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The Legend of Fumoria game; LONG LIKE PLASMI'S TOPIC
Topic Started: Jun 24 2010, 07:16 PM (493 Views)
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The legend of Fumoria is a game idea that I've been working on for a while, somewhat with MK at school. Its starts with a guy named Steve that is swimming at a lake with some friends, in southern Montana. He sees something at the bottom of the lake and swims down to see what it is. He sees a shining crystal rock with a symbol on it. He traces the symbol with his finger and suddenly a sand dragon rises from the bottom of the lake and swallows him. Steves transported to the Land of Fumoria. He awakes in a shallow stream in the middle of a forest. Confused, he starts walking through the forest. Theres strange fauna all around, and the trees are about 450 feet tall, on average. He notices that a pack of animals is stalking him. He starts running, and so do they. They look like a cross between dragon and rino. Suddenly, a spear flies through the air, and strikes the biggest one through the neck. The other creatures run off, and a lizard-like humanoid appears from the bushes. He ignores Steve and goes to the creature. He rips the spear out and stabs it again. He goes back to the bushes and brings a cart. He tells Steve to help him load it onto the cart. He does, and the humanoid motions him to follow him. The carts led by yak-like creatures. They soon arrive in a village, but everyone stares at them as they walk past. Some other humanoids that the hunter seems to know, come and take the cart. The hunter takes him to the village elder. The elder says that he needs to see the oracle. They go to the oracle who says to go to the ruins, where there is a stair case to the heavens. They go, and soon arrive in the heavens, to consult the gods/goddesses about the new visitor. They argue, and eventually say he can stay. Steve didn't know how to get home, and liked it here better, so he stayed.

Three years later, Lauren Birkenowski moves to a new home in the country of colorado. Lauren was always curious and adventurous, and thats why she loved it there. She was exploring one day in winter, when she came across a stream, running through a narrow space between two small cliffs. She follows it and comes out in a bigger stream. She decides to walk south, on the ice. She soon sees a huge cliff on her left. Awed by its large size, she bumps into a large rock, sitting in the middle of the frozen stream. She walks to the western side of it, to the flat, slanted part and notices writing. She traces a symbol with her finger and is transported to a meadow in the Land of Fumoria. This is where she first meets Steve and falls in love. She keeps going back, and by summer, they both loved each other, but acted just as best friends. One night, they're in Fumoria, sitting in that same meadow watching a meteor shower, after playing baseball, and something burst through the trees. Its a huge war machine that is accompanied with several smaller machines. They take lauren, and retreat through the trees. Steve grabs the wooden baseball bat and follows. He comes to a clearing where a bunch of fumorian wemon are being loaded into a cart with wheels. They pull away as soon as he gets there, and a bunch of man-sized war machine-robots attack. Steve uses all his rage and destroys the robots. He goes back and gets weapons. The hunter, which is now his best friend (named Snuko) won't let him leave alone. The oracle stops them outside the village and tells them to go to see the gods. The gods tell them that long ago, the god of metal and ore, Roknor, decided that time of magic was over. He decided to create machines. The god of fire, younger and idolizing, agrees and helps Roknor build these machines. Just to proove a point, Roknor sends his machines to destroy the City of Fumoria. They fight to the death, and the city is destroyed. Roknor is imprisoned forever, along with the god of fire. the god of fire was imprisoned in a volcano. His powers were useless and his flesh slowly burned away. since his powers were useless, he couldn't grow it back. Now they broke free, and have captured all the other elements from the rest of the dieties. They couldn't do anything except put them back in the heart of their elemental regions and guarded by elemental gaurdians.

you have to defeat each elemental gaurdian to be able to defeat the next by gaining that elements power. they capture the goddes of electricity half way through the game. to make robots
Forest: stab in its one eye. right arm turns into spiked log
Electricity: beat with wooden arm. recieve power of electricity from finger tips
Metal (prototype robot): overload with electrity. recieve electric war hammer
Ice: Crack with solid hammer. gets ability to freeze enemy for short time.
Water: freeze solid then beat. gives you a damp aura to douse fire enemies.
God of Fire: use water power. flamthrower power
God of Metal: gathering all the powers allows you to find the staff of chaos and use it against Roknor, killing him forever.


END: Lauren ends up using the staff of chaos (almost dying in the process) because steves too hurt. after roknor is destroyed, crasious (god of chaos) granst the right of being the god of fire to steve. steve gives the right to Snuko, and lives happily ever after.

The god of choas and goddess of purity had kids and they turned out to be elemental gods and godesses.

GODS AND GODESSES:
God of Chaos: Crasious Cray-see-us
Godess of Purity: Promisia Prom-ee-see-uh
God of Metals/Ores: Roknor Rock-nor
God of Fire: Datteos (datt) Dah-ttee-oes
God of Ice: Bazik Bah-zeek
Goddess of Water: Acrasia Uh-cray-see-yuh
Godess of Electricity: Elisaya El-lee-say-uh
Goddess of Wood: Glandrious Glan-dree-us

Gaurdians of the Heavens: Plasmi
Coladian (MK)
Character: Steve, but player can change

Special NPC's: Lauren Birkenowski - human from Canada
Snuko Ralcu - Formorian, friend of Steve

Money:
Fumick: Most common - bronze coin with image of any minor elemental god/goddess
Peamus: equal to 5 fumicks- silver coin with image of Promisia
Crasiod: equal to 10 fumicks - gold coin with image of Crasious

SHOPPES:
Herbs: 1/4th healing
Potion#1-red: 1/2 healing
Potion#2-purple: full healing
Potion#3-glowing orange and yellow: boosts attack/atk speed

WILL EDIT A LOT

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1 of 6 village elders. PICK!
Edited by Fuma, Jul 1 2010, 04:14 AM.
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belongs in game forum.
Although we need to get another section of that forum for concepts/general discussion (a place for topics like this)
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well i figured plasmi put his in here
Edited by Fuma, Jun 24 2010, 07:19 PM.
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yeah but I figure they should both be moved.
This isn't what general chat is for.
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i sorry. but anything else about it?
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It's not your fault or anything, but I just think it shouldn't go here.

However I'm quite anxious to see what comes of this.
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why thank you. I dream the gameplay being almost like legend of zelda.
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added shops and money system
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so what do other people think a this?
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definitely cool, however a bit unoriginal. that doesnt mean you should change anything.
what i mean by unoriginal is that there are alot of games like that.
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well....there are a lot of games...but theres deffinetly a lot more rattling around in my head than what you saw
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sounds pretty good

im assuming this is what that thunder god I made for you is for?
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well...i've kinda decided for that to be a possessed village elder, that is forced to be the electricity gaurdian. for some reason...i've always imagined the gods as humans, that are like bleneded with there element. like the goddess of the woods would be like a wood nymph. she would like have vines growing up her leg and **** like that.
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Sounds awesome
Happiness is like wetting yourself, everyone can see it, but only you can feel the warmth.
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yeah...i know...lol
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