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| Espejo | Jun 13 2012, 10:19 AM Post #16 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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It's alright. A bit repetitive is all, and the starting back synths don't really fit in. |
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| John | Jun 13 2012, 02:27 PM Post #17 |
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Those are to make a more disconnected feel |
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| Masquerade | Jun 14 2012, 12:57 AM Post #18 |
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boy howdy
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well... that was incredibly short and repetitive. you use garage band, right? |
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| Espejo | Jun 14 2012, 08:08 AM Post #19 |
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Still doesn't mean it makes it sound good. |
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| John | Jun 19 2012, 03:19 AM Post #20 |
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Ambient music I'm working on. The mixing levels aren't great, but still. http://soundcloud.com/soundscape-elegance/jungle-whispering |
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| Masquerade | Jun 19 2012, 04:00 AM Post #21 |
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boy howdy
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its a bit loud to be ambient. the composition is good if not short. you're right about the mixing, it's not very good at all and really thats the thing thats making this piece go down the drain. if you expanded it and worked on the mixing it'd be good. |
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| plasmi | Jun 19 2012, 04:05 AM Post #22 |
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call me the necroposter
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Strings are a bit loud at the beginning Otherwise, my incredibly small knowledge of how music is supposed to work sees nothing wrong with it. Sounds nice. |
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| John | Jun 19 2012, 01:38 PM Post #23 |
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Yeah thanks for the input guys, I am going to work on adjusting the levels for all of the different tracks for it to flow better. |
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| John | Jun 25 2012, 06:48 PM Post #24 |
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http://soundcloud.com/soundscape-elegance/friday-nights A song I wrote to describe my inner feelings about Friday nights. |
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| Masquerade | Jun 25 2012, 07:26 PM Post #25 |
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boy howdy
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love the synth at the start those pads at the beginning feel really off very repetitive the main movement is in the percussion - try moving everything else too. yeah! not much to say about this piece. |
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| John | Jun 25 2012, 08:09 PM Post #26 |
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I realize they sound off because of the intense echo and reverb I put on the opening synth. I am going to try to fix this. |
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| plasmi | Jun 26 2012, 12:51 AM Post #27 |
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What MK said, pretty much. Very nice, though! |
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| John | Jul 7 2012, 08:48 PM Post #28 |
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New little song. Its repetitive. I know. This was a synth crafting project. These are all new synths I made. http://soundcloud.com/soundscape-elegance/as-you-sail-the-open-air-demo |
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| plasmi | Jul 8 2012, 01:12 AM Post #29 |
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Quite crowded, isn't it? The drums and background synths that come in around 0:21 sort of make the piece sound messy, to me. |
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| Masquerade | Jul 8 2012, 01:41 AM Post #30 |
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the panning on this isn't exactly tasteful dont like those pizz samples you used or the panned claps love the drums on this. not much else to say |
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