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Kirby and stuff
Topic Started: Apr 17 2010, 08:03 PM (255 Views)
Solid Snake
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I don't think this will ever be worth entering
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The lineart on the hat's bill looks a little odd, other than that it looks good!
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eh
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Maybe you could try some inner anti-aliasing to smooth out the hat
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round off his right arm its bugging me
also push in his left foot
perspective: HIS right, not our right
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I think I got all that right

also gun
and (poor) shading
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that hat looks really off and the lower body looks pillow shaded.
his right foot looks like a flipper. try making both of them one pixel bigger on the bottom.
his hand isnt shaded like that at all.
the hat needs to be more circlish on the upper left edge.
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also, take off the right arm and just redo it. it just makes the sprite look weird.
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Unfortunately, unless I know whats off about the hat, I can't fix it
I did round it though

I've never been good at shading, so idk if this is any better
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also, take off the right arm and just redo it. it just makes the sprite look weird.

idk, I kinda like it like that, but I see about it
Edited by Solid Snake, Apr 18 2010, 09:24 PM.
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Based on C+C from mfgg
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The shading's looking good!
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A not good animation:
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A better one:
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I like how the polar star came out
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Polar star looks good, have to agree about the first animation though
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