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Worth Fighting For; Another song. Man, I suck at titles...
Topic Started: Oct 19 2009, 08:48 PM (60 Views)
vanir90210	Oct 19 2009, 08:48 PM Post #1
Budding Lyricist Posts: 2,795 Group: Member Member #394 Joined: May 19, 2008	This one isn't based on the tune of any song; I plan on doing that with my buddies in a while. Cold and frosted hands come Grip this insanity Choke the last remaining strands Life ceasing to exist Rise up and fight Let not this eternal struggle continue Submission brings naught But shame everlasting And so I slash the tethers that bind me to misery I rise up and conquer Upon the gilded wings of glory Fly ever on Inspiring the minds Of heroes yet to come Cast down and trodden on The spiked boots of my enemies Dig ever deeper Penetrating my skin And so I slash the tethers that bind me to misery I rise up and conquer Upon the gilded wings of glory Fly ever on Inspiring the minds Of heroes yet to come Behold! Risen! The armies of Angels cry Unleash upon the barren land A token of grand indulgence An arousing masterpiece To reforge and rearm The soldiers of tales ancient And so I slash the tethers that bind me to misery I rise up and conquer Upon the gilded wings of glory Fly ever on Inspiring the minds Of heroes yet to come
	Spoiler: click to toggle "I look at the eyes, straight to the soul doorway" Redsrock Dammit, Vanir...... I had an awesome daydream of me and Anne Hathaway on a private island. And then in the daydream you came in and murdered her, then asking for my hand in marriage.


Nilloc James	Oct 20 2009, 12:13 AM Post #2
IT Posts: 1,943 Group: Member Member #471 Joined: November 10, 2008	Could you give me a basic idea of rythm so I can read it again the way you intended?
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vanir90210	Oct 20 2009, 06:42 AM Post #3
Budding Lyricist Posts: 2,795 Group: Member Member #394 Joined: May 19, 2008	I don't know how I would go about doing that.
	Spoiler: click to toggle "I look at the eyes, straight to the soul doorway" Redsrock Dammit, Vanir...... I had an awesome daydream of me and Anne Hathaway on a private island. And then in the daydream you came in and murdered her, then asking for my hand in marriage.


Unpleasant_Assailant	Oct 21 2009, 01:22 AM Post #4
Chief Global Moderator Posts: 4,706 Group: Global Moderator Member #194 Joined: January 12, 2008	I'm gonna be really honest here and saw the title and thought of the song in Mulan lol. But on topic pretty nice!



vanir90210	Oct 21 2009, 09:41 AM Post #5
Budding Lyricist Posts: 2,795 Group: Member Member #394 Joined: May 19, 2008	lol didn't know there was a song like that in Mulan. I haven't seen that in forever.
	Spoiler: click to toggle "I look at the eyes, straight to the soul doorway" Redsrock Dammit, Vanir...... I had an awesome daydream of me and Anne Hathaway on a private island. And then in the daydream you came in and murdered her, then asking for my hand in marriage.


Septim741	Oct 21 2009, 07:37 PM Post #6
Anglophile Posts: 811 Group: Member Member #307 Joined: April 1, 2008	Wow, this is probably my favorite of yours so far. It's reminiscent of Muse and their new single Uprising. Great job. A lot more detailed than a lot of your other work, and less poetic. It works miracles here.
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redsrock	Oct 21 2009, 07:37 PM Post #7
Jefe el Heffalump Posts: 15,133 Group: Admin Member #54 Joined: December 8, 2007	V3 is good with lyrics.



vanir90210	Oct 21 2009, 07:42 PM Post #8
Budding Lyricist Posts: 2,795 Group: Member Member #394 Joined: May 19, 2008	Septim741 Oct 21 2009, 07:37 PM Wow, this is probably my favorite of yours so far. It's reminiscent of Muse and their new single Uprising. Great job. A lot more detailed than a lot of your other work, and less poetic. It works miracles here. Wait, it's good to not be poetic?
	Spoiler: click to toggle "I look at the eyes, straight to the soul doorway" Redsrock Dammit, Vanir...... I had an awesome daydream of me and Anne Hathaway on a private island. And then in the daydream you came in and murdered her, then asking for my hand in marriage.


redsrock	Oct 21 2009, 07:44 PM Post #9
Jefe el Heffalump Posts: 15,133 Group: Admin Member #54 Joined: December 8, 2007	You don't HAVE to be poetic. Though in general lyrics are poeticish. Edited by redsrock, Oct 21 2009, 07:44 PM.



Septim741	Oct 21 2009, 07:46 PM Post #10
Anglophile Posts: 811 Group: Member Member #307 Joined: April 1, 2008	Poetic is generic. Lame. If you want your lyrics to be like everybody else's, make them poetic. If you want them to be YOURS, do something different. I'm still waiting on a story song. Hurry up damn you!
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vanir90210	Oct 21 2009, 07:58 PM Post #11
Budding Lyricist Posts: 2,795 Group: Member Member #394 Joined: May 19, 2008	Okay, good, cuz' I'm not very good at being poetic. Anyway, do you mean a narrative song? That'd be a tiny bit difficult, but I could try.
	Spoiler: click to toggle "I look at the eyes, straight to the soul doorway" Redsrock Dammit, Vanir...... I had an awesome daydream of me and Anne Hathaway on a private island. And then in the daydream you came in and murdered her, then asking for my hand in marriage.


Septim741	Oct 21 2009, 08:00 PM Post #12
Anglophile Posts: 811 Group: Member Member #307 Joined: April 1, 2008	Look up "Cornerstone" by Arctic Monkeys. Great song.
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