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Carnivals; New piece
Topic Started: May 2 2012, 02:51 AM (172 Views)
John
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I have submitted this piece to be reviewed for publishing with Row-Loff.

This piece is titled "Carnivals."
Written in Sibelius 7, default sound system.
Percussion ensemble. 100% original.

https://www.box.com/s/ab666c9059f50dd5a769

Listen with the link above.

Instrumentation:
Snares
Tenors
Basses
Cymbals
Glockenspiel
Xylophone
Vibraphone 1
Vibraphone 2
Marimba 1
Marimba 2
Timpani

Any critique would be nice.
Thanks.
JB
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Espejo
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That was alright. I don't if it's just me, but it seems all over the place - it doesn't really seem to have any form, just random parts being played at random times. Some of the parts are catchy, but they seem to play for about 5 seconds then disappear forever... Really, it's just a bit too unpredictable.
However, I do believe if some sort of form is added, it has the makings of a really fun, catchy song.
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very chaotic, lots of great little parts glued together randomly
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Cool sound
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I like the fast drums. But maybe layer the jingly tune that's between them OVER the drums, rather than pausing between.
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