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| Enôr: The Untold Stories; The real deal RP! | |
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| Gilboron | Nov 21 2008, 03:32 AM Post #1 |
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Since the move was said to take much longer than expected, the thread is now an actual RP again. The horizon is a destiny… not a barrier. ![]() Enôr. A rather small planet, at least in comparison to others in its system, an eighty-five million miles separated from its middle-sized sun, Leitil, and Leitil's silvery gas giant companion, Yeistu. From the planet's surface, these appear as two suns, a contrast of red and blue. Three larger moons and a ring of smaller stellar objects orbit the planet at a safe distance: one moon is small, orange-coloured, and easily missed, while the two others, a large dark grey and an even larger forested moon, orbit each other, its surfaces unknown in these times. Which times, the uninformed may ask: well, I shall answer. NËΛJ 58. The third day of the 16th week. The second half of the 243-day long year has begun, and the trees’ leaves colour with shades of gold, silver, blood, and bronze. The age of the Nerhân Kêngship, of the great Empire of the Flame. The 58th year of Nërvûn ΛJ's reign: Greatest Kêng since the Conqueror, Eryne Tîwele, rose to the throne. A time of large battles and fires, a time of swords and song, a time of palaces and princes. A time where heroes fought on both sides. And who am I to know these times? I am Amak-Va, Imperial Scribe of Eyda, the Nerhân Capital. I am a Noruej, nigh immortal. I have seen this city grow from a small village to the sprawling metropolis it has become, and have seen its downfall and new rise thereafter. I play no role in the story about to be told. I am merely a teller, a recorder. A man who talks tales, not a character therein. I am merely here to guide you, the heroes, on your fateful path. The current Kêng of the Nerhân Empire is in grief and anger: his two sons, Crown Prince Eleyôs and Prince Aigânt, have mysteriously disappeared the day before yesterday: a pamphlet by my hand has been spread throughout the capital of Nerhûn: Eyda. ![]() It is with grief in my heart that I await the band that will possibly sacrifice its life for the Kêng's family. I certainly hope that they bear experience and skill to match the many dangers present wherever the Kêng's offspring may be. I hope you fare well, ~ Amak-Va, Imperial Scribe The map (May take a while to load) Dark green = Forests Bright green = Marshes Somewhere in between green = Fields Brown = Wasteland Grey = Mountains Bright grey = Ice and snow Yellow-Beige = Desert EYDA (City) Eyda is a large city, consisting of tall, white, round buildings in the centre, and sprawling wooden slums outside of its dark grey walls. Surrounding those slums are extensive farms and fields, beyond which lies a marsh. The palace is a building high atop a seaside cliff, with one, large, round main tower, and three cone-shaped spires surrounding it. RACES: Kalur, Merk, Mani MAP OF EYDA KAVAR (Landmark) A tall, rocky spire in the middle of the irradiated desolateness of the Wasteland. On this spire stood Eryne as he stabbed the Herald of Death into the rock and destroyed the Nerhân Republic. THE WASTELAND (Wasteland around Kavar) A desolate, foreboding place. Everything recognisable was wiped away by Eryne in his bid for conquest. The radiation of his attack is largely gone, though a radius surrounding Kavar (the red circle) still can make someone feel at unease and unhealthy. CREATURES: Cauls (mutated beasts, with most of its skin torn off - only has one, large eye, and walks on four legs), Ravves (doglike creatures with a leathery, green/white skin and feelers on their chin), Tchans (large, bipedal, flightless, predatory birds, with large, black feathers) “Now wait a second, why is most of it white?” Enôr is a large, mostly uncharted continent, with only a few major landmarks known and sure. It is the job of you, the adventurers, to chart your travels. I will update the map as the RP moves along and visits new regions. The Characters Name: Your full name, and possible additional nicknames. Species: See below. Gender: Male, female, or… well, I don’t know! Age: Try to keep to the aging specifications mentioned below. Class: A descriptive name of your occupation. Class description: A description of what you do. Main skills: What you’re REALLY good at. Appearance: Be detailed, but not too much! Equipment: Weapons, armour, inventory, … Mount, if any: See below. Background: All characters start in Eyda (see below). Personality: A brief description of your character’s emotional side. Lifestyle: How wealthy are you, how do you fare? Motivation: Why did you join the assignment? Of course, this sheet is merely a suggestion. Feel free to add/remove/replace/change anything you wish for your character, and remember this: go as out there as you like. I’ll steer you back within bounds. IF YOU SHOULD NEED A PHRASE TRANSLATED TO A CERTAIN ENÔRIAN LANGUAGE, YOU CAN ASK ME SO. PLEASE PM ALL SHEETS TO ME FOR APPROVAL. PLAYABLE SPECIES
AVAILABLE MOUNTS Apart from the Orÿn and the Trihan, Merks cannot use mounts without help.
