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| Topic Started: Oct 11 2011, 01:35 AM (221 Views) | |
| Doc | Oct 11 2011, 01:35 AM Post #1 |
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jizz-cuzzi
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Here's a song i made. http://www.4shared.com/audio/IrlQDhoR/Jump_For_Mankind.html? i would appreciate if you listened to the entire thing, and some +CC/-CC would be nice. |
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| Masquerade | Oct 11 2011, 02:07 AM Post #2 |
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boy howdy
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ok so not much movement really, it'd be nice to branch away from the arpeggio (that said it's a good arp at the beginning) it's cool for a base for something, but it needs more - perhaps the addition of a bass line or some other accompianing instruments (i only heard three instruments and a drumset maybe?) could help flesh this out |
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| Tyler | Oct 11 2011, 03:44 AM Post #3 |
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only the finest
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sounds neat not much else to say about it really, but then again I don't know how to critique muziks at all so |
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| Kakkelin | Oct 11 2011, 08:31 PM Post #4 |
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the fresh new talent tcotl needs
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As much of a sucker as I am for basic C-D chord progressions, there isn't much going on in here. That synthy arpeggio gets on your nerves really fast, to the point where it starts to feel like a shitty Cheap Trick song where you can't focus on anything but those goddamn aimless synth loops!!! C-D-Em is a pretty solid progression if you want to do something different with it. |
| I know I'm not the first choice for heroics...and y'all've tried to kill me more than once. And, I don't fancy a single one of you at all. But... Actually, all that sounds pretty convincing. I wonder if Danger Mouse is on. | |
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| Doc | Oct 11 2011, 10:17 PM Post #5 |
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it's background music, btw, like world or level music thanks for the crits anyway. |
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| Doc | Feb 2 2012, 01:50 AM Post #6 |
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BIG POOPS LOLOLOLOLOOLOLOLOL (DOC IS GONNA KILL ME) My name is Doc and somehow my friend was able to hack onto my account and do this and basically he farksnarkleed it up and posted a bunch of stupid stuff. See you in school. ^^ |
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