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| JB Tries Orchestral Music Again; Here I go | |
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| Topic Started: Dec 2 2012, 07:45 PM (150 Views) | |
| John | Dec 2 2012, 07:45 PM Post #1 |
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So I tried coming back to orchestral music after a nice long break. This piece is called "Rise" http://soundcloud.com/jb-producer/rise Peace. |
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| plasmi | Dec 2 2012, 08:28 PM Post #2 |
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call me the necroposter
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This is p great! |
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| Espejo | Dec 3 2012, 06:25 AM Post #3 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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Funnily enough, I just got back into orchestral music, too. Anyway, it's a good foundation for a song, but I don't think you pulled it off very well. It's very repetitive for a start and lacks movement - it sounds like something that would repeat in a video game for about 10 seconds, but you really drew it out. You may want to try to bring out the melody, and change it up instead of keeping it flat for the duration, too. |
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