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| TheCheetahwings | Apr 29 2015, 11:12 PM Post #1 |
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I'm A Dead Bitch Baby!
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What are some of your pet peeves in fanfiction/writing in general? spill the deetz
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![]() I wasn’t prepared for you. For wanting something. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() When you walk into the room. You pull me close and we start to move And we're spinning with the stars above. And you lift me up in a wave of love Ooh, baby, do you know what that's worth? Ooh heaven is a place on earth They say in heaven love comes first. We'll make heaven a place on earth | |
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| Matty | Sep 27 2015, 09:11 PM Post #21 |
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Not rlly. There were more kills and they all spread out to maybe page 14-5 (cant rlly remember) and then the final few pages were intros so it's not like I had 50 pages of charrie talking so... |
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| shiley740 | Sep 27 2015, 09:20 PM Post #22 |
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
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8 ppl died in the first 4 pages tho, I mean, it's not an issue anywhere else, but we all know Ch 1 went a bit too heavy w/ it...
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| Matty | Sep 27 2015, 09:26 PM Post #23 |
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The body count worked and didn't kill the pacing....All the kill scenes took up 1/3 of the whole chapter. Had good scenes to keep up the one-two punch with a good amount of pages for the intros, without being messy and then the rest of it was perry's encounter w/ the killer. Besides DH is a satirical horror/comedy so your attempt to come at me is kinda weak and doesn't rlly add up with my complain since a WHOLE HOUR of a movie w/o kills drags more than 15 mins that eve has a scene w/ the killer & a victim. Anyways...moving on |
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Sep 27 2015, 09:28 PM Post #24 |
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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The fumes
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| shiley740 | Sep 27 2015, 09:33 PM Post #25 |
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
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When someone takes a casual joke seriously & writes a mini essay...
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| Matty | Sep 27 2015, 09:40 PM Post #26 |
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I didn't take it rlly seriously. But I guess that's just your way of tryna ignore the fact that bro you got COLLECTED
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| shiley740 | Sep 27 2015, 09:44 PM Post #27 |
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
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I'm actually just tryna move on from the issue w/out causing a big fuss over it since I already stated it was just a casual joke, but u can keep this one-sided argument going if u so must.
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Sep 27 2015, 09:49 PM Post #28 |
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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| Matty | Sep 27 2015, 10:04 PM Post #29 |
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ik it was a joke & i COLLCTED u hard |
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| shiley740 | Sep 27 2015, 10:07 PM Post #30 |
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There was nothing to collect here tho, unless u mean that essay u left behind & if so, u can grab it.
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