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| Topic Started: May 2 2012, 02:51 AM (172 Views) | |
| John | May 2 2012, 02:51 AM Post #1 |
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I have submitted this piece to be reviewed for publishing with Row-Loff. This piece is titled "Carnivals." Written in Sibelius 7, default sound system. Percussion ensemble. 100% original. https://www.box.com/s/ab666c9059f50dd5a769 Listen with the link above. Instrumentation: Snares Tenors Basses Cymbals Glockenspiel Xylophone Vibraphone 1 Vibraphone 2 Marimba 1 Marimba 2 Timpani Any critique would be nice. Thanks. JB |
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| Espejo | May 2 2012, 10:34 AM Post #2 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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That was alright. I don't if it's just me, but it seems all over the place - it doesn't really seem to have any form, just random parts being played at random times. Some of the parts are catchy, but they seem to play for about 5 seconds then disappear forever... Really, it's just a bit too unpredictable. However, I do believe if some sort of form is added, it has the makings of a really fun, catchy song. |
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| Demonlemon | May 2 2012, 05:21 PM Post #3 |
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MY CHILDREN COMETH
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very chaotic, lots of great little parts glued together randomly |
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| Yoshin | May 2 2012, 07:21 PM Post #4 |
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Lvl 17 Kakuna
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Cool sound |
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| JuicyJuice | May 3 2012, 05:18 AM Post #5 |
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Super Sexy Stoner Surfer Station
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I like the fast drums. But maybe layer the jingly tune that's between them OVER the drums, rather than pausing between. |
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