: Mario. Rosalina: Mario, huh? That's a nice name. Mario: Thanks. *yawns* I'm getting tired. Rosalina: Hee hee, no wonder! It's time to go to bed!! Mario: How can you tell when it's time to go to bed? It's always dark out in space! Rosalina: Well, you see the stars? Right now, if you face west, you can see most of them, that means it's night time. When it's morning, you'll see most of the stars at east, that's how'll you'll tell it's morning! Well.....I guess I can show you, where you can sleep. You see, since the comet observatory doesn't really have much power, you may have to sleep, out here.....Or in the terrace, and the garage over there... Mario: It's okay. I'll just fall asleep over here. Rosalina: Okay then, good night! Mario fell asleep. He woke up, and he saw Rosalina talking to Polari. Then she notices Mario waking up. Rosalina: Oh hi, Mario! Did you get good sleep? Mario: Yeah. To be continued. |
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| Yoshi_Blue | Jul 17 2008, 07:11 AM Post #7 |
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Rosalina: I bet you're hungry! Mario:*Hears the growl of his stomach* Well.......  Rosalina: Ummm, have you been collecting any star bits? Mario: Oh, these shiny things in my pocket *grabs the starbits from his pockets* Rosalina: Yeah, those! I've been collecting them too.....I hope you don't mind but....*sighs* It's the same story....we have no power..... Mario: And you guys can't really do anything....... Rosalina: Exactly....So all we have.....Is star bits....Well....We have to collect them...... Mario: So they're......etitble!? Rosalina: Yes....They actully taste good. Mario:*Puts one in his mouth* This one tastes like chocalate! *Puts another one in his mouth* This one tastes like honey!*Puts another one in his mouth* And this one tastes like vanilla icecream! These are really good!! Rosalina: These star bits are what the lumas eat. They taste like everything sweet. There are some hungry lumas out there that are looking for starbits to eat...If you are kind enough to feed them some of your star bits they, could give a power star, or help you find a power star, as long as you help them.....They will help you. Well.....Let's go look for power stars!! Mario and Rosalina went inside the terrace. Polari was watching over the lumas. Mario went to a galaxy and started his jorney. Mario tried to collect more star bits, for the lumas....and himself if he ever gets hungry, and there is nothing to eat. Mario: Wow there are alot of star bits!! *Picks up some star bits* But of course I can't take them all.........And I gotta go find that star! Mario was walking around, he kept on walking, and then he saw some glass, and it looked like there was a launch star in it. Mario broke the glass with his power to spin. Then he walked in front of the launch star, and the launch star blasted him away. Mario landed, and he saw something, or some people.....That were short, and weird looking. Mario:*thinking* Is it who I think it is!? Mario was walking closer and closer then he knew, who it was! Mario: Toad!!! Toad: Mario!! Mario was running to Toad in slow motion! Toad looked at Mario weirdly. Toad: Mario......What are you doing? Mario: Running to you.....In slow motion. Toad: Why!? Mario: It's more....dramatic....And fun. Toad: Errrr....Okay......Well..... Suddenly there were four toads running to Mario, but it wasn't in slow motion. XD Toads: Mario!! Mario: More Toads........ Toad: Well....Guess what I got!? Mario: What!? Toad: A POWER STAR!!!!!! Mario: That's great! Toad: Take it! Mario takes the power star, suddenly there was a huge light, Mario has seen that light every time when he saved a power star. They were all in the comet observatory. Mario sees Rosalina approaching to her. Rosalina: Mario! Your friends over there, would like to see you. Mario: Okay then..... Mario was walking to the Toads, the Toad with red polkadots on his head(the main one) Was walking up to Mario. Toad: Hi Mario! We ended up here too! And the Lumas over there, at the garage are building us a mini-starship! We're gonna help you find power stars!! So we can save Princess Peach! Suddenly Rosalina was coming towards Mario. Rosalina: Sorry to interupt, but we have discovered an enemy base!! By that I mean, we have found a new galaxy, and there is a grand star in trouble! We must save it!! Mario: I'll go save the grand star!! Mario runs inside the terrace. Rosalina: Goodluck Mario!! To be continued. |
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| Yoshi_Blue | Jul 27 2008, 01:12 PM Post #8 |
