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| Topic Started: Aug 13 2011, 09:43 PM (929 Views) | |
| plasmi | Aug 14 2011, 01:43 AM Post #16 |
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call me the necroposter
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| plasmi | Aug 14 2011, 12:04 PM Post #17 |
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![]() hey look a sticker outline |
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| Demonlemon | Aug 14 2011, 03:24 PM Post #18 |
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MY CHILDREN COMETH
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looks better to me |
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| plasmi | Aug 14 2011, 04:36 PM Post #19 |
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![]() AHAHAHAHA AHAHA AHAHAHAHAAHAHA |
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| Datt | Aug 14 2011, 04:53 PM Post #20 |
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potato
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looks good |
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| plasmi | Aug 14 2011, 05:29 PM Post #21 |
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![]() ignore the metalicness im sorry but i reallly like the shinyness so please dont critique it but as far as the general shading goes, what can i fix? |
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| Tyler | Aug 14 2011, 05:50 PM Post #22 |
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only the finest
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I wish I had an image to successfully display how hard I facepalm'd at that statement. |
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| plasmi | Aug 14 2011, 05:57 PM Post #23 |
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i just dont see anything wrong with it |
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| chupacabra | Aug 14 2011, 10:54 PM Post #24 |
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I'm not paranoid, no matter what they're saying about me~
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*sigh*... look the shinyness is ok IF you put it in the right places also you should really try listening to people when they critique you (btw part of listening to people critique you is actually trying what they say, Just Say'n) |
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| Masquerade | Aug 14 2011, 11:08 PM Post #25 |
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boy howdy
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shininess makes things change texture, they seem more rubbery and fake |
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| plasmi | Aug 15 2011, 12:35 AM Post #26 |
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but... ive actually been accepting critique lately like really so that comment was mildly unnecessary but uh, okay, then where should i take away the shine |
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| Datt | Aug 15 2011, 12:37 AM Post #27 |
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potato
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well uh, cloth doesn't really shine so Hair doesn't either |
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| plasmi | Aug 15 2011, 12:38 AM Post #28 |
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so take away the shine on the boob and the bosom and on the top of the hair? |
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| Mewizkuit | Aug 15 2011, 05:31 AM Post #29 |
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Don't worry, I can fix your drawing for you!![]() There. NOW it's art. In all seriousness, removing the shines from the character altogether and leaving the image how it currently is otherwise is probably what everyone is asking to see. I tried it myself, and it does make the image look far more "solid", for lack of a better word (I didn't post the edit because I expected you'd prefer to do it yourself). I did notice that the shine on the headband seems to fit well, probably because of how it forms more like a reverse shadow (which you might feel like adding; reverse shadows (I'm making that term up, it's probably wrong) showing an area where more light is appearing on the object is fine, just make sure it fits onto the shape in a similar way to a shadow rather than just being a blob of light) and how rigid it is, making the hairband look more metallic (whether or not you intended that I don't know). As previously mentioned, the current shines you have elsewhere on your image make everything look gelatin-like and rubbery. If she's wearing rubber clothing and her hair is made of ConcentratedJuice's blue twin brother, then everything's in order here. PS: I mean no malice in this post, I'm just trying to help. I understand if I'm not the best person to be taking advice from in this field, since my art skills are inferior to yours and I rarely shade my drawings, but at least look over what I've said and see what makes sense to you. |
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| Espejo | Aug 15 2011, 07:47 AM Post #30 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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Wouldn't surprise me if they were for Cresci. /jk |
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