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MK's Minor Music Projects
Topic Started: Feb 7 2010, 08:05 PM (2,983 Views)
Demonlemon
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MY CHILDREN COMETH
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Pretty much exactly what mirror said.
Happiness is like wetting yourself, everyone can see it, but only you can feel the warmth.
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Masquerade
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Frantic Fortress

yay
also wip
Edited by Masquerade, Jun 26 2010, 08:13 PM.
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Demonlemon
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Sounds nice so far
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Good work, I like the use of pan. But I do dislike the disortion guitar, however. It's probably because the trumpet plays E while it plays two lots of Ds, making it sound off. Oh, and I tried the guitar as a string ensemble, which I transposed up one octave, personally I think it sounds better that way. But, that's just me. (It might be beacuse I dislike those sorts of guitars, though).
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Update, check OP.
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Hopeless romantic
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i loves them
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Espejo
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Creeping sounds beautiful - great work!
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Masquerade
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Update on Fire (remastered). I plan on continuing the melody that begins around 0:38, and making the tuba solo near the end a bridge.
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I like it! Very nicely done! A quick word of warning, though - violins cannot play below the forth space on the bass stave, and you seem to have an F and D below it. You might want it to change to a viola or something for those two notes, perhaps.
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Orchestrated Fire: awesome in every way
Mermaid: Not bad so far, ballads arent really my thing but it seems well done
Frantic Fortress: Doesnt sound very frantic, but it would make nice castle music
Creeping [Loop]: kinda dull
WireMan's Theme: I prefer the midi version, not to fond of the fadeout on the mp3 version
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Masquerade
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It's been a while.

Imagination.
Length: 1:00 Genre: Progressive Ambiance
WIP


Espejo! I need help orchestrating! Critique me! CRITIQUE MEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
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And now you're asking for MY help? Okay, then.

1. The oboe and flute don't go together, especially on the 1st and 3rd crotchet beats.
2. Oboes can't play bass, only down to the Bb down from middle C.
3. It sounds sort of muddled when all the instruments come in.

And that's abut it~ (As far as I can tell)
Except maybe you might want to work on adding pan and some more expression, like volume change.

I did enjoy the piano and contrabass together quite a bit, though.
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only the finest
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okay I can't listen to the song right now but
is it inspired by mIrAcLeS at all
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Masquerade
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Sep 9 2010, 10:26 PM
okay I can't listen to the song right now but
is it inspired by mIrAcLeS at all
no I'm afraid not
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Masquerade
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I'm quite sure I fixed the problems. (and finished the song maybe) Check the link again.
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