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CAVESTORY ATTEMPT; as seen in my avatar
Topic Started: Jun 19 2011, 03:35 AM (1,188 Views)
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Raish
Jun 19 2011, 03:35 AM
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CRITIQUEBALL GOOOOOOO

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plasmi
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call me the necroposter
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thanks my friend. heres what i got from that. not really so sure about the dithering, but i really like what you did with the scarf. this okay?
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Jun 19 2011, 06:20 AM
thanks my friend. heres what i got from that. not really so sure about the dithering, but i really like what you did with the scarf. this okay?
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The lighter shading along the outline where it's darkest
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i suppose it's alright though the hair is still lacking texture :\
also @CJ: you're welcome :3c
Edited by Masquerade, Jun 19 2011, 06:26 AM.
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AAHAHAAHAHAHAHHAAAAA NAZMA THE SWORD IN YOUR AVATAR
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PyroBlade ftw
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made some finishing touches.
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good
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which one? WHICH ONE SHOULD I TA-A-AKE?
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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What's the difference between the two? (other than transparency)
Anyways, this is pretty good, now; but, as MK clearly said, lacks hair texture. It makes the hair look like metal. :V
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You have too many colours. 21 is far too many for this. I'll whip up an edit, hang on.

EDIT: Reduced to 14 colours (counting transparency), and cleaned up the sprite.
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Note: You don't always need eyebrows in your sprites. Sometimes, with the right shading and eye formation, you can get the expression across very easily.
Edited by Fishmuffin, Jun 19 2011, 01:12 PM.
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Hope rides alone ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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holy crap bro. alright ill see what i can do about that.
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the fresh new talent tcotl needs
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Okay the headphones are near invisible on that hair, you're going to need a different shade of grey
I know I'm not the first choice for heroics...and y'all've tried to kill me more than once. And, I don't fancy a single one of you at all. But... Actually, all that sounds pretty convincing. I wonder if Danger Mouse is on.
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this any better?
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there, 14 colors
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Fishmuffin
yeaaa gurl
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imo, it looks a lot better. In terms of colours, more is not always better. Sometimes less can make sprites look great whereas more would ruin it. I feel it has improved mostly in part of the palette change.
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Hope rides alone ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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