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vanir90210	Mar 23 2009, 04:09 PM
Budding Lyricist Posts: 2,792 Group: Member Member #394 Joined: May 19, 2008	A few mistakes, mostly only like capitalizing letters where you shouldn't have, and that kind of thing. But you did say, 'he drunk some water,' whereas it should have been 'drank'. Otherwise, quite an interesting story.
	Spoiler: click to toggle "I look at the eyes, straight to the soul doorway" Redsrock Dammit, Vanir...... I had an awesome daydream of me and Anne Hathaway on a private island. And then in the daydream you came in and murdered her, then asking for my hand in marriage.

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