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| Topic Started: Jan 8 2010, 06:30 PM (342 Views) | |
| plasmi | Jan 8 2010, 06:30 PM Post #1 |
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![]() is it good? i'll give some tips on HOW to critique. 1. the feet are SUPPOSED to be nub-like. 2. i need some help with how to un-jaggedate the tail. (make it not jagged) 3. NO IT IS NOT A MONKEY SOME PPL MISTAKED IT FOR A MONKEY. its a dog-like creature. 4. tell me if the colors and shading are alright. 5. anything else you can see, comment and try to tell me how to fix it. Ripura: Summary- Ripura is a phantom who also has electric powers. While cery swift and agile, Ripura's special attack can be very powerful. Since Ripura is two types- Plasma and Soul, it may be found in a variety of places from old mansions to clouds. Type- Plasma/Soul Name Base- none Moves- Electric Edge, Plasma Hurricane, Shadow Bolt, Rising Soul Rai Finish- Phantom Gender- Male and Female. Stats- Atk:1 Def:55 Spcl Atk: 95 Spcl Def: 80 Agil: 85 Next Lazumi- Trai Edited by plasmi, Jan 8 2010, 06:46 PM.
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| plasmi | Jan 8 2010, 06:44 PM Post #2 |
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![]() Good? It's going to be the Lazumi (its been changed from Lazumon to Lazumi) logo. Why? Because this is Trai, one of Railectria's most powerful legendary Lazumi. Trai: Summary- Trai is one of Railectria's legendary Lazumi. It is very powerful and knows a wide variety of moves. This Lazumi has the strongest attack power out of any other Lazumi, however it's special attack and special defense may be disappointing. Type- Ice/Aerial Name Base- none Moves- Icy Wing, Feathery Avalanche, Frost Clamp, Icicle Slam, GigaWing, Snow Sphere Rai Finish- Aerial Blizzard Gender- Unknown Stats- Atk:100 Def:50 Spcl Atk: 2 Spcl Def:10 Agil:60 Next Lazumi- Ampheon |
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| plasmi | Jan 8 2010, 07:10 PM Post #3 |
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![]() Ampheon... another Lazumi finished. This does look a bit like Ripura, but most Lazumies have a diamond on their forehead. Ampheon: Summary- Ampheon is a shy Lazumi, who usually minds it's own business. When threatened, Ampheon usually summons a sheild around itself, protecting it from harm. Type: Aerial Name Base- Amp, Eon Moves- Amped Paw, Trinity Sheild, Aerial Recon, Aerial Cutter Rai Finish- Sheilded Twister Gender- Male and Female Stats- Atk: 50 Def: 90 Spcl Atk:30 Spcl Def:90 Agil:25 Next Lazumi- Plasmi Edited by plasmi, Jan 8 2010, 09:56 PM.
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| plasmi | Jan 8 2010, 09:55 PM Post #4 |
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![]() Plasmi, my avatar. I kinda like this sprite, sitting down. Plasmi: Summary- Plasmi is a kind and cheerful Lazumi who doesnt like to fight. If it is threatened, however, it becomes like a completely different creature. Plasmi is not very strong, however it's amazing speed and agility make it difficult to overcome. Type-Electric/Iron/Aerial Name Base- Plasma Moves- Watt Orb, Plasma Diamond, EleScratch, Lazuli Slash Rai Finish- Lazuli Blade Gender- Male only Stats- Atk:60 Def:50 Spcl Atk:65 Spcl Def:50 Agil:100 Next Lazumi: Lazuli Edited by plasmi, Jan 8 2010, 09:57 PM.
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| plasmi | Jan 8 2010, 10:03 PM Post #5 |
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![]() Lazumi: Summary- Lazuli is a rarely found Lazumi- almost extinct. This Lazumi has become very agressive over the years, as human used to hunt it. If found, will be found in a cave. Type- Iron/ Aerial Name Base- Lapis-Lazuli Moves- Diamond Slam, Power Slash, Wing Thrust, Shining Headbutt Rai Finish- Lapis Rain Gender- Unknown Stats- Atk: 70 Def:60 Spcl Atk: 70 Spcl Def: 55 Agil:55 Next Lazumi- Aerill |
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| plasmi | Jan 8 2010, 10:21 PM Post #6 |
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![]() Aerill: Summary- Aerill is always flying- never on the ground. If injured, Aerill will work up the courage to keep flying. Many soldiers use Aerill in battle, as it never gives up. Type-Aerial/Moon Name Base- Aerial, Willpower Moves- Aerial Dive, Brave Bomber, Willpower Rush, Hyper Claw Rai Finish- Moon Feather Gender- Male and Female Stats- Atk: 90 Def:40 Spcl Atk:20 Spcl Def:30 Agil:85 Next Lazumi: Cresci Edited by plasmi, Jan 8 2010, 10:32 PM.
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| plasmi | Jan 8 2010, 10:47 PM Post #7 |
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![]() Cresci: Summary- Cresci is a dog-like Lazumi who is closely related to Ripura. Cresci can be classified as an "all rounder," considering her stats are all the same. Type- Moon Name Base- Crescent Moves- Crescent Slide, Moon Scratch, Tail Whap, Waning Chomp Rai Finish- Full Moon Gender- Female Only Stats- Atk: 70 Def:70 Spcl Atk:70 Spcl Def:70 Agil:70 Thats enough Lazumi for today, I'm worn out. Judge the ones I have, thanks! |
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| Wolfie | Jan 8 2010, 11:06 PM Post #8 |
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The lineart for them Is pretty good! I suggest trying to shade them different though, more like Trai? The others a pillow shaded while Trai has a lightsource. |
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| Demonlemon | Jan 9 2010, 12:17 AM Post #9 |
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The shading on trai is noticably better than the other sprites, also I would reccomend you add just a hint of orange to the darkest yellow shade on ripura as dark yellows tend to be rather ugly(trust me I draw lemons alot) also you might want to try reducing the amount of aa on the tail because with such a thin part the aa could be contributing towards the jaggedness. |
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