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| Topic Started: Mar 5 2010, 11:25 AM (156 Views) | |
| Espejo | Mar 5 2010, 11:25 AM Post #1 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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![]() Something tells me this needs a lot of work... Also, I think this site dislikes partially transparent pixels, so the outline may be lumpy in parts. C+C please. |
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| Fishmuffin | Mar 5 2010, 09:00 PM Post #2 |
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yeaaa gurl
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your anatomy needs a lot of work; the fists are balls with lines and the legs are too stiff fix the zig-zag line on the shirt, its not very attractive P.S. - you used too many colors |
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¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Hope rides alone ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ | |
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| Espejo | Mar 5 2010, 09:08 PM Post #3 |
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I knew it. I'll get back to work, then. And how did I use too many colours? EDIT: wait, I see. 40 is too many. Edited by Espejo, Mar 5 2010, 09:11 PM.
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| Fishmuffin | Mar 5 2010, 10:44 PM Post #4 |
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yeaaa gurl
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ya think |
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¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Hope rides alone ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ | |
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| Demonlemon | Mar 6 2010, 12:11 AM Post #5 |
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MY CHILDREN COMETH
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To many colors, also the lines seem to vary quite a bit in thickness The shading is good, but the pose looks a little awkward (The torso appears to be at a different angle from the legs) All that said, it's still far better than any sprite i've made! |
| Happiness is like wetting yourself, everyone can see it, but only you can feel the warmth. | |
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| Espejo | Mar 6 2010, 01:15 AM Post #6 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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Well, this sprite is going to be scaled when I use it, so does that mean varying line thicknesses are bad? Or is it only good in art? And yeah, I'll fix up the pose then. Thanks. |
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| Demonlemon | Mar 6 2010, 01:48 AM Post #7 |
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MY CHILDREN COMETH
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If he was on a wall I could assume the thick lines are shadow, but since he is all alone it just looks odd |
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| Fuma | Mar 6 2010, 03:39 AM Post #8 |
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Hopeless romantic
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the length of the sleeves...idk that just caught my eye. usually they're closer to the hand |
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