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Baby Yoshi's Sprite Topic
Topic Started: Apr 15 2010, 09:14 PM (1,038 Views)
Yoshin
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plasmi
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starting off just like me huh? well youll get tons better here- stay.
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now about what needs to be fixed- ill make an edit. first, they need light sources for the shading. pillow shading is when you simply outline the shape, however it does not look good.
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here is an edit of alex that has a light source- in it- the sun is coming from his right side. also, your picture was kind of bumpy and squarish. so i rounded it a little bit and tried to improve the edges. would you like me to do another edit of the mushroom and whatever else?
Edited by plasmi, Apr 15 2010, 10:13 PM.
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Ok Plasmi, also I used YY-CHR to make them
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http://www.brothersoft.com/games/game-maker.html
go there and download that program
its much better for spriting.
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Apr 15 2010, 10:41 PM
Ok Plasmi, also I used YY-CHR to make them
if youre not on a mac/linux then i suggest using ms paint to make sprites
but now for some crit

-alexs head is pillow shaded, also round off the back of it plz thx
-both parts of that mushroom are too triangular
-some parts of alexs torso are jagged, fix those
-demonlemon and the mushroom have absolutely no shading
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ah I already have Game Maker and I didn't know It can be used for spriting. and Demon Lemon is a base
Edit: ah ok fish muffin
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it can. click the pacman button. and then click edit.
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Apr 15 2010, 10:49 PM
i suggest using ms paint to make sprites
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Plasmi I said yes to editing everything else also The Lemon is a base
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You might want to try curving your lines more, especially on the Demonlemon and Baby Yoshi sprites. Also, I sugeest lightening up the contrast (make the shading lighter colours) on Alex and make the shading come in more into the sprite on Alex.

Other than that, these are pretty difficult to critisize, due to the sprites being very tiny. May I suggest making your sprites larger so you can pin down details and structure better?
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Bigger sprites for a start maybe, and try use less shades for smaller ones.

Good start on Demon Lemon though!
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well i am yet again at my grandmoms house- but its my OTHER grandmoms house. its much more boring here...
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theres the mushroom. he may be pillow shaded, i dont know, but it at least looks better.
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