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Topic Started: Mar 5 2010, 11:25 AM (156 Views)
Espejo
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Something tells me this needs a lot of work...
Also, I think this site dislikes partially transparent pixels, so the outline may be lumpy in parts.

C+C please.
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Fishmuffin
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your anatomy needs a lot of work; the fists are balls with lines and the legs are too stiff
fix the zig-zag line on the shirt, its not very attractive
P.S. - you used too many colors
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Espejo
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I knew it.

I'll get back to work, then.

And how did I use too many colours? EDIT: wait, I see. 40 is too many.
Edited by Espejo, Mar 5 2010, 09:11 PM.
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Fishmuffin
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Mar 5 2010, 09:08 PM

And how did I use too many colours? EDIT: wait, I see. 40 is too many.
ya think
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Demonlemon
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To many colors, also the lines seem to vary quite a bit in thickness

The shading is good, but the pose looks a little awkward (The torso appears to be at a different angle from the legs)

All that said, it's still far better than any sprite i've made!
Happiness is like wetting yourself, everyone can see it, but only you can feel the warmth.
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Espejo
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Well, this sprite is going to be scaled when I use it, so does that mean varying line thicknesses are bad? Or is it only good in art?
And yeah, I'll fix up the pose then.

Thanks.
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Demonlemon
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If he was on a wall I could assume the thick lines are shadow, but since he is all alone it just looks odd
Happiness is like wetting yourself, everyone can see it, but only you can feel the warmth.
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Fuma
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the length of the sleeves...idk that just caught my eye. usually they're closer to the hand
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