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| Meta Murder Mystery | Chapter Seven | |
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Jun 27 2015, 04:00 PM Post #1 |
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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![]() When a superstar is murdered shortly before filming of the new meta horror blockbuster sensation, her costars and detectives alike try to crack the case of who's the killer before they find themselves killed too. ![]() OPENING CREDITS: CAST: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() CHARACTERS: Masyn & Matylda McCorri Veronica Nash Mitchell Raymond Diamond Olesya LoveGood Odessa aka 'Pauline Waters' Gertrude Davis Laredo Lestat Dahlia White Jenna Hardy Emily Hart Daniel Harrison Franklin 'Frankie' Grant CHAPTERS: Chapter One 'Haunted' Chapter Two 'Out of the Woods' Chapter Three 'Shut Up & Drive' Chapter Four 'Farewell' Chapter Five 'Hot 'N' Cold' Chapter Six 'Man Down' Chapter Seven 'Starring Role' |
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Jul 2 2015, 05:49 PM Post #91 |
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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It actually means theres a (or more) LoD this chapter
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| shiley740 | Jul 2 2015, 05:50 PM Post #92 |
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
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Lemme scroll to the end before reading to see who's on the chopping block.
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| Matty | Jul 2 2015, 05:52 PM Post #93 |
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
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The element of surprise >>> ![]() Lbr I'mma do the same
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Jul 2 2015, 05:55 PM Post #94 |
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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6 minutes ![]()
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| shiley740 | Jul 2 2015, 05:58 PM Post #95 |
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All these thread bumps tho.
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| Matty | Jul 2 2015, 05:59 PM Post #96 |
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
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1 minute left ![]() ikr the attempt to snatch more posts
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Jul 2 2015, 06:00 PM Post #97 |
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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I made the art may as well post it ![]() Chapter Two 'Out of the Woods' |
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| Matty | Jul 2 2015, 06:27 PM Post #98 |
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| SnazzyShadeEmily | Jul 2 2015, 06:35 PM Post #99 |
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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Spoiler: click to toggle |
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| shiley740 | Jul 2 2015, 06:38 PM Post #100 |
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Time to review as I read, once again. Spoiler: click to toggle Overall, doesn't particularly live up to the first chapter. We already got all the introductions, even if giving Olesya some stuff to do was nice, but it felt as if the first half revolved all around her, leaving the rest of the characters' actions rather eccentric & resorting some to non-entities. I understand if certain characters aren't particularly interesting to you, but as the writer of it, I'd expect some kind of try @ doing more for them aside from a quick scene or leaving them as a butt to the joke of others. Accompanied with that is just an overall lack of tension, which I feel a longer chapter could've assisted in bringing about, since the killer hasn't particularly done much with their one appearance & threat last chapter. Hoping the next chapter isn't so rushed as I RLY feel this RPG has potential, but there's a fine line before it starts veering off like SSM did midway through. Ready to see the turn-out of these choices tho.
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@ u coming for the same 3 ppl Matt did, but not completely bothered since it isn't me 

4:38 AM Jul 11