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| Return of XIO; Path of Love and Hate: Chapter 8 | |
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| Topic Started: Feb 20 2006, 08:35 PM (193 Views) | |
| Darkest Foxx | Feb 20 2006, 08:35 PM Post #1 |
Super Tails!
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Do we return? Ever since my atitude has chaned I just can't do this story anymore... It has been 14 years since Shadow died... A new adventure unfolds, but things are not as they seem... This story starts at Central City with Sonic and Amy... _______________________ Amy: Sonic, its been 2 years now that we have been together you know proper like... well I was wondering if you well...... Sonic: What is Amy?... Amy: Tomorrow at the chao festival I thing we should get married. Sonic: WhAt!?!?!? Amy: Well? Sonic trying to act suprised but she has been asking for this for the lasy 17 years. He has to say yes. Its now or never. Sonic: Okay... _______________________ 72 Miles away was an unlikely character. No one knew who he was exsept knuckles... His name was........ ???: What! Its him!?!?!?!?!?!?!? *I have done this story before.* **If you have read it alreading dont give away who it is...** |
  I still love you ok... ...i've just finally found something but it's upsetting that it's not you... ...we could have gone far I hope you still can I feel soo high but I might fall one of you two are gonna catch me... ...I feel soo safe THANK YOOOOOOOOOOU!! :]   ^^White Phantom Tails^^ - Artwork From: Episode 01    ^Episode 02 artwork^ OUT NOW!! | |
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| Sunshine the fox | Feb 20 2006, 08:57 PM Post #2 |
What cute fox aww! ^-^
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Are you going to post more? has a good start, but needs to be longer. |
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| Shino | Feb 20 2006, 09:33 PM Post #3 |
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kinda short but...amy isent 17 shes 12 |
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I am an avenger... I must obtain power no matter what, even if I must lot the devil take hold of my body... This is the only way I can kill HIM...  Which character are you test by Naruto - Kun.com  
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| Darkest Foxx | Feb 21 2006, 10:30 AM Post #4 |
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Its 14 years later from now. ...but yes I will make the next part longer. |
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I still love you ok... ...i've just finally found something but it's upsetting that it's not you... ...we could have gone far I hope you still can I feel soo high but I might fall one of you two are gonna catch me... ...I feel soo safe THANK YOOOOOOOOOOU!! :] ^^White Phantom Tails^^ - Artwork From: Episode 01 ^Episode 02 artwork^ OUT NOW!! | |
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| Darkest Foxx | Feb 21 2006, 10:45 AM Post #5 |
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???: Its that hedgehog! ?????: WhAt!?!?!? Is that you shadow?... ???: No! I am Shadow's XIO. We share the same life... ?????: That means that Shadow is still alive! XIO: Yes... _________________________________________________ Knuckle: Come on... Stay away from that... SHADOW!!!!! XIO: hAHAHAHAHA.... no... as I just explaned! I'M NOT SHADOW!! ?????: Knuckles we cant kill him... or..the real shadow dies... Knuckles: Shadow is still alive!? XIO: Yes. If he wasn't I would be dead. Hedgehog! whats your name!!! Back at central city, Tails was working on a new prototype. Tails knew that with just 3 chaos emeralds he could use this machine to protect the city from anything... Tails: Almost done. Cosmo: What is it tails? Tails: I call it..... Thunder. Its a metal fox that will protect the city. Cosmo: It looks just like you. Tails: Yeah I guese....... Back at the lake XIO was still tring to find out what was this hedgehog's name. XIO: Well?... ?????: I don't know who I am. XIO: There must be a name for you! Knuckles: I call him Tenso. I have trained him every since he was 10. Tenso: 4 years of training!... XIO: ...and you still don't remember a thing do you? Tenso: No...nothing. Where I was born who my parents are... I...I just remeber seeing Shadow... and now I find out that he is still alive... XIO: Not telling him the turth hey knuckles??? Knuckles: Huh!? Tenso: What does he mean!! ????: Tenso..... Tenso: Huh!?!?!?!?!? WHO IS IT!!! |
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I still love you ok... ...i've just finally found something but it's upsetting that it's not you... ...we could have gone far I hope you still can I feel soo high but I might fall one of you two are gonna catch me... ...I feel soo safe THANK YOOOOOOOOOOU!! :] ^^White Phantom Tails^^ - Artwork From: Episode 01 ^Episode 02 artwork^ OUT NOW!! | |
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| Shino | Feb 21 2006, 11:45 AM Post #6 |
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much better |
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I am an avenger... I must obtain power no matter what, even if I must lot the devil take hold of my body... This is the only way I can kill HIM... Which character are you test by Naruto - Kun.com
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| Sunshine the fox | Feb 21 2006, 06:14 PM Post #7 |
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What cute fox aww! ^-^
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Yes this is much better. Great Job. Keep going. |
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| Shino | Feb 21 2006, 06:19 PM Post #8 |
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keep going! |
