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| Siara N'Gola: Siara's Song | |
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| Topic Started: Jun 27 2016, 09:43 PM (4,188 Views) | |
| Areial | Sep 21 2016, 08:32 PM Post #521 |
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Oh very nice... going in the back door is always fun! |
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| Rick | Sep 21 2016, 09:19 PM Post #522 |
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Jarl
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This is gonna get very broad in scope..... Let it run.....but...my god....its gonna be three (perhaps more) full on story lines....which have to tie in and reference each other. You have a lot of patience..... Love what you've done though :) |
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| Serethil | Sep 21 2016, 09:56 PM Post #523 |
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Actually, Rick - it's FAR easier for me to keep track and mesh them this way (in this particular forum ambiance) than it was the other way. If it was novel-form, that's a whole other situation, and there are many ways to handle it. This though - you can't keep track of what's going on in three totally separate (but variously intertwined) narratives in a forum atmosphere. The three full story-lines thing isn't a problem - each woman is herself, and writing them separately just makes that more apparent to me. But separating them makes the whole thing more readable. I hope.... |
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| Rick | Sep 21 2016, 10:38 PM Post #524 |
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Yeah but sometimes you have to see a single event from two different story lines and keep them accurate and in phase or the logic collapses. That's tough Like....say they all meet up for a bit....each story has to reflect that from its own pov.....with no incongruences........that's what I mean. |
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| Serethil | Sep 21 2016, 10:44 PM Post #525 |
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Et'Ada
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Oh, I don't have much of a problem there. They're all living in my mind.... and the whole complex of stories IS a whole to me. The separation into different threads is for two reasons: first, to make it easier to read; second, to make it easier to write. Truthfully? The whole overarching story is entire in my mind. I .... really wish this wasn't going on in a proprietary "game world universe".... |
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| Areial | Sep 21 2016, 10:48 PM Post #526 |
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Et'Ada
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Sere the "Story..Story" thread could be for long or short stories ( sub-forum long ones) that aren't "game" worlds... I mean I know we are a group started because we had a game in common, but that doesn't mean we can't have different interests and share them... or at least I don't think it should. |
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| Serethil | Sep 21 2016, 10:52 PM Post #527 |
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Et'Ada
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Oh, yeah, I know! And I've put some stuff there that doesn't have any relevance in TES. And there are in fact some bits I'll post eventually that are TES, but... dissociated from play.... |
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| neildarkstar | Sep 22 2016, 03:07 AM Post #528 |
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Good reading! I've had a few of those "horse shit" events... :) |
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| monkeyemoness | Sep 22 2016, 02:58 PM Post #529 |
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Yeah, I think it probably works better the way you've split the stories off into separate sections. Though it could be an issue for latecomers to the story you can still sort of just follow each of the threads for all three perspectives. Something I always thought of doing but lol I can't even keep track of one of my own stories. :V Anyways, great read as always, on all 3. I'm happy that Lucia has a new home. |
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| Andra Hawksdaughter | Sep 22 2016, 05:43 PM Post #530 |
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Jarl
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Just wonderful Sis! (I wanted to catch up last night, but was nodding too much) Now I'm off to Anki and Deni's parts! :D |
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| Serethil | Sep 22 2016, 07:02 PM Post #531 |
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Et'Ada
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Thanks guys! Quick note here - hellacious t'storms this evening, I'ma have to not plan to write tonight.... |
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| Andra Hawksdaughter | Sep 22 2016, 07:16 PM Post #532 |
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Jarl
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Ruh roh! Love storms, but not so good while on the computer.... |
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| Areial | Sep 22 2016, 07:19 PM Post #533 |
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Et'Ada
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Ditto... Love the Storms... always unplug... |
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| Kane | Sep 23 2016, 01:03 PM Post #534 |
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I despise that ruin. It's always a tough fight. They have their work cut out for them! |
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| Serethil | Sep 23 2016, 02:39 PM Post #535 |
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Et'Ada
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Yeah. Actually.... it was a good thing I didn't plan to write last night. Been a long time since I've done it, and I need to take someone over there and really "run the fight" with the Briarheart and Drascua. Especially with an archer.... Of course both Siara and Andur dual-wield - but with a destruction-hagraven.... it's going to need to be arrow-kill after taking down the Briarheart. |
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| Kane | Sep 23 2016, 02:46 PM Post #536 |
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Usually I'm Dragonborn when I go up there. Three words of Unrelenting Force stirs things up long enough to get a good jump on them. |
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| Serethil | Sep 23 2016, 06:37 PM Post #537 |
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Et'Ada
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I don't do being Dragonborn any more....
Edited by Serethil, Sep 23 2016, 06:37 PM.
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| neildarkstar | Sep 24 2016, 05:50 PM Post #538 |
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What happened to the sub-topics, eh? Did they go wonkers, or did I miss something? |
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| Serethil | Sep 24 2016, 06:38 PM Post #539 |
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Et'Ada
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They're listed in the "frame" for Siara's link in the index. Don't you see them? They're links too, just click on them next to hers.
Edited by Serethil, Sep 24 2016, 06:50 PM.
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| Andra Hawksdaughter | Sep 24 2016, 06:57 PM Post #540 |
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Jarl
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I'm getting an error when I click on them in the frame, Sere. |
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