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Meta Murder Mystery | Chapter Seven
Topic Started: Jun 27 2015, 04:00 PM (3,940 Views)
SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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When a superstar is murdered shortly before filming of the new meta horror blockbuster sensation, her costars and detectives alike try to crack the case of who's the killer before they find themselves killed too.

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OPENING CREDITS:


CAST:

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CHARACTERS:
Masyn & Matylda McCorri
Veronica Nash
Mitchell Raymond
Diamond
Olesya LoveGood
Odessa aka 'Pauline Waters'
Gertrude Davis
Laredo Lestat
Dahlia White
Jenna Hardy
Emily Hart
Daniel Harrison
Franklin 'Frankie' Grant

CHAPTERS:
Chapter One 'Haunted'
Chapter Two 'Out of the Woods'
Chapter Three 'Shut Up & Drive'
Chapter Four 'Farewell'
Chapter Five 'Hot 'N' Cold'
Chapter Six 'Man Down'
Chapter Seven 'Starring Role'
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SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 05:48 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 05:47 PM
Does that mean you killed someone off without a LOD question? :siptay:
Expose that crusty witch :sipari:
It actually means theres a (or more) LoD this chapter :snazzrih:
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shiley740
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
SnazzyShadeEmily
Jul 2 2015, 05:49 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 05:48 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 05:47 PM
Does that mean you killed someone off without a LOD question? :siptay:
Expose that crusty witch :sipari:
It actually means theres a (or more) LoD this chapter :snazzrih:
Lemme scroll to the end before reading to see who's on the chopping block. :siptay2:
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 05:50 PM
SnazzyShadeEmily
Jul 2 2015, 05:49 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 05:48 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 05:47 PM
Does that mean you killed someone off without a LOD question? :siptay:
Expose that crusty witch :sipari:
It actually means theres a (or more) LoD this chapter :snazzrih:
Lemme scroll to the end before reading to see who's on the chopping block. :siptay2:
The element of surprise >>> :sipari:

Lbr I'mma do the same :sipari:
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I’ve been recruiting for the Rebellion for a long time.
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SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
6 minutes :excited:
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shiley740
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
All these thread bumps tho. :sideari:
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
1 minute left :sipari:

shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 05:58 PM
All these thread bumps tho. :sideari:
ikr the attempt to snatch more posts :sipari:
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
I made the art may as well post it :umwhat:

Chapter Two 'Out of the Woods'
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
:sipari:

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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:27 PM
:sipari:

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shiley740
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
Time to review as I read, once again. :siptay:
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Overall, doesn't particularly live up to the first chapter. We already got all the introductions, even if giving Olesya some stuff to do was nice, but it felt as if the first half revolved all around her, leaving the rest of the characters' actions rather eccentric & resorting some to non-entities. I understand if certain characters aren't particularly interesting to you, but as the writer of it, I'd expect some kind of try @ doing more for them aside from a quick scene or leaving them as a butt to the joke of others. Accompanied with that is just an overall lack of tension, which I feel a longer chapter could've assisted in bringing about, since the killer hasn't particularly done much with their one appearance & threat last chapter. Hoping the next chapter isn't so rushed as I RLY feel this RPG has potential, but there's a fine line before it starts veering off like SSM did midway through. Ready to see the turn-out of these choices tho. :ohno:
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