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| Topic Started: Oct 27 2009, 10:47 PM (38 Views) | |
| Brian S | Oct 27 2009, 10:47 PM Post #1 |
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darkness hangs low like fog in the light anon nothing, anonymous blackness of sea and our bonds broken sire. the synapses fire. and there, like a stray wind a traveler, ye Lightning like serpents did snake through the sky godly lifelike, we zeusian creation plea yet alone in the rain tired’s all we remain, and turn our skin in the fire a crass plague, we War births a wartorn from lovelife embattled. Jacob’s ladder like strings from a long rotten thread see, to learn to love’s lost regardless of ‘dost’ oh how artless how godless! the conclusion is read a reaction from action, bactericide thoughts or perceiving abstraction in nothings and naughts but from want came a grandeur that grandfathers lie and by gnosis torn with company born I think of my lack thereof an irony, I |
 In the reflection of your glasses lies the luminescent screen of the television projecting unto your synapses the distorted vision from behind the eyes of corporate contrivances pleading between their cold metal fingers for control which in your advertisement-enslavement you repay tenfold whilst the world spirals into oblivion around your desensitized body and in this cacophonous euphoria we all die and we all die alone. | |
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| redsrock | Oct 27 2009, 11:09 PM Post #2 |
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Mmmm..... full of imagery. Very narrative, too, my favorite kind.
Gave me chills for some reason. Sorry I can't add more than that weak stuff.  |
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| poochie_d1 | Oct 29 2009, 04:35 PM Post #3 |
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[censored]ing loved it. The rhyming was great, and when I read it aloud, it just sounded awesome. Great job. |
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