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| Doc | Feb 2 2012, 02:20 AM Post #16 |
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Griffen, i will litterally f*ck you up tomorrow |
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| Doc | Feb 2 2012, 02:23 AM Post #17 |
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nopenopenope sorry, it was Kyle You will be the one who is in the world of pain |
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| Kakkelin | Feb 2 2012, 02:29 AM Post #18 |
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the fresh new talent tcotl needs
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He edited your signature too. I bet the website he got it from was really shitty! ...the joke was that he got the image from Ebaumsworld, not that it's an actual picture of a shit. |
| I know I'm not the first choice for heroics...and y'all've tried to kill me more than once. And, I don't fancy a single one of you at all. But... Actually, all that sounds pretty convincing. I wonder if Danger Mouse is on. | |
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| Doc | Jun 8 2013, 12:05 AM Post #19 |
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Haven't posted here in a while Since my tablet broke; guess i'll be doing more music stuff. https://www.box.com/s/uqww090ry7ik1qi6l4jb I know it's repetivie; this was more of a sound quality test then anything |
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| Datt | Jun 8 2013, 08:44 AM Post #20 |
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it's extremely quiet.. sounds pretty nice though, would work wonderful before the melody kicks in or the chorus or something |
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| Doc | Jun 16 2013, 03:44 PM Post #21 |
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https://soundcloud.com/lorddocimus/mfgg-musiccomp-2 boom pow more repetitive shit |
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| Kakkelin | Jun 16 2013, 03:48 PM Post #22 |
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I do like it, but it's a bit repetitive. I spent most of the second half of the song expecting some high-pitched flutey part to kick in. |
| I know I'm not the first choice for heroics...and y'all've tried to kill me more than once. And, I don't fancy a single one of you at all. But... Actually, all that sounds pretty convincing. I wonder if Danger Mouse is on. | |
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| Doc | Jun 16 2013, 08:10 PM Post #23 |
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It wasn't supposed to be a full length song; it was just a character theme for a music competition. But yeah; I agree. most of the songs I make nowadays are rushed, to the point where They feel like something is missing. |
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| Datt | Jun 16 2013, 10:15 PM Post #24 |
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needs some sort of melody imo, that'd help curb the repetitive feeling |
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| Doc | Jun 28 2013, 06:11 PM Post #25 |
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https://soundcloud.com/lorddocimus/pigment-great-library thing |
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| Demonlemon | Jul 1 2013, 01:30 AM Post #26 |
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MY CHILDREN COMETH
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Pigment - Somewhat repetitive song is somewhat repetitive |
| Happiness is like wetting yourself, everyone can see it, but only you can feel the warmth. | |
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| Doc | Jul 9 2013, 10:30 PM Post #27 |
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https://soundcloud.com/lorddocimus/point-of-progression |
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| John | Jul 10 2013, 04:19 AM Post #28 |
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The song is pretty basic and has a very wild structure. It sounds like it consists of drums, electric guitar (which really sounds like static), and a square synth. The drums could be more flavorful as all they do through most of the piece is kick on 1 and snare on 2. The melody is really boring and nothing really special about it. I would put an EQ on that guitar cause you really can't tell what the hell it's doing. All the synth really does is repeat some dissonant off-key notes and randomly arpeggiate. I would look into these. Oh and by the way, "Point Of Progression" needs to become "Point of Progression." You don't capitalize prepositions in titles. Hope this helps, mate.
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| Doc | Jul 18 2013, 10:54 PM Post #29 |
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thx mate I hope you realize music is just a side hobby of mine, and I don't plan on going professional or big-time or anything like that Thanks for the advice anyway, I really do appreciate it. I do understand what I did wrong, but the problem was the old WIP I was working with was a .MP3, not a .FLP. So I couldn't mess around with indv. instuments. which sucked. Anyway; here's 2 things i'm hoping to complete: https://soundcloud.com/lorddocimus/prompt-crunchy-work-in https://soundcloud.com/lorddocimus/chiptunewip |
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| Kakkelin | Jul 20 2013, 06:56 PM Post #30 |
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Crunchy sounds REALLY COOL. I imagine that if I were listening to this with headphones it would sound killer. I'm not sure what effects make it sound like it's sort of drifting in an out of existence or summat but they're cool. Chiptune is not so great. It sounds like a bunch of tracks that would be individually amazing but they just sound awful put together. Point of Progression is cool. |
| I know I'm not the first choice for heroics...and y'all've tried to kill me more than once. And, I don't fancy a single one of you at all. But... Actually, all that sounds pretty convincing. I wonder if Danger Mouse is on. | |
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