The Rules
Now, if you just want to do whatever you want and don’t really care much about details, scroll waaaay down to skip all this exposition and start RP-ing (after I approved your sheet, of course). If you do want to read the exposition, only scroll a little bit down to start reading. The Setting (For even more exposition, check this link. Please note that it is not fully up to date: I have, for example, removed all magic from my world.) Enôr is the main planet. Having a day that consists of approximately twenty Earth hours and a year that consists of 243 of such days, with 27 weeks of 9 days. A concept such as months does not exist in most Enôrian cultures. Enôr has a Martian tilt, which causes seasonal climate change between hemispheres to vary heavily. It has three moons and a ring of debris, of which two moons orbit each other. For more details on the moon, check the first paragraphs of this post. Ymir (a second habitable planet in the Leitilian system, and the origin of the Ymirian “Gods”) and Enôr often near each other so much that Ymir appears as a fourth moon in the sky. Intelligent Species of the Enôrian Continent (For playable species, check “The Characters”.)
Nations of the Enôrian Continent (on map)
Edited by Gilboron, Feb 9 2009, 07:43 AM.
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| Nilloc James | Nov 21 2008, 06:35 PM Post #2 |
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I might reccomend you wait awhile until after we start the new forum. |
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| redsrock | Nov 21 2008, 06:36 PM Post #3 |
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Jefe el Heffalump
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That, and give a little more information about your world as well. You know? It's unlikely someone will join if they have no idea what's going on. |
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| Gilboron | Nov 22 2008, 06:36 AM Post #4 |
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Okay. I'll start working on fitting more information into the post in a word document while waiting for the new forum. |
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| Nilloc James | Nov 22 2008, 11:50 AM Post #5 |
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If you need a hand feel free to ask us, we have nothing better to do. |
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| redsrock | Nov 22 2008, 12:02 PM Post #6 |
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Jefe el Heffalump
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Speak for yourself!
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| Nilloc James | Nov 22 2008, 12:14 PM Post #7 |
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You have been volen-told, you are now a volen-slave. |
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| Gilboron | Nov 22 2008, 02:58 PM Post #8 |
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I've already updated the thread with the new thread, backed up in a word-document on my PC... I've decided to put most of the exposition at the bottom of the post, so that people not interested can skip it easierly. And I updated the logo. For the rest, thanks for wanting to help, but I think I'll fare myself. Though, if you have any suggestions from yourself, feel free to inform me
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| cathym | Nov 28 2008, 12:30 AM Post #9 |
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OOC: A thousand apologies for posting this here, but for some reason I can't get PM's to work. It just seems to get stuck at the preview screen. Please let me know if anything needs changing and I will modify/nuke the character if required. =============== I looked at your post about the possible RP within Enor previously and was rather daunted by the complexity and unfamiliarity of the world. However, I see that you have now decided to go ahead and run it as an RP so I thought I'd give it a go. But it is very difficult to create, name and outfit a character when you have no familiarity with the world, its races, its lore etc... So, here's my attempt at a Kalur character. Obviously it may need some (lots of?) work to fit better with your world. By the way, maybe it would help others join if you gave some example (or NPC) character sheets - several from each race. This might give people a clue as to what they can do. Just a thought. Anyway, here 'tis. =========== Name: D'sseneramrrearr'l First Daughter of Clan Kalur'reowrrh Short name: D'ssen Species: Kalur Gender: Female Age: 21 Class: Stalker Class Description: A fighter that relies mainly on stealth and ranged weapons. Main Skills: Ranged weapons, Stealth, Claw-to-claw fighting. Appearance: Tall (a little over 7 feet), lithe and strong. Skin colour is deep golden brown, eyes are dark bluish-purple with gold flecks, hair is black. Weapons: A custom-made crossbow mounted with a cartridge allowing multiple bolts to be loaded and shot with rapid fire, a satchel of pre-loaded bolt cartridges Armour/Clothing: Unarmoured. Since clothing interferes with the skin’s ability to absorb moisture, personal modesty has little place among the Kalur. However, in consideration of the mores of other races, she wears a soft vest and short tunic