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| Faded Memories | |
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| Topic Started: Oct 21 2009, 11:17 PM (22 Views) | |
| vanir90210 | Oct 21 2009, 11:17 PM Post #1 |
Budding Lyricist
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Man, I'm on a roll with this. I might end up writing our entire demo... Look back upon the past Examine the actions The follies, the triumphs Reminiscing Sometimes all we can do The faded memories draw closer Taunting with their supremecy Their haughty auras shine Teasing, offering a glimpse Of times less impoverished Inviting, yet closing out Reluctant to allow One man a hold on reality Instead they return Back to the murky depths Of the mind's abyss from whence they came So travel onward Think not of the horrors The terrors, the abominations That dominate history And clutch us with writhing hands The faded memories draw closer Taunting with their supremecy Their haughty auras shine Teasing, offering a glimpse Of times less impoverished Inviting, yet closing out Reluctant to allow One man a hold on reality Instead they return Back to the murky depths Of the mind's abyss from whence they came The future holds many graces Bestowing light-hearted jubilance Upon the kingdoms of man Through-wrought joy unencumbered by villainy The faded memories draw closer Taunting with their supremecy Their haughty auras shine Teasing, offering a glimpse Of times less impoverished Inviting, yet closing out Reluctant to allow One man a hold on reality Instead they return Back to the murky depths Of the mind's abyss from whence they came The faded memories... Faded... Memories... |
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| Marcion | Oct 22 2009, 12:37 AM Post #2 |
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Demo...? So your in a band? What kind of music do you guys happen to play? Looking at the lyrics, there's a certain eloquence to them that I think could suit some genres better than others... but at the same time, that also depends on what kind of music you guys put it to, as well. Btw, anywhere where I can hear some of what you guys have played (if there's any songs before this one (and those others you've posted (I presume, since you say your on a roll (now I'm just being silly with these parentheses (or not)))))? |
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| vanir90210 | Oct 22 2009, 12:40 AM Post #3 |
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No, I'm not technically in the band yet, as I don't play anything yet, but I will soon be learning to play bass. And no, we don't have a specific genre outlined yet or anything, but I was hoping for Alt. Rock or similar. |
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| Marcion | Oct 22 2009, 12:48 AM Post #4 |
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Hmm, I don't listen to much rock, but I think that song could work. Might need to be reworked a bit to fit whatever rhythm your (potential) bandmates come up with. Then again, I ain't no expert with metre and all that, so I wouldn't have a clue what to suggest (might be fine as is -- I'm musically and poetically challenged my friend :().
Edited by Marcion, Oct 22 2009, 12:48 AM.
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