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ace sprites again
Topic Started: Jun 25 2011, 03:24 PM (475 Views)
plasmi
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so, i dunno. is it good? what should i fix
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Fishmuffin
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From what I can see, it's very nice; however, it has a slew of jagged lines. Some of the shading doesn't make sense, either; particularly on the legs. The center of his jacket-vest thing is off center with his body, it should center along with everything else.
Aside from that, your colour choice is superb.
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plasmi
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this any better? i fixed the leg shading and aligned his shirt.
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how do i fix the jagged lines?

anyway thanks fm
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Fishmuffin
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Raish
Jun 25 2011, 06:58 PM
this any better? i fixed the leg shading and aligned his shirt.
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how do i fix the jagged lines?

anyway thanks fm
That looks better.
As for the jagged lines, just look at the line. Does it flow smoothly? Is it "broken"? If so, fiddle around with it until it looks right.
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John
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I dont think the wings fit very good.
other wise, very nice.
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only the finest
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Vespara
Jun 25 2011, 09:55 PM
I dont think the wings fit very good.
other wise, very nice.
*I don't think the wings look right with the rest of the body
Otherwise, very nice.

There, fixed the spelling and grammar for you. No need to thank me.
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Tyler
Jun 26 2011, 12:34 AM
Vespara
Jun 25 2011, 09:55 PM
I dont think the wings fit very good.
other wise, very nice.
*I don't think the wings look right with the rest of the body
Otherwise, very nice.

There, fixed the spelling and grammar for you. No need to thank me.
Ok, we won't thank you for being overly concerned with grammar on the internet.
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Doc
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KatanaMeister
Jun 26 2011, 01:18 AM
Tyler
Jun 26 2011, 12:34 AM
Vespara
Jun 25 2011, 09:55 PM
I dont think the wings fit very good.
other wise, very nice.
*I don't think the wings look right with the rest of the body
Otherwise, very nice.

There, fixed the spelling and grammar for you. No need to thank me.
Ok, we won't thank you for being overly concerned with grammar on the internet.
i will
thank you stunfisk the grammar police
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Tyler
Jun 26 2011, 12:34 AM
Vespara
Jun 25 2011, 09:55 PM
I dont think the wings fit very good.
other wise, very nice.
*I don't think the wings look right with the rest of the body
Otherwise, very nice.

There, fixed the spelling and grammar for you. No need to thank me.
you forgot the period

i like your signature
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Fishmuffin
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Guys stop being assholes just because he corrected some prepubecent drone's grammar
Now all of you get on topic before I get into this
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plasmi
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john you just dont like that raish has wings because of your own opinions. i respect that, but no im not going to change it. were judging the sprite, not the character design here bro. anyway, i made it sticker-looking mode, just like that old ripura sprite. i think this makes it look a lot better, dont you?
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Fishmuffin
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Raish
Jun 26 2011, 02:32 AM
john you just dont like that raish has wings because of your own opinions. i respect that, but no im not going to change it. were judging the sprite, not the character design here bro. anyway, i made it sticker-looking mode, just like that old ripura sprite. i think this makes it look a lot better, dont you?
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It certainly stands out from tCotL's bg!
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Espejo
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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Not if you're using glossy yellow! so yes it does stand out

It's a pretty good sprite, can't wait for the animations!
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Espejo
Jun 26 2011, 02:37 AM
Not if you're using glossy yellow! so yes it does stand out

It's a pretty good sprite, can't wait for the animations!
who can even stand the intense yellow of that theme
I can't.
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looks nice
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