made of a light, breathable silk-like fabric. Her outfit is beautifully made, in colours of purple and gold. Inventory: a satchel of pre-loaded bolt cartridges, tools for making bolts, various personal items, money Mount: A Pard with reddish-gold coloured scales. Background: As clan First Daughter, now that she has come of age, D'ssen is required to prove her worth as future leader by undertaking a dangerous quest or challenge. Hearing of the disappearance of the Nerhân Kêng’s sons, her mother has instructed her to present herself as part of the band seeking to find them. This is also an opportunity for her to learn more of other races and to improve her diplomatic skills. Personality: Self-assured but not arrogant. Clan leadership is considered a duty not a privilege, and D’ssen has been raised to be honourable and courteous. Lifestyle: Wealthy Motivation: see background |
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| redsrock | Nov 28 2008, 12:33 AM Post #10 |
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Jefe el Heffalump
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Really? That's very odd. If you want, we can talk about this in the off-topic thread. |
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| Gilboron | Nov 28 2008, 03:14 AM Post #11 |
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Though the name is... well... odd , it's quite a good character, actually.And a big plus is the fact that you guessed cultural habits - something I recommend to other people who join. It makes me remember other things to put in the main thread. |
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| Gilboron | Nov 28 2008, 07:52 AM Post #12 |
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And here's my own character. Name: Sina Ti Species: Kalur Gender: Female Age: 33 Class: Adahrian Monk Class description: Adahrian Fire Monks were freelancing mercenaries and bounty hunters, doing things - officially, at least - out of a religious duty to rid the world of evil doers. They used techniques similar to the Nerhân firespewers. Main skills: Short blade, Adahrian Wardance, firespewing, speechcraft, cartography Appearance: Short and thin, with very short dark hair and a pale, beige skin, with only one eye. She does not bother to cover up the remaining empty eye socket. Equipment: Firespewing equipment, Adahrian Monk Garb (metal bracers (with small holes), and a breathing armless red/gold robe) Mount, if any: A Trihan named Aay Background: Born in Eadenôr, Sina migrated to Eyda soon after her birth. She is far more familiar with Nerhân culture than the culture of her own race, and has only left the Eydan province on rare occasions, despite her occupation. She has however studied (and stolen) many Enôrian maps. Personality: A kleptomaniac, and ruthless. Does not, repeat, not like being proved wrong. Lifestyle: Nothing too luxurious, but with the funding from the Adahrian Temple she receives, there certainly is an amount of decadence in her lifestyle. Motivation: The money. |
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| Sluijs_br | Jan 2 2009, 08:44 PM Post #13 |
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OOC: when will this start? |
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| Gilboron | Jan 3 2009, 11:19 AM Post #14 |
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OOC: I'm still waiting for more people to join. |
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| Christo_2992 | Jan 14 2009, 08:49 AM Post #15 |
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*happy dance* YAYAY
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Name: Optius Valez Species: Mani Gender: Male Age: 60 Main skills: Swordfights Appearance: Pointy ears, red skin, like all Mani, though he's rather tall and well built. He's not very muscular, except for his trained arms. He has attractive, deep brown eyes, which stand in great contrast with his horribly scarred and asymmetrical face. Equipment: A long silver sword and old, beaten chainmail armour. His helmet covers his face. Mount: None Background: Optius was born to a regular Nerhân family, yet at a young age he was introduced into life as a mercenary as his dad was one and trained him how to use a sword and shield. One day, his dad left for a mission far away but he never returned home. His mum raised him alone, but also kept on teaching him how to defend himself until his 39 birthday he went out to discover the world, and shortly thereafter became a lonely mercenary. Personality: He's a noble yet fierce, he wouldn't think twice before killing a thief or any evil person and tries to help the less fortunate, as long as there's something in it for him. He loves to gamble and drink but can't stand losing. Becomes violent very easily. Lifestyle: Just enough to survive. Motivation: Money. |
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| Gilboron | Jan 16 2009, 01:32 PM Post #16 |
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ZE RP IS OPENED. You can all start role-playing now. However, it is not yet the end of the week (e.g. the start of the actual story, the meeting at the Eydan Palace). You can all RP yourselves just doing stuff, character establishing, etc... in Eyda, while we wait for more people to join up. If not enough people have joined by February 1st or something, we'll just go with a few NPCs. |
