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Datt makes music again
Topic Started: Mar 16 2012, 02:51 AM (1,076 Views)
plasmi
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farksnarkle that was excellent
I'm going through your whole SoundCloud profile right now. You really have some great stuff! I did not know of any of this earlier!
Edited by plasmi, Mar 18 2012, 05:41 PM.
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http://soundcloud.com/wiaa/the-adventure-begins

Still needs some fixing, quite a few notes are misplaced and sound pretty off
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Holy farksnarkling mess. This is amazing! I really need to start using my SoundCloud profile :V
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Sounds cool, cant wait for the finished version
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composition's not bad, although there's not really much going on. the guitar solo at 1.50 ish is very good. the arpeggiation at 2.30 ish is pretty ok, though it would be better if it were quieter.
mixing needs work. you're drowning out EVERYTHING with those guitars and drums. for that matter, try not to make them TOO loud until they have the melody. (by that i mean, don't let the harmony be as loud or louder than the melody, but don't let the melody hide the harmony)

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its good
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As far as that, is this any better? http://soundcloud.com/wiaa/so-it-begins
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The panflute or whatever that is that comes in at 0:25ish needs to be louder.
Also, the guitar still needs to be a bit more softer. When you look in your mixer, make sure NOTHING is in the red. Red is never good.
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May 10 2012, 12:08 AM
EDIT -
The panflute or whatever that is that comes in at 0:25ish needs to be louder.
Also, the guitar still needs to be a bit more softer. When you look in your mixer, make sure NOTHING is in the red. Red is never good.
Nothing's in red, or even close to it

I'll see what I can do though!
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definitely better, though honestly the melody is still a tad boring
i think for a song like this some sixteenth runs would fit pretty well, especially if you add them with the woodwinds to accent your guitar melody
also do you have any bass? I can't tell because I'm not wearing my headphones but it doesn't really sound like you do
again, be VERY careful you don't overrun the orchestral elements with the rock elements. this is VERY VERY easy to do, you just gotta crank up those orchestrations and tone down the rock.
btw, what program do you use?
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May 10 2012, 02:50 AM
definitely better, though honestly the melody is still a tad boring
i think for a song like this some sixteenth runs would fit pretty well, especially if you add them with the woodwinds to accent your guitar melody
also do you have any bass? I can't tell because I'm not wearing my headphones but it doesn't really sound like you do
again, be VERY careful you don't overrun the orchestral elements with the rock elements. this is VERY VERY easy to do, you just gotta crank up those orchestrations and tone down the rock.
btw, what program do you use?
Well alright! And yes there's bass, it's pretty easy to notice with headphones. And yeah, I'll work on that!

FL Studio 10, btw :3
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May 10 2012, 12:12 AM
Nazma
May 10 2012, 12:08 AM
EDIT -
The panflute or whatever that is that comes in at 0:25ish needs to be louder.
Also, the guitar still needs to be a bit more softer. When you look in your mixer, make sure NOTHING is in the red. Red is never good.
Nothing's in red, or even close to it

I'll see what I can do though!
Okay good!
When people mix they leave stuff in the red because of it not being loud enough.
Loudness and dynamics gets fixed during mastering.

How I produce:
Composing > Mixing > Mastering

Can't wait for some new stuff!
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Pretty sweet! You seem to be making some really good songs, now.
Here's my critique:
. The flute is probably a bit too quiet, it can be a bit hard to notice.
. The rhythm guitar could probably use some more detachment - right now the rhythm seems to blend and not be too clear.
. The splash cymbal at about 2.45 is a bit quiet and is annoying right in the centre. I would move it to the left, peronally.
. I don't know if it's just me, but it gets a bit boring after a little bit, maybe try changing the beat up or changing the key or something.

All in all, pretty rad - keep up the good work, mate!
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http://soundcloud.com/wiaa/lost-melodies

boredom
not really mixed but eh
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