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Writing Pet Peeves
Topic Started: Apr 29 2015, 11:12 PM (413 Views)
TheCheetahwings
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I'm A Dead Bitch Baby!
What are some of your pet peeves in fanfiction/writing in general? :potterih: spill the deetz
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I wasn’t prepared for you.
For wanting something.


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When you walk into the room. You pull me close and we start to move
And we're spinning with the stars above. And you lift me up in a wave of love
Ooh, baby, do you know what that's worth? Ooh heaven is a place on earth
They say in heaven love comes first. We'll make heaven a place on earth

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100PercentCotton
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Yes, you do! You guys were friends, from what I remember? What his name, damnit! He was a great guy and was friends with that loony Zack(so much so that Zack chimed in to defend his script when I gave an iota of constructive criticism). Damn it, gonna have to check out USMB now.
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Cman710
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Are you talking about Johno or Chrisoh? If so, yikes, I'd disagree with those criticisms of their scripts myself, no offense. :rip: But that's all a matter of opinion.
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SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
Omg overused sarcasm I get you, its like aaah shut up
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100PercentCotton
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Cman710
Sep 17 2015, 02:23 PM
Are you talking about Johno or Chrisoh? If so, yikes, I'd disagree with those criticisms of their scripts myself, no offense. :rip: But that's all a matter of opinion.
ChrisOh! Whatever happened to that guy?!

He could write action really well, but his dialogue was filled with constant sarcasm and jokes of the sexual nature. That was really my only criticism of the scripts of his that I read. He even admitted that he wrote dialogue how he spoke. Just weakened the scripts as wholes, since they were otherwise pretty original and creative.
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SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
I hate overly meta & gross dialogue. Dialog can be so eh sometimes.
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100PercentCotton
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Some people know how to write dialogue with utter perfection. I certainly am not one of them. I probably spend more time rewriting dialogue than the time it takes to actually write the script.
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TheCheetahwings
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Bad Dialog is a pretty big deal breaker, ngl. But it really takes practice, so :sideari:
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I wasn’t prepared for you.
For wanting something.


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When you walk into the room. You pull me close and we start to move
And we're spinning with the stars above. And you lift me up in a wave of love
Ooh, baby, do you know what that's worth? Ooh heaven is a place on earth
They say in heaven love comes first. We'll make heaven a place on earth

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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
Bad pacing, 3 kills within 10 pages and then 50 pages without ANY feels like a drag tbh
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I’ve been recruiting for the Rebellion for a long time.
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shiley740
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Matty
Sep 27 2015, 08:28 PM
3 kills within 10 pages
#SelfDrag @ DH :yasmama:
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SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
shiley740
Sep 27 2015, 08:34 PM
Matty
Sep 27 2015, 08:28 PM
3 kills within 10 pages
#SelfDrag @ DH :yasmama:
Go in :umok:
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