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CAVESTORY ATTEMPT; as seen in my avatar
Topic Started: Jun 19 2011, 03:35 AM (1,186 Views)
plasmi
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CRITIQUEBALL GOOOOOOO
Edited by plasmi, Jun 19 2011, 04:05 AM.
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i cant farksnarkling believe no one has commented on this
cmon dang people
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Masquerade
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I like the lineart.... BUT:
the scarfthing isn't that great, perhaps a few more wrinkles to show that it's a soft material and not a... gelatinous figure i suppose?
also you are using WAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYWYWEY too many colors dude. 26 colors, 9 for the scarf alone! Focus on making your colors contrast, and attempt to limit yourself to 5-10 depending on the size and your needs. You should also shade according to textures. Right now the hair is shaded like it's perfectly smooth, where irl it would be pretty stringy and prolly messy judging by the long string in the middle of his face (which would get really annoying, just sayin)
also it's pretty much completely and totally out of style from cavestory.
don't be offended or anything bro these are just things to consider, and even then they're not that hard to fix :0
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Jun 19 2011, 04:28 AM
I like the lineart.... BUT:
the scarfthing isn't that great, perhaps a few more wrinkles to show that it's a soft material and not a... gelatinous figure i suppose?
also you are using WAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYWYWEY too many colors dude. 26 colors, 9 for the scarf alone! Focus on making your colors contrast, and attempt to limit yourself to 5-10 depending on the size and your needs. You should also shade according to textures. Right now the hair is shaded like it's perfectly smooth, where irl it would be pretty stringy and prolly messy judging by the long string in the middle of his face (which would get really annoying, just sayin)
also it's pretty much completely and totally out of style from cavestory.
don't be offended or anything bro these are just things to consider, and even then they're not that hard to fix :0
well i didnt mean to make it completely cavestory i was just sayin cuz i made it while looking at solid snakes avatar
and wow i am using alot of colors. hold on ill try to fix that.
ill also try to fix the hair, but ill do that after i recolorize
~thanks for the critique and comment though
Edited by plasmi, Jun 19 2011, 04:33 AM.
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looks good, clothes could use some wrinkles though
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from 26 colors to 13. how is it now?
keeping original as avatar to show improvement
Edited by plasmi, Jun 19 2011, 04:45 AM.
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you lost depth when you removed some colors
don't be afraid to get creative, use some colors from the hair in to the scarf and scarf in to the hair
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Jun 19 2011, 04:56 AM
you lost depth when you removed some colors
don't be afraid to get creative, use some colors from the hair in to the scarf and scarf in to the hair
purple and gray?
gray and purple? how exactly will that work?
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Not really Cave Story style, just saying
too detailed
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OHOHO what about this?
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Edited by plasmi, Jun 19 2011, 05:08 AM.
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not what i meant at allllllllllll
i meant you could use some shades from each one while still retaining the color desired
also there are still some tiny little colors that don't really need to be there, e.g. the lines on the face could all be one color
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Jun 19 2011, 05:24 AM
not what i meant at allllllllllll
i meant you could use some shades from each one while still retaining the color desired
also there are still some tiny little colors that don't really need to be there, e.g. the lines on the face could all be one color
make the edit and show him. gosh.
your terminology isnt making sense.
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Jun 19 2011, 05:27 AM
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Jun 19 2011, 05:24 AM
not what i meant at allllllllllll
i meant you could use some shades from each one while still retaining the color desired
also there are still some tiny little colors that don't really need to be there, e.g. the lines on the face could all be one color
make the edit and show him. gosh.
your terminology isnt making sense.
fdsf asd fine jegus
hold on a little bit...
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sorry that nazma put that so harshly mk
but an example would be nice if you could give one, you dont have to though
also mk you have -9000something posts. thats like... UNDER 9000
Edited by plasmi, Jun 19 2011, 06:02 AM.
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i couldn't capture the poofiness i wanted for the scarfthing
however, i did edit the palette, dither the hair and reshade a few things...
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