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| Topic Started: Jan 2 2013, 07:52 PM (757 Views) | |
| John | Jan 2 2013, 07:52 PM Post #1 |
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Hey everyone. Sorry to bombard you guys with all these different topics of my techno/dubstep music. This will be the last one for a while I will make. As you people might have seen, I have started making dubstep/trance music in the past few months. I, personally, think I have improved greatly. I wanted to get some of your opinions on it. MK always reminded me of how bad I needed to improve on mixing. Art Here are some previews of my newest songs (WIP): Fury From Within (WIP) No Regrets (WIP) Thanks -Reakt- Edited by John, Jan 2 2013, 07:53 PM.
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| John | Jan 2 2013, 11:24 PM Post #2 |
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Bump Updated the art. |
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| plasmi | Jan 3 2013, 12:48 AM Post #3 |
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call me the necroposter
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Fury From Within: The intro tones don't match very well, and aren't exactly pleasing to the ear, imo (not to mention the Sburban Jungle resemblance). But after the beginning, it's pretty great dubstep. No Regrets: I really love this. Excellent job. |
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| Datt | Jan 3 2013, 05:24 AM Post #4 |
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Fury from Within: The intro background string/pad thing sounds really off after the second note and doesn't match the rest That buildup is overused in pretty much all of your dubstep songs and generic overall Feels really repetitive Sounds really generic..there's nothing special about it. It's like I'm listening to any other dubstep song really No Regrets is really nice though, I don't have anything to say about it! |
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| Espejo | Jan 3 2013, 11:25 AM Post #5 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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The title sounds a bit like reeked as in smell... idk. Anyway onto the songs! Fury from Within: As the others said, the 3rd and 4th chords of the intro progression are off! 1 4 5, my friend! Also it sounds really generic and not very exciting to listen to as it sounds like every other dubstep song ever. Also nice string samples. No Regrets: The beat for the first few seconds sounds a bit off - like somebody's forgetting their cue and getting it wrong. Other than that, it's pretty nice but a little repetitive. |
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| Tyler | Jan 3 2013, 09:45 PM Post #6 |
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only the finest
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I thought that at first too, but I think it's supposed to be like "react." Only with a "k." |
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| Espejo | Jan 3 2013, 11:44 PM Post #7 |
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You lookin' at me, boi?
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Ah, that makes more sense. Cheers. |
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| Doc | Jan 4 2013, 01:49 AM Post #8 |
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jizz-cuzzi
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VST's plz thx bro <3 |
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| John | Jan 4 2013, 06:33 AM Post #9 |
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This ^ Thanks for the critique guys. Check back on this topic in a few months when I give some news on the first EP. |
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| John | Jan 18 2013, 09:44 PM Post #10 |
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A new track in the works! A Drum'n'Bass style song! https://soundcloud.com/reaktofficial-1/race-for-survival-preview |
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| Doc | Jan 19 2013, 12:04 AM Post #11 |
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jizz-cuzzi
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sorry, but it sounds pretty boring, and basic. some unpredictable notes and arpeggios would be nice. but otherwise, the drum beat's pretty good, but I hear no bass besides the chorus! |
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| Datt | Jan 19 2013, 12:57 AM Post #12 |
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The chord progression is a bit boring/generic/repetitive The melody sounds off at moments Drum beat is pretty cool though |
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| Kakkelin | Jan 19 2013, 08:19 PM Post #13 |
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the fresh new talent tcotl needs
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I never mentioned this, but No Regrets is really cool. The dubsteppy whoosh whoosh type parts are in moderation, the synth sounds cool, the beat is engaging, the main riff is memorable, there are some really fun high parts... really really good. A+. I just had a great idea. You should write a song with a long dubstep buildup, then follow it up with a banjo solo. That would be pretty rad, don't lie. |
| I know I'm not the first choice for heroics...and y'all've tried to kill me more than once. And, I don't fancy a single one of you at all. But... Actually, all that sounds pretty convincing. I wonder if Danger Mouse is on. | |
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| John | Jan 30 2013, 11:05 PM Post #14 |
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https://soundcloud.com/reaktofficial-1 "EXCITE!" |
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| Kakkelin | Jan 31 2013, 02:19 AM Post #15 |
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the fresh new talent tcotl needs
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I like the riff at the beginning! It's really fun. The reggae sort of clashes with the dubstep, but the fusion between the two sounds interesting rather than dissonant. |
| I know I'm not the first choice for heroics...and y'all've tried to kill me more than once. And, I don't fancy a single one of you at all. But... Actually, all that sounds pretty convincing. I wonder if Danger Mouse is on. | |
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