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Old Fan-fic; Old, and pretty crappy
Topic Started: Nov 17 2008, 05:43 PM (48 Views)
poochie_d1	Nov 17 2008, 05:43 PM Post #1
B Dawggy Dawg Posts: 2,844 Group: Member Member #78 Joined: December 13, 2007	I posted this back before the forums were wiped, it was my first fan-fic. I haven't written anything really since, but I'm hoping to start again soon. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bragor sprinted through the leafy forest, unsure if his pursuers were still chasing him. Branches slap him in the face and the sticks and the leaves on the forest floor made loud crunches or snaps as his feet pounded the ground. He was caught trying to steal a ruby necklace from a wealthy Imperial's home, but after being seen by a lowly servant, the guards had given chase and he escaped into the forest. His breathing began to get deeper as he laboured on until, suddenly, he fell through the forest floor into a small pit that tossed him deep down, his vision darkening as the sunlight grew farther away and darkness enveloped him. All of a sudden, Bragor landed with a small thump into a soft pile of oddly shaped, foul-smelling objects. He tried to get free of them, and when he finally reached the edge of the pile, he realized that he was caged in. He was about to yell for help when a small, flickering light came into view from down the cavern. He heard soft voices, he couldn't understand what they were saying, but he didn't like the sound of them; they were evil voices. The flickering light got closer and closer, and it turned into several flickering lights, hooded men and mer carrying torches and wearing dark robes with a blood red skull and crossbones emblazed on the front: the widely known logo for necromancers. Bragor stifled back a cry, and shoved a couple of the heavy, rotten objects that were about on top and around him to camouflage himself. He lay there, waiting, watching the necromancers through a small hole in his hiding place, and wondering how he was going to get out alive. As he watched, the necromancers lit with there torches different fires and lanterns around the cave, revealing a large, hollow room, where a large stone table sat at the front of the room, backdropped by two blood red tapestries. In front of the pedestal were several benches in aisles, like a strange, demonic church. The necromancers sat down on the benches, and one, the leader, went up behind the pedestal and started chanting some sort of prayer. The rest of the necromancers chanted with him. Suddenly, the objects surrounding Bragor started to move. He looked around, and realized that the objects that he had fell on were rotting, stinking bodies. The bodies began to move around, and Bragor let out a blood curdling scream. The necromancers stopped chanting. "Looks like we have a new toy to play with, my brothers," sneered the leader, as he marched over to Bragor. He brought out a strange, evil black gem out of his pocket and reached out towards Bragor. Bragor tried to move away, but the zombies surrounding him grabbed him and moved him closer to the gem. He felt his life being drained, his very soul leaving his body. He screamed with his last breath, and then became one of the zombies, his soul never to find peace and forever always trapped inside the gem.



redsrock	Nov 17 2008, 05:48 PM Post #2
Jefe el Heffalump Posts: 15,129 Group: Admin Member #54 Joined: December 8, 2007	This is good, Pooch. It's a shame you never wrote anything else, because you seem to have a grasp for writing. And you say this is the first thing you've ever written?



poochie_d1	Nov 17 2008, 05:49 PM Post #3
B Dawggy Dawg Posts: 2,844 Group: Member Member #78 Joined: December 13, 2007	My first fan-fic. I've a lot of other stuff before. I usually have tons of ideas of stories, but never write them down.



redsrock	Nov 17 2008, 05:52 PM Post #4
Jefe el Heffalump Posts: 15,129 Group: Admin Member #54 Joined: December 8, 2007	Well you should definitely start. I'd love to read them.



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