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Topic Started: May 31 2012, 08:01 PM (1,886 Views)
Espejo
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It's alright. A bit repetitive is all, and the starting back synths don't really fit in.
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John
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Those are to make a more disconnected feel
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Masquerade
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well... that was incredibly short and repetitive.
you use garage band, right?
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Espejo
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Nazma
Jun 13 2012, 02:27 PM
Those are to make a more disconnected feel
Still doesn't mean it makes it sound good.
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John
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Ambient music I'm working on. The mixing levels aren't great, but still.

http://soundcloud.com/soundscape-elegance/jungle-whispering
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Masquerade
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its a bit loud to be ambient. the composition is good if not short. you're right about the mixing, it's not very good at all and really thats the thing thats making this piece go down the drain. if you expanded it and worked on the mixing it'd be good.
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plasmi
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Strings are a bit loud at the beginning
Otherwise, my incredibly small knowledge of how music is supposed to work sees nothing wrong with it. Sounds nice.
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Yeah thanks for the input guys, I am going to work on adjusting the levels for all of the different tracks for it to flow better.
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http://soundcloud.com/soundscape-elegance/friday-nights
A song I wrote to describe my inner feelings about Friday nights.
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Masquerade
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love the synth at the start
those pads at the beginning feel really off
very repetitive
the main movement is in the percussion - try moving everything else too.
yeah! not much to say about this piece.
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Jun 25 2012, 07:26 PM
love the synth at the start
those pads at the beginning feel really off
very repetitive
the main movement is in the percussion - try moving everything else too.
yeah! not much to say about this piece.
I realize they sound off because of the intense echo and reverb I put on the opening synth. I am going to try to fix this.
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plasmi
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What MK said, pretty much. Very nice, though!
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New little song. Its repetitive. I know. This was a synth crafting project. These are all new synths I made.

http://soundcloud.com/soundscape-elegance/as-you-sail-the-open-air-demo
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Quite crowded, isn't it? The drums and background synths that come in around 0:21 sort of make the piece sound messy, to me.
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Masquerade
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the panning on this isn't exactly tasteful
dont like those pizz samples you used or the panned claps
love the drums on this.
not much else to say
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