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I am an avenger... I must obtain power no matter what, even if I must lot the devil take hold of my body... This is the only way I can kill HIM... Which character are you test by Naruto - Kun.com
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| Sunshine the fox | Feb 21 2006, 07:56 PM Post #9 |
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What cute fox aww! ^-^
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I just said that! <_< |
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| Shino | Feb 21 2006, 08:07 PM Post #10 |
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your point? |
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I am an avenger... I must obtain power no matter what, even if I must lot the devil take hold of my body... This is the only way I can kill HIM... Which character are you test by Naruto - Kun.com
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| Sunshine the fox | Feb 21 2006, 08:14 PM Post #11 |
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What cute fox aww! ^-^
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Just try not to repeat people just to get a post. And please let's not to start talking like this in this person fanfic topic. Let him just post his story here and make a comment on it. No arguments here please. |
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| Darkest Foxx | Feb 22 2006, 04:59 PM Post #12 |
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(I'm now putting chapter titles on this story) Chapter 03- Angels Fall ---------------------------------------------------------- Tenso: Who are you? ????: Hehehehe! Tenso: What are you laughing at? ????: So many questions... ...and you thing cutting with your claws is going to fix anything? You pathetic hedgehog!! XIO: I know you from somewhere but where... Suki: Don't you remember after that boat acedent? We were at the ark... I'M SUKI! 14 Years Ago: Sonic: Stop Korabara! Korabara: Haaa ha...... ...you think you can stop me!?!?!?!? XIO: I have only a few more minutes in this world... Tails: You mean Shadow is going to die? Korabara: What a fitting end to it all. Sonic: You won't get away with this!! Suki (Now): My mother told me that the battle raged on for hours but Sonic wasn't what he apeared... ...he unleashed a power more evil than anything me mother ever saw. Some people think he is the Chaos Angel... Tenso (Now): Chaos Angel? ...but the ledgendary Sonic wouldn't go bad. Suki (Now): I don't understand ether... ...did you hear that him and Amy are getting married at the chao festival??? XIO (Now): Tomorrow night!?!?!?!?!? Present Time: Suki: So you see... Tenso: I don't understand. Knuckles: Just leave him out of this Suki! Suki: Your not telling him the truth knuckles... ...we are the good guys not you! XIO: All your so called "Friends" are lieing to you. Tenso: I don't know who to believe... |
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I still love you ok... ...i've just finally found something but it's upsetting that it's not you... ...we could have gone far I hope you still can I feel soo high but I might fall one of you two are gonna catch me... ...I feel soo safe THANK YOOOOOOOOOOU!! :] ^^White Phantom Tails^^ - Artwork From: Episode 01 ^Episode 02 artwork^ OUT NOW!! | |
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| Darkest Foxx | Feb 22 2006, 05:02 PM Post #13 |
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I know its confussing but you will understnad at the end of the story. Anyway I am making a story about Sonic's Past after I have finished this one.    
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I still love you ok... ...i've just finally found something but it's upsetting that it's not you... ...we could have gone far I hope you still can I feel soo high but I might fall one of you two are gonna catch me... ...I feel soo safe THANK YOOOOOOOOOOU!! :] ^^White Phantom Tails^^ - Artwork From: Episode 01 ^Episode 02 artwork^ OUT NOW!! | |
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| Sunshine the fox | Feb 22 2006, 05:59 PM Post #14 |
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What cute fox aww! ^-^
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Yes I hope it does get more clear. But it still a good story. Keep up the good work.
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| Darkest Foxx | Feb 23 2006, 11:50 AM Post #15 |
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-Chapter 04- --The Choice-- XIO: Time for you to choose your path! Suki: The time is not right yet... ...I still need to find Sonic! XIO: Revenge? Suki: Revenge!! XIO: I know Tenso... ...I know you saw shadow!! ...when you were very young... Tenso: I was 10 at the time... -4 Years Ago- ??????: Not bad for a kid... Tenso: Who are you? ??????: A messenger... ...call me Shade. Tenso: I know you...knuckles said that you, Shade was with him the time Korabara died. ??????: Everyone has heard the story... Tenso: He said you died! ??????: ...as I was saying... ...you will have to choose when the time is right. 3 paths... ...Sorrow...Hate...Confussion. Tenso: Sorrow hate and confussion?!?!?!?!?! Tenso (Now): So you mean that Shade is Shadow!! Suki: Its time to go... XIO: No time to explane the rest. Don't go looking for Shade! Suki: Knuckles knows what you must do... Knuckles: Urrrgh... ...find...tails... Tenso: Knuckles... Knuckles: Go! XIO & Suki: CHAOS CONTROL!!!!!!! |
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I still love you ok... ...i've just finally found something but it's upsetting that it's not you... ...we could have gone far I hope you still can I feel soo high but I might fall one of you two are gonna catch me... ...I feel soo safe THANK YOOOOOOOOOOU!! :] ^^White Phantom Tails^^ - Artwork From: Episode 01 ^Episode 02 artwork^ OUT NOW!! | |
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