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Topic Started: Aug 13 2011, 09:43 PM (928 Views)
plasmi
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now ya may say.. "ace ya've been drawing chibis only and youre gonna become a weaboo who only draws chibi and never improves bluh bluh"
but you see, i have only been drawing chibi... on computer. i have advanced in my real life sketches.
anyway yeah, critique it and such
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that expression
sdfsfs adorable
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The shininess... It makes no sense! It's all over the place and makes him look like metal/plastic.
Otherwise it be cutsie.
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well his shorts are shiny, i just dont see how its all over the place. its all on the left side of the object/section except on his hair, and thats just style, see my signature.

all of the purple parts ARE shiny, not like metallic or sparkly just a bit shiny
Edited by plasmi, Aug 14 2011, 12:35 AM.
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your shading is still all over the place
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plasmi
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please help me understand how it is all over the place.
hair- to the left and a bit on the right because its low
face- hair is casting shadow over face and the rest is to the left
shirt- to the left
arm- shows that sleeve casts shadow over arm
shorts- to the left
legs- shows that short casts shadow over leg
shoes- to the left
headphones- to the left
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well first

where is the lightsource coming from exactly

I would guess and say our upper right but you're the one that drew it
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yeah your guess is right
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I'm not very good at drawing/spriting and all
but I think this is what he means
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Not very informative but yeah, it may help.
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plasmi
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chupacabra
Aug 14 2011, 01:05 AM
I'm not very good at drawing/spriting and all
but I think this is what he means
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Not very informative but yeah, it may help.
welp, dont see any reason why not to
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thanks chup my friend
also i swear if i come back from posting this and someone has posted "inb4 he ignores it" im gonna be pissed

edit- yay, no one posted an inb4
Edited by plasmi, Aug 14 2011, 01:10 AM.
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I circled the main problems

You'll probably complain and continue with the excuse that the purple is shiny anyway but I circled them anyway

At least take a look at the other parts, such as the wing and the hair. Highlights on the side furthest away from the lightsource doesn't make sense at all and the wing is being blocked by the body/head and shouldn't have that much highlighting

Light to the circled arm is also being blocked by the body, so it should be shaded.

and while this doesn't really have to do with shading, the skin colors you chose are a bit pale v:

EDIT: Follow chup's post for the general area in the blue circle.
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eh
i think it looks good
the light source may be coming from a pond, or something below it.
but the dark shading is where the light shading is supposed to be, if that were the case. the shading on different spots are switched.
otherwise, I kind of like the chibi style, so keep going for it.
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looks good bro :o)
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wait wait, datt, what all in your edit did i not fix in the new version
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like serious question, not sarcastic or angry toned, just like question toned
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well, the wing and the hair
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