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Pompi's Song; New song
Topic Started: Nov 7 2011, 04:00 AM (376 Views)
John
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This is a WIP theme for a new song that is upcoming on my new album "Rebirth" - it is titled that because it is the first release in a long time.

Please critique.

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Masquerade
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the rhythms at the beginning made absolutely no sense and the violin melody was difficult to listen to
that said the rhythms at bar 9 were fine and i really like the marimba melody
the melodies in general in this song seem to have the tendency to not give out a full-blown idea -- they dont linger long enough to be understood fully and seem to be a bit afraid of staying too long (at least, that's what i'd chalk it up to.)
i think at the beginning you were going for something more like this?
http://www.box.net/shared/mcjxlcueusfldy5c1pnd

please excuse my horribly mashed up crit. tired. hope it helped.
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Two questions: who is Pompi

And is that a synthesized ACCORDION???
I know I'm not the first choice for heroics...and y'all've tried to kill me more than once. And, I don't fancy a single one of you at all. But... Actually, all that sounds pretty convincing. I wonder if Danger Mouse is on.
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John
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Pompi is a fictional character created by Ace.
PAHM-PEE

And its mostly Strings and Vibes..
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Pompi is the main protagonist of an audio series titled the "Pompi Story."
His goal is to find a girlfriend, but it is very difficult. He first goes out with Pompia. But she is a pervert. He breaks up with her. He then goes out with Pompaya. She has constipation problems and screams on the toilet. Then, Pompette. She was really fat though, and he ended up getting absorbed into her butt.
In each episode of Pompi, he is beat up. It is his main quality.

I will post the 8 episode Pompi Story if you all wish it.


anyway this song is pretty beast dude, sounds battlish
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Kakkelin
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@ace: what

I'm just sayin, Nazma, an accordion part would sound really cool here
I know I'm not the first choice for heroics...and y'all've tried to kill me more than once. And, I don't fancy a single one of you at all. But... Actually, all that sounds pretty convincing. I wonder if Danger Mouse is on.
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Nov 8 2011, 02:23 AM
Pompi is the main protagonist of an audio series titled the "Pompi Story."
His goal is to find a girlfriend, but it is very difficult. He first goes out with Pompia. But she is a pervert. He breaks up with her. He then goes out with Pompaya. She has constipation problems and screams on the toilet. Then, Pompette. She was really fat though, and he ended up getting absorbed into her butt.
In each episode of Pompi, he is beat up. It is his main quality.

I will post the 8 episode Pompi Story if you all wish it.


anyway this song is pretty beast dude, sounds battlish
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Well, that song was a bit odd - alright, I guess.
The only thing I could tell was that the melody and intro violins were all over the place - I couldn't keep up with the song. :(
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Nov 7 2011, 04:31 AM
difficult to listen to
how i'd describe it
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More being added. I am currently working on a new writing project...literature.
This will slowly be fixed and added onto and crap.
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Ryuzaki
Nov 11 2011, 08:48 PM
More being added. I am currently working on a new writing project...literature.
This will slowly be fixed and added onto and crap.
you better not add on to this crap
it's too much
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