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| Topic Started: Apr 15 2010, 09:14 PM (1,038 Views) | |
| Yoshin | Apr 15 2010, 09:14 PM Post #1 |
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Lvl 17 Kakuna
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| plasmi | Apr 15 2010, 09:28 PM Post #2 |
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call me the necroposter
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starting off just like me huh? well youll get tons better here- stay. |
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| plasmi | Apr 15 2010, 10:02 PM Post #3 |
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now about what needs to be fixed- ill make an edit. first, they need light sources for the shading. pillow shading is when you simply outline the shape, however it does not look good.![]() here is an edit of alex that has a light source- in it- the sun is coming from his right side. also, your picture was kind of bumpy and squarish. so i rounded it a little bit and tried to improve the edges. would you like me to do another edit of the mushroom and whatever else? Edited by plasmi, Apr 15 2010, 10:13 PM.
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| Yoshin | Apr 15 2010, 10:41 PM Post #4 |
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Ok Plasmi, also I used YY-CHR to make them |
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| plasmi | Apr 15 2010, 10:47 PM Post #5 |
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http://www.brothersoft.com/games/game-maker.html go there and download that program its much better for spriting. |
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| Fishmuffin | Apr 15 2010, 10:49 PM Post #6 |
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yeaaa gurl
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if youre not on a mac/linux then i suggest using ms paint to make sprites but now for some crit -alexs head is pillow shaded, also round off the back of it plz thx -both parts of that mushroom are too triangular -some parts of alexs torso are jagged, fix those -demonlemon and the mushroom have absolutely no shading |
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| Yoshin | Apr 15 2010, 10:49 PM Post #7 |
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ah I already have Game Maker and I didn't know It can be used for spriting. and Demon Lemon is a base Edit: ah ok fish muffin Edited by Yoshin, Apr 15 2010, 10:51 PM.
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| plasmi | Apr 15 2010, 10:50 PM Post #8 |
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it can. click the pacman button. and then click edit. |
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| Fishmuffin | Apr 15 2010, 10:52 PM Post #9 |
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yeaaa gurl
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| Yoshin | Apr 15 2010, 11:00 PM Post #10 |
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Plasmi I said yes to editing everything else also The Lemon is a base |
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| Espejo | Apr 16 2010, 08:42 AM Post #11 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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You might want to try curving your lines more, especially on the Demonlemon and Baby Yoshi sprites. Also, I sugeest lightening up the contrast (make the shading lighter colours) on Alex and make the shading come in more into the sprite on Alex. Other than that, these are pretty difficult to critisize, due to the sprites being very tiny. May I suggest making your sprites larger so you can pin down details and structure better? |
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| Wolfie | Apr 16 2010, 10:44 AM Post #12 |
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Bigger sprites for a start maybe, and try use less shades for smaller ones. Good start on Demon Lemon though! |
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| plasmi | Apr 16 2010, 10:28 PM Post #13 |
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well i am yet again at my grandmoms house- but its my OTHER grandmoms house. its much more boring here... |
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| plasmi | Apr 17 2010, 03:20 PM Post #14 |
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![]() theres the mushroom. he may be pillow shaded, i dont know, but it at least looks better. |
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