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| cathym | Jan 16 2009, 10:48 PM Post #17 |
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D'ssen wrinkled her nose slightly at the unpleasant odours as she rode through the slums that huddled around the walls of Eyda. Ahead she could see the gleaming white buildings of the city proper - a stark contrast to the dirty and dreary wooden shacks she rode past. And high on the cliff face, the palace outshone everything else. Its round main tower and trio of cone-shaped spires stood out against the clear blue sky. The journey had passed quickly, and there were still several days before the meeting at the palace would take place. D'ssen gently spurred her mount to a faster pace, keen to be away from the slums. Her first desire was to find an inn where she could rest and wash. She decided to head towards the palace and find an inn nearby. It seemed likely that the highest quality establishments would be located there. |
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| Gilboron | Jan 17 2009, 08:30 AM Post #18 |
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OOC: I've added a (crude) map of Eyda: here. Location: Eyda, Inner City IC: "I hate these stairs!" shouted Sina after climbing yet another case of them. The Inner City was separated and built on a slope, divided by terraces, and each time you wanted to reach a higher level you had to climb stairs. Only the main roads were sloped to allow carts to pass through. Sina was trying to reach the public bath to wash - she had tried washing herself in the sea, but the salty water wasn't healthy for her skin. |
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| Christo_2992 | Jan 17 2009, 03:51 PM Post #19 |
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*happy dance* YAYAY
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OOC; I haven't rp'ed in months so please don't expect that much right now. IC: Optius Valez scratched his brown hair while he looked around, where could he get some ale? He had been looking forward to this moment for weeks and now he couldn't find any. He sighed while he walked deeper into town still looking everywhere for a nice bar where he could use his well earned coins. His last job had been a difficult one, clearing out a shelter full of rats, nasty little creatures. Finaly his gaze found a wooden house with a sign saying: 'Dren's bar.' A smile appeared on Optius' face and he entered the place. It was nasty looking and except for some drunks, there weren't many people around which didn't bother Optius at all. "A pint of ale please." He ordered. The barkeeper looked at him and frowned before getting a bottle of ale from behind his dusky bar. "Is that the best you have?" Optius asked while he lay down some coins on the bar and took a sip of the pint. "Not bad though." |
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| Gilboron | Jan 17 2009, 04:43 PM Post #20 |
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OOC: *smack* 1. Isn't cleaning a shelter full of rats a little below a mercenary? It's like alerting the army when someone stole your car. 2. This is relatively minor, but Eyda ain't no town. It's a metropolis! 3. Coins? COINS? Where do you think we are?! Fantasyland? YE BE MEANING BEAKS! 4. Ye be only finding wooden houses in the slums, and they not be deeper into town. 5. Dren? Do ye think we be havin' bloody Dunmer 'ere? 6. Dusky bar? What, is the sun settin' behind it? (Just me loving to complain. 1 is similar to the cave of creatures on your first draft sheets, 2 and 3 are really minor... just stylistic preference. 4... This is even more minor. Just a reminder that all houses in the Inner City are made out of stone. 5. Seriously? I let Optius (Bloody Imperials!) slip, but Dren? That's right out of a TES game! 6 is just me thinking it to be a strange choice of words.) (No offence meant, okay? As I said, just some minor details... Just try not to rip-off TES any more :P) Location: Eyda, Inner City IC: Almost at her destination, Sina turned around. The view was magnificent, certainly from this high. The white houses reflected the light of the setting sun, and the dark green Merkwod stretched out to the horizon. "Nice view, aye?" Sina sighed as the blue-haired man approached her. "Please, not you again..." "It's a bit odd, isn't it?" continued the man, crossing his arms and enjoying the vista next to Sina. "How you keep failing to avoid me... I would have expected better from a Fire Monk. Or is it like fire itself... leaving a trail of smoke?" "Look, I told you to leave me alone." The Mani had been bothering Sina for the last few days. He had been stalking her, though only at day. "Why are you even following me?" "A matter of security, simply, as I told you." "Yes, you told me that... I want details." "I'm not at liberty to-" "Just go away." "But I-" "GUARDS! HELP! I'M B-" "Alright, I'll leave. Just... just stay quiet." The man hurried away, and just as he left down the stairs, two green-robed Eydan guards arrived. "What is the problem, miss?" "Nothing. I've handled it myself." OOC: Seriously, no hard feelings, aye? |
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