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Thinking bout evolving this into something; The Chronauts
Topic Started: Jul 10 2010, 06:33 AM (423 Views)
Spartan
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Man's mind, once stretched by a new idea, never regains its original dimensions.
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In the Year 2215 Historians and Scientist have made a time machines! they use it to study the past from experience. One day the time machines are stolen, the government in A euro country( haven't decided which one yet) gets info from a spy they have stationed in russia that the time machines have been stolen by a terrorist group called Covenant Of The Dark World.

They are using the time machines to go back into time and planing to attack the colonist and the rest of the world with modern day weapons and take over the world. that way the future will be run by them.

So USA and Europe come together to make a task force to go back into time and stop the COTDW. But the task force must seem like they are from the colonial times to not mess up the future.

Thats all I have for now... I'm wondering if i should have posted this in the Library... Oh well.

Peace out,
Spartan :)

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Please tell me what you think:)

Peace out,
Spartan

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You lookin' at me, boi?
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I like the general idea, really. I'd like to read more! (It sounds like an idea I had earlier)
It would also be a good idea to fix up your grammar. Never use a singular pronoun for a plural noun, or vise-versa.
All in all, I wish you good luck in completing the story!
(I'll also move this to the library for you)
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hey there. i'm surprised you're reading this. but you should get back to the forum. have fun :] youmu > meiling Beep beep boop