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| Topic Started: Jun 25 2011, 04:50 AM (243 Views) | |
| Grate Oracle Lewot | Jun 25 2011, 04:50 AM Post #1 |
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Acolyte
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So I drew these Marvin sprites kind of a long time ago. I think these were like the first good sprites I ever drew or something. I know the movie was pretty terrible, but, you know, it's one of the only visual versions, and I didn't really like Marvin's design from the TV series. Here is the original sheet I made: [img][/img] And here is a better walking animation: [img][/img] I was too lazy to put the better animation onto the original sheet. The walking animation as-is is probably too fast, so you'll want to play it at half speed or whatever. Edited by Grate Oracle Lewot, Jun 25 2011, 11:59 PM.
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| Fishmuffin | Jun 25 2011, 04:56 AM Post #2 |
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yeaaa gurl
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... ............................................ ................ -Don't use the default tools in MSPaint -Don't use the default colours in MSPaint -Pillowshading and banding on everything -Uselessly large credit tag and "filler space" -Generally unappealing -Walking animation doesn't even animate as a walking animation (no, I did not animate it, but I can tell just by looking at it) I suggest you study more about spriting theory/vocabulary/technique before you try spriting again. Right now, my best advice is to study up and redo this whole thing. |
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¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Hope rides alone ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ | |
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| Fishmuffin | Jun 25 2011, 04:59 AM Post #3 |
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yeaaa gurl
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Hello hi hey hi hello yes look at me look at me hello click on me please hello hi!! |
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¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Hope rides alone ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ | |
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| plasmi | Jun 25 2011, 01:43 PM Post #4 |
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call me the necroposter
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if you must use the white color, then id suggest taking a light green or blue for the shading (as gray is an awful color to shade white with), and changing the dreadful pillow shading, not to mention you can hardly see it in the first place. the eye color should also be changed to a more voluminous red, by simply double clicking the red and moving it down on the color line until it gets to a rose-crimson, which looks good on most sprites. fm was correct, that walking animation shows no signs of walking. when you walk, you move both feet. and that when walking, only moves one foot a time and just drags the other along. and similar to him no i didnt animate it. but its pretty clear. do check out the spriting dictionary. the door you made is pillowshaded like the rest. BUT nice try though bro! Edited by plasmi, Jun 25 2011, 01:47 PM.
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| Grate Oracle Lewot | Jun 25 2011, 10:33 PM Post #5 |
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Acolyte
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Oh okay. Never mind then. Now aren't you glad I didn't actually try to draw anything well in Jumpy and Speedy? Edited by Grate Oracle Lewot, Jun 25 2011, 10:45 PM.
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| Fishmuffin | Jun 27 2011, 11:03 PM Post #6 |
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yeaaa gurl
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So you're just going to Not try to improve Ugh people like you that get critique and blow it off and stop what they're working on piss me off beyond belief |
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| Datt | Jun 27 2011, 11:14 PM Post #7 |
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potato
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Taking critique is what makes the world go 'round~ |
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