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| TheCheetahwings | Apr 29 2015, 11:12 PM Post #1 |
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I'm A Dead Bitch Baby!
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What are some of your pet peeves in fanfiction/writing in general? spill the deetz
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| 100PercentCotton | Sep 17 2015, 02:13 PM Post #11 |
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Yes, you do! You guys were friends, from what I remember? What his name, damnit! He was a great guy and was friends with that loony Zack(so much so that Zack chimed in to defend his script when I gave an iota of constructive criticism). Damn it, gonna have to check out USMB now. |
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| Cman710 | Sep 17 2015, 02:23 PM Post #12 |
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Are you talking about Johno or Chrisoh? If so, yikes, I'd disagree with those criticisms of their scripts myself, no offense. But that's all a matter of opinion.
Edited by Cman710, Sep 17 2015, 02:40 PM.
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Sep 17 2015, 02:23 PM Post #13 |
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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Omg overused sarcasm I get you, its like aaah shut up |
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| 100PercentCotton | Sep 17 2015, 04:43 PM Post #14 |
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ChrisOh! Whatever happened to that guy?! He could write action really well, but his dialogue was filled with constant sarcasm and jokes of the sexual nature. That was really my only criticism of the scripts of his that I read. He even admitted that he wrote dialogue how he spoke. Just weakened the scripts as wholes, since they were otherwise pretty original and creative. |
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Sep 17 2015, 04:47 PM Post #15 |
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I hate overly meta & gross dialogue. Dialog can be so eh sometimes. |
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| 100PercentCotton | Sep 17 2015, 04:51 PM Post #16 |
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Some people know how to write dialogue with utter perfection. I certainly am not one of them. I probably spend more time rewriting dialogue than the time it takes to actually write the script. |
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| TheCheetahwings | Sep 26 2015, 11:54 PM Post #17 |
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Bad Dialog is a pretty big deal breaker, ngl. But it really takes practice, so
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| Matty | Sep 27 2015, 08:28 PM Post #18 |
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
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Bad pacing, 3 kills within 10 pages and then 50 pages without ANY feels like a drag tbh |
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| shiley740 | Sep 27 2015, 08:34 PM Post #19 |
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#SelfDrag @ DH
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Sep 27 2015, 08:47 PM Post #20 |
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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But that's all a matter of opinion.
















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