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| Topic Started: Mar 10 2010, 12:20 AM (341 Views) | |
| Demonlemon | Mar 10 2010, 12:20 AM Post #1 |
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MY CHILDREN COMETH
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| Fuma | Mar 10 2010, 12:23 AM Post #2 |
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Hopeless romantic
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I like it. However, his right leg looks slightly strange and his right index finger looks rather large. Still good, though. |
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| Masquerade | Mar 10 2010, 12:30 AM Post #3 |
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boy howdy
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okay since this is for the art competition I am going to give you some pointers The feet look really wonky. The right foot (our perspective) looks a bit like a rectangle. The foot has more of a quarter-circle shape defining the toes, so you may want to try that. I have no idea what the lines are for, maybe toenails? If so, please specify! It looks really odd. PS. I love the cankles. No nipples. But that's okay because it fits the style. The fists are also pretty weird. Of course, hands are hard to do. Try looking at your hand and sketching it. Then try it with PowerPoint. I'm sure it's hard to do just about any drawing with PowerPoint, however, so I applaud you on your skill with it. Good to see you're staying true to the style, at least with the eyes. Everything else is definitely your style, though. It's an enjoyable cartoonish sort to be sure. All in all, it's not half bad. But it'll be nothing compared to Centaloaf! Muahaha! |
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| Demonlemon | Mar 10 2010, 12:34 AM Post #4 |
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Ya that foot has been giving me trouble all week I actually didnt notice the index finger until you guys pointed it out, but now I cant unsee its deformed shape ![]() Thanks for the crits! Will try to improve it! |
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| Demonlemon | Mar 10 2010, 01:02 AM Post #5 |
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Finger has been fixed! |
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| Espejo | Mar 10 2010, 06:38 AM Post #6 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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It seems all my hope on winning the drawing competition has been shattered... In other words, it's amazing. |
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| Wolfie | Mar 10 2010, 09:39 AM Post #7 |
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High priest
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| Demonlemon | Mar 11 2010, 12:17 AM Post #8 |
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Thanks! |
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