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LazuDex; The Lazumi Project
Topic Started: Jan 8 2010, 06:30 PM (342 Views)
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is it good? i'll give some tips on HOW to critique.
1. the feet are SUPPOSED to be nub-like.
2. i need some help with how to un-jaggedate the tail. (make it not jagged)
3. NO IT IS NOT A MONKEY SOME PPL MISTAKED IT FOR A MONKEY. its a dog-like creature.
4. tell me if the colors and shading are alright.
5. anything else you can see, comment and try to tell me how to fix it.

Ripura:
Summary- Ripura is a phantom who also has electric powers. While cery swift and agile, Ripura's special attack can be very powerful. Since Ripura is two types- Plasma and Soul, it may be found in a variety of places from old mansions to clouds.
Type- Plasma/Soul
Name Base- none
Moves- Electric Edge, Plasma Hurricane, Shadow Bolt, Rising Soul
Rai Finish- Phantom
Gender- Male and Female.
Stats-
Atk:1
Def:55
Spcl Atk: 95
Spcl Def: 80
Agil: 85

Next Lazumi- Trai

Edited by plasmi, Jan 8 2010, 06:46 PM.
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Good? It's going to be the Lazumi (its been changed from Lazumon to Lazumi) logo. Why? Because this is Trai, one of Railectria's most powerful legendary Lazumi.

Trai:
Summary- Trai is one of Railectria's legendary Lazumi. It is very powerful and knows a wide variety of moves. This Lazumi has the strongest attack power out of any other Lazumi, however it's special attack and special defense may be disappointing.
Type- Ice/Aerial
Name Base- none
Moves- Icy Wing, Feathery Avalanche, Frost Clamp, Icicle Slam, GigaWing, Snow Sphere
Rai Finish- Aerial Blizzard
Gender- Unknown
Stats-
Atk:100
Def:50
Spcl Atk: 2
Spcl Def:10
Agil:60

Next Lazumi- Ampheon
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Ampheon... another Lazumi finished. This does look a bit like Ripura, but most Lazumies have a diamond on their forehead.

Ampheon:
Summary- Ampheon is a shy Lazumi, who usually minds it's own business. When threatened, Ampheon usually summons a sheild around itself, protecting it from harm.
Type: Aerial
Name Base- Amp, Eon
Moves- Amped Paw, Trinity Sheild, Aerial Recon, Aerial Cutter
Rai Finish- Sheilded Twister
Gender- Male and Female
Stats-
Atk: 50
Def: 90
Spcl Atk:30
Spcl Def:90
Agil:25

Next Lazumi- Plasmi
Edited by plasmi, Jan 8 2010, 09:56 PM.
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Plasmi, my avatar. I kinda like this sprite, sitting down.

Plasmi:
Summary- Plasmi is a kind and cheerful Lazumi who doesnt like to fight. If it is threatened, however, it becomes like a completely different creature. Plasmi is not very strong, however it's amazing speed and agility make it difficult to overcome.
Type-Electric/Iron/Aerial
Name Base- Plasma
Moves- Watt Orb, Plasma Diamond, EleScratch, Lazuli Slash
Rai Finish- Lazuli Blade
Gender- Male only
Stats-
Atk:60
Def:50
Spcl Atk:65
Spcl Def:50
Agil:100

Next Lazumi: Lazuli
Edited by plasmi, Jan 8 2010, 09:57 PM.
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Lazumi:
Summary- Lazuli is a rarely found Lazumi- almost extinct. This Lazumi has become very agressive over the years, as human used to hunt it. If found, will be found in a cave.
Type- Iron/ Aerial
Name Base- Lapis-Lazuli
Moves- Diamond Slam, Power Slash, Wing Thrust, Shining Headbutt
Rai Finish- Lapis Rain
Gender- Unknown
Stats-
Atk: 70
Def:60
Spcl Atk: 70
Spcl Def: 55
Agil:55

Next Lazumi- Aerill
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Aerill:
Summary- Aerill is always flying- never on the ground. If injured, Aerill will work up the courage to keep flying. Many soldiers use Aerill in battle, as it never gives up.
Type-Aerial/Moon
Name Base- Aerial, Willpower
Moves- Aerial Dive, Brave Bomber, Willpower Rush, Hyper Claw
Rai Finish- Moon Feather
Gender- Male and Female
Stats-
Atk: 90
Def:40
Spcl Atk:20
Spcl Def:30
Agil:85

Next Lazumi: Cresci
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Cresci:
Summary- Cresci is a dog-like Lazumi who is closely related to Ripura. Cresci can be classified as an "all rounder," considering her stats are all the same.
Type- Moon
Name Base- Crescent
Moves- Crescent Slide, Moon Scratch, Tail Whap, Waning Chomp
Rai Finish- Full Moon
Gender- Female Only
Stats-
Atk: 70
Def:70
Spcl Atk:70
Spcl Def:70
Agil:70

Thats enough Lazumi for today, I'm worn out. Judge the ones I have, thanks!
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The lineart for them Is pretty good! I suggest trying to shade them different though, more like Trai?

The others a pillow shaded while Trai has a lightsource.
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The shading on trai is noticably better than the other sprites, also I would reccomend you add just a hint of orange to the darkest yellow shade on ripura as dark yellows tend to be rather ugly(trust me I draw lemons alot)

also you might want to try reducing the amount of aa on the tail because with such a thin part the aa could be contributing towards the jaggedness.
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