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Art: Nightfall
Topic Started: Jun 8 2011, 10:43 PM (212 Views)
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I also submitted this to dA. I would've put more effort in the background, but I got lazy. I might still update this, though. :D :D :D

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Yeah, you should post it on dA.
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You're still online? And yes, I already did. Pretty much it's the same, though. Rating please?
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Yeah, I'm still online.

I'm not good with ratings. 8.5/10? Maybe 9/10? Dunno.

I can't really criticize stuff. It's not what I do.

All I know is that you draw bodies better than I do...


P.S. The girl's arms need a bit of adjusting (unless her arms are cut off).
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Well that's good enough. Actually they're shorter because they're bent forward, and the forearms aren't visible. But yeah, come to think of it, they do need adjusting. Maybe make them a bit rounder.
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sky could be brighter, the mountain side illuminated by the moon should be the brighter side. actually, the base must be slightly darker than the upper portion of the mountain range.

the plain, because its surface gets lighted directly- unless the mountains' shadows fall on their direction.

because it's night time, the skin and the clothes must not be as bright as they would appear in broad daylight. Usually, things must be a bit more bluish in tint. Check this one out:
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there are still other things you can tweak- the couple's size in relation to the background is off because the perspective isn't done well, as a photographer, you must know more about this. depth of field was not considered very well. Add shadows to the figues.

Check this one out, done by an old friend, Tof Zapanta. He uploaded this on FB just a while ago and of course I couldn't help but notice the similarity in theme

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Hm good point. No wonder something seemed off.
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