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Writing Pet Peeves
Topic Started: Apr 29 2015, 11:12 PM (412 Views)
TheCheetahwings
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I'm A Dead Bitch Baby!
What are some of your pet peeves in fanfiction/writing in general? :potterih: spill the deetz
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I wasn’t prepared for you.
For wanting something.


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When you walk into the room. You pull me close and we start to move
And we're spinning with the stars above. And you lift me up in a wave of love
Ooh, baby, do you know what that's worth? Ooh heaven is a place on earth
They say in heaven love comes first. We'll make heaven a place on earth

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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
Not rlly. There were more kills and they all spread out to maybe page 14-5 (cant rlly remember) and then the final few pages were intros so it's not like I had 50 pages of charrie talking so...
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I’ve been recruiting for the Rebellion for a long time.
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shiley740
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
Matty
Sep 27 2015, 09:11 PM
Not rlly. There were more kills and they all spread out to maybe page 14-5 (cant rlly remember) and then the final few pages were intros so it's not like I had 50 pages of charrie talking so...
8 ppl died in the first 4 pages tho, I mean, it's not an issue anywhere else, but we all know Ch 1 went a bit too heavy w/ it... :umok:
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
shiley740
Sep 27 2015, 09:20 PM
Matty
Sep 27 2015, 09:11 PM
Not rlly. There were more kills and they all spread out to maybe page 14-5 (cant rlly remember) and then the final few pages were intros so it's not like I had 50 pages of charrie talking so...
8 ppl died in the first 4 pages tho, I mean, it's not an issue anywhere else, but we all know Ch 1 went a bit too heavy w/ it... :umok:
The body count worked and didn't kill the pacing....All the kill scenes took up 1/3 of the whole chapter. Had good scenes to keep up the one-two punch with a good amount of pages for the intros, without being messy and then the rest of it was perry's encounter w/ the killer. Besides DH is a satirical horror/comedy so your attempt to come at me is kinda weak and doesn't rlly add up with my complain since a WHOLE HOUR of a movie w/o kills drags more than 15 mins that eve has a scene w/ the killer & a victim. Anyways...moving on
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SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
The fumes :umok:
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shiley740
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
SnazzyShadeEmily
Sep 27 2015, 09:28 PM
The fumes :umok:
When someone takes a casual joke seriously & writes a mini essay...Posted Image
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
I didn't take it rlly seriously. But I guess that's just your way of tryna ignore the fact that bro you got COLLECTED
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shiley740
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Matty
Sep 27 2015, 09:40 PM
I didn't take it rlly seriously. But I guess that's just your way of tryna ignore the fact that bro you got COLLECTED
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I'm actually just tryna move on from the issue w/out causing a big fuss over it since I already stated it was just a casual joke, but u can keep this one-sided argument going if u so must.
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SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
ik it was a joke & i COLLCTED u hard
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Matty
Sep 27 2015, 10:04 PM
ik it was a joke & i COLLCTED u hard
There was nothing to collect here tho, unless u mean that essay u left behind & if so, u can grab it.Posted Image
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