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Ratatoskr; Explains What, Why and Who Ratatoskr is
Topic Started: Oct 18 2015, 06:30 PM (224 Views)
Angelus
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Age: 9 years old. (18 in human years)

Height: 3'4

Character Description: He is a Squirrel that is three times the regular size of a normal one. He has three blue stripes on his fur and wears a shawl and a satchel. His fur is a light brown and orange. while his tummy and part of his face is a beige color. He has a pink button nose, two whiskers on both side of his cheeks with big eyes that melt your soul when you look at them. He always carries an acorn with him that is either in his hand or is in his satchel. He also wears a gold earring on his right ear.

Traits: Caring, Mischievous, Daring and Gossiper.

Ratatoskr! Legendary beast and messenger of Yggdrasil. He makes his home inside and on the branchs of this sacred world tree. He loves to gossip but he wasn't always such a rascal!
Three times the regular size of a squirrel, Ratatoskr came from a far off planet where animals grew to tremendous sizes and technology was primitive. A race of intellectual beings tried to invade and conquer the planet. The animals fought them off and learned the technology of space craft. This set their religious and views of the whole world into different forms. The animals started thinking. They wondered how what was out there. Years passed and they learned how to go into space.
Still keeping their primitive stature and customs, Ratatoskr came from the clan of Yrrucs whom was a renown member. In fact he was prince learning his father's trade. Ratatoskr was eager but soon it went away. He learned he had to marry a woman to continue the cycle. This made Ratatoskr upset for he didn't want to be with a woman. He wanted to be with his long standing friend, Fenrir, whom both felt passionate about.
They both tried to leave the planet on a space ship secretly. They nearly succeeded when Ratatoskr's bride to be saw them. She was mad at Ratatoskr and was going to tell everyone else but Fenrir ripped her apart with his claws. A little shaken up of the scene they decided to leave. They made their way to planet hopping in hope of a new life together. A planet in a gentle star galaxy caught their eyes. In their planet detection screen the planet Esron it was called: home to giants, tricksters, dragons, giant birds and plants. They felt like belonged so they started making their way down.
Unfortuneatly something went horribly wrong. Their was going to crash so they had to eject. Seeing each other one last time they aborted. Both of them went to two different ends of the planet. They never saw each other again. Stranded there and in Ratatoskr's grieving he found sanctuary in the biggest ash tree in the planet, Yggdrasil. When he woken up the next morning he found natives who were curious about the squirrel who came to their planet.
Caring and kind these people gave Ratatoskr a home. In ceremonies they would dye three lines down his fur. Head to tail he was covered in a bright blue that always sparked excitement and wonder. They dyed his fur so much that this became his natural fur color. Everyone in the village had a job and Ratatoskr would be no exception. He became a fast traveling messenger.
One day however, Yggdrasil became jealous so it sent it's dragon, Níðhöggr, to burn and destroy the village leaving Ratatoskr alive. Ratatoskr trying to defeat this monster with Yggdrasil's Acorns he became more powerful. He dashed back and forth but to success. Ratatoskr again grieving found his home back in Yggdrasil but he offer. He would stay if Níðhöggr would be locked up and never hurt anyone again. So was done and Níðhöggr became the root gnawing dragon.
Using his job of messenger he would run up and down to send messages to the eagle, whom told Yggdrasil where Ratatoskr was and the village, and Níðhöggr to spread gossip. Doing this he made them hate each other getting his revenge for what they did to him. Getting away from the tree a little he would send messages to everyone on the planet in hope to one day see Fenrir again.
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Edited by Angelus, Oct 18 2015, 11:26 PM.
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Vexyll
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I'm going to move this to a different section of the forum, this isn't really an application and is more akin to a character bio.

On that subject, you have quite the backstory here, but it kinda lacks the simple stuff that other people put in their bios to make certain details obvious like, say, just listing off your height, age, etc.

Additionally, if this is a new race for the server, you will need to put a seperate page for it explaining the new race in the race section.
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Oh okay, sorry. I am new to this and I made a character but i was told that i might have to have an app for him. Should i send you a pic of what he looks like so you can tell me where it would be best to put him under?
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I must say, i personally think that space is big and crazy enough to have planets with animals similar to ours with the difference that they might be the ones who are developed like we humans are so if it was up to me id give a 100% sure thumbs up to this (also your character is so freaking cute that i wanna crush his face) but im just a regular member myself.

One thing i feel like i must mention is the fact that there might be little, tiny, almost non existing hints of magic in your backstory which for very fair reasons is not allowed on this server considering that magic is too crazy and random, im not saying you need to change it since considering what i said at the beggining of this comment it could be perfectly plausible that there are dragon-like creatures that exist naturally in some random planets and what not, all im saying is that your character's backstory seems like it could take a magic turn easily which unfortunately (but for good reason) cannot be on this server, other than that i think its pretty awesome and i cant hope to run into you in the server and do some RP. ^_^
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Thanks dude! I am glad you liked it! Also with the giants and other giant things like dragons are just over grown things, humanoids with the giant hormone disorder is common and is spread across the planet. The dragons are giant lizards who grew like the birds and plants due to the atmosphere of the and the gravity of the planet. So nothing magical based, it just seems magical since its so uncommon here but common there :3
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Angelus
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Thanks, i tell it to all the parties C:
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Alright, bringing this up now because we've discovered something about your character.


You literally ripped this character out of Smite which is something we do not allow people to do when we see it. If any proof is needed, simply google search the name "Ratatoskr."

Unfortunately, we didn't notice this sooner so we could tell you you aren't allowed to do this. My suggestion is that you make a different scurry character entirely as the scurries probably do not need to be pulled into review, but I am sorry to say that this character in particular is a problem.
Edited by Vexyll, Nov 3 2016, 01:36 AM.
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Nov 3 2016, 01:34 AM
Alright, bringing this up now because we've discovered something about your character.


You literally ripped this character out of Smite which is something we do not allow people to do when we see it. If any proof is needed, simply google search the name "Ratatoskr."

Unfortunately, we didn't notice this sooner so we could tell you you aren't allowed to do this. My suggestion is that you make a different scurry character entirely as the scurries probably do not need to be pulled into review, but I am sorry to say that this character in particular is a problem.
You just now noticed this? I honestly thought it was just accepted due to well...stuff I guess. If not I would've ....said something xD
Edited by ScuttleJoy, Nov 3 2016, 06:46 AM.
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Barely any of the staff actually play/know anything about Smite, so yes, we only just now noticed this when the one staff member that does play it brought it up.
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