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Mario went inside the Terrace, and went to the discovered galaxy. Mario started on his journey. This time star bits didn't matter to him, there weren't any to be seen anyways. Mario saw a luma in a cage. Luma: Please help me!! I'm stuck in this cage, and I need to get out. Mario: Hmmm, well I will help you.....I just need to find a way to break the cage open..... Mario tried to use his power and spin, but the glass was too hard. Luma: Maybe............Maybe you should try throwing something that's hard.....Then the glass could break.... Mario looked around. He saw a rock on the floor, Mario picked it up. Mario: I guess this rock will do.... Mario threw the rock, at the glass cage. The glass cage cracked. Then Mario threw it a second time, then the cage broke, and the luma flew out. Luma: Thanks!! You better be careful.........Ahead there are some people that await you. They're the people who put me in the cage...Anyways I'll turn into a launch star, so you can go to that planet over there!! Be careful!! Good luck saving the grand star!! The Luma turned into a launch star, Mario continued on and landed on the planet. He suddenly heard laughing. It was BowserJr. and Tasha. Then he also noticed two other people. That same lady with the red dress with her hood on, and she still had that walkie talkie. The other girl had a yellow dress and a crown..... Mario: DAISY!? Daisy: Mario!! Mario: What are you doing here!? Daisy: These guys kidnapped me......... Tasha: Heh heh heh!! Glad you could make!! Your just in time for our little friend to destroy you! Girl with the walkie-talkie: That's right! The lady with the walkie talkie jumps off the ship Tasha, BowserJr, and Daisy were on. Mario: *thinking* Hmmmm.... Maybe Rosalina meant that Daisy was my other special one.....Well Daisy is very special to me, and a really good friend....But who could be that girl with the walkie-talkie? BowserJr.: Well, we gotta go, Daisy has a little "date" with my daddy. Tasha: Hee hee hee!! Let's go BowserJr. Daisy: Mario!!! Peach is................................. Tasha covered Daisy's mouth. Mario stood there for awhile. Suddenly Mario noticed that the lady with the walkie-talkie was throwing bombs at him, Mario started running. Mario: *thinking* What do I do now!? What the heck!? Isn't the answer obvious!? I obviously have to throw the bombs back at her.....As if we were playing hot potato! Mario grabbed a bomb, and threw it at the lady. The bomb exploded, and the lady fell down, her hood was close to falling off, the lady put it back on. And threw another bomb at Mario. Lady with walkie-talkie: You're pretty good!! Mario:*Throws bomb* Your pretty good yourself. Lady with walkie-talkie: Thank you I..........AHHHHH!! The woman was so distracted she got hit by the bomb again. Mario: Take off that hood of yours!! Person with the walkie-talkie: Never! *Throws another bomb.* Mario caught the bomb, and threw it back at the lady, the lady threw it back, and it kept on going back and forth...Suddenly Mario threw it back at the lady, and the bomb finally exploded. The lady was knocked out. Then Mario saw the grand star. Then he looked back, but the lady was gone. Mario saved the grand star, and he was back at the comet observatory.The grand star went in the beacon, the beacon got bigger, and it turned into a greenish color. Mario saw Rosalina, Polari, and the Toads at the garage. Mario went over there. Rosalina: Hi Mario!! Toad: Our star ship is finished!! Mario: Hey guys!! We need to talk!! When I was searching for the grand star, I saw Tasha, BowserJr., and Daisy!!! Toad: You saw Daisy!? Mario: Yeah.....But why would Bowser want to capture Daisy? He has no interest in her....Or does he!? Rosalina: Who knows.... Meanwhile. Tasha and BowserJr. left Daisy with Bowser. Daisy: Bowser, what's this all about!? Bowser: Revenge!! Daisy: Errr..........What did I ever do to you!? Bowser: You don't remember!? Daisy: Obviously I don't Bowser: You were the one who got me into that huge mess!! When you saved Peach that one time, you left me in huge trouble!! I could've died, if Kamek hadn't saved me..... Daisy: Oh that!! I did try to help you! Tasha was the one who got you into the mess! Bowser: Oh....Well, I'm still not letting you free...... Daisy: Why!? Bowser: You know, it's nice to have to ladies captive.....And I do think you're pretty......You do have nicer boobs than Peach does. Daisy: Errrrr........I don't know what to say. *thinks* Silly b****! To be continued. |
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