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Meta Murder Mystery | Chapter Seven
Topic Started: Jun 27 2015, 04:00 PM (3,939 Views)
SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
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When a superstar is murdered shortly before filming of the new meta horror blockbuster sensation, her costars and detectives alike try to crack the case of who's the killer before they find themselves killed too.

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OPENING CREDITS:


CAST:

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CHARACTERS:
Masyn & Matylda McCorri
Veronica Nash
Mitchell Raymond
Diamond
Olesya LoveGood
Odessa aka 'Pauline Waters'
Gertrude Davis
Laredo Lestat
Dahlia White
Jenna Hardy
Emily Hart
Daniel Harrison
Franklin 'Frankie' Grant

CHAPTERS:
Chapter One 'Haunted'
Chapter Two 'Out of the Woods'
Chapter Three 'Shut Up & Drive'
Chapter Four 'Farewell'
Chapter Five 'Hot 'N' Cold'
Chapter Six 'Man Down'
Chapter Seven 'Starring Role'
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
I actually have this theory that kinda works for everything that ep/ch1 of anything is always better than ep/ch2 :poordat:
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I’ve been recruiting for the Rebellion for a long time.
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shiley740
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:50 PM
I actually have this theory that kinda works for everything that ep/ch1 of anything is always better than ep/ch2 :poordat:
#MeanGirlsTease :snazzrih:

Why do you think ppl always say "Sequels suck" tho? :wiig:
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 06:52 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:50 PM
I actually have this theory that kinda works for everything that ep/ch1 of anything is always better than ep/ch2 :poordat:
#MeanGirlsTease :snazzrih:

Why do you think ppl always say "Sequels suck" tho? :wiig:
They're delicious, most sequels are great :siptay:
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I’ve been recruiting for the Rebellion for a long time.
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shiley740
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:58 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 06:52 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:50 PM
I actually have this theory that kinda works for everything that ep/ch1 of anything is always better than ep/ch2 :poordat:
#MeanGirlsTease :snazzrih:

Why do you think ppl always say "Sequels suck" tho? :wiig:
They're delicious, most sequels are great :siptay:
If you say so, sweetie. :snazzrih:
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 07:00 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:58 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 06:52 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:50 PM
I actually have this theory that kinda works for everything that ep/ch1 of anything is always better than ep/ch2 :poordat:
#MeanGirlsTease :snazzrih:

Why do you think ppl always say "Sequels suck" tho? :wiig:
They're delicious, most sequels are great :siptay:
If you say so, sweetie. :snazzrih:
Halloween 2 (not the RZ trash) :snazzrih:
Final Destination 2 (also new formula that lowkey slays the sequels that reset to the basic 1)
Scream 2 maybe (I've actually loved it more on rewatches lemme watch it rn actually)
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SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
Sorry you didn't enjoy it much, I'll take your comments to consideration when I'm writing Ch3 and beyond. Though the Laredo joke is more a jab at when you posted it & the reactions moreso than the character (who I do plan to actually use to their potential, if not hed have gotten the LoD this chapter). As for Olesya sidelining them, that's really just because it was her first scene and they all met her right then so it's only natural she'd get the spotlight then, I don't understand why that would really be an issue when this was her first real appearance with everyone. And with tension, well I'm obviously gonna do my best to make deaths/chases/threats/etc tension filled but nothing happening in Chapter 2 even needed a lot of tension imo. That said, with LoD's & more, Ch3 will have plenty of tension.
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shiley740
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 07:08 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 07:00 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:58 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 06:52 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:50 PM
I actually have this theory that kinda works for everything that ep/ch1 of anything is always better than ep/ch2 :poordat:
#MeanGirlsTease :snazzrih:

Why do you think ppl always say "Sequels suck" tho? :wiig:
They're delicious, most sequels are great :siptay:
If you say so, sweetie. :snazzrih:
Halloween 2 (not the RZ trash) :snazzrih:
Final Destination 2 (also new formula that lowkey slays the sequels that reset to the basic 1)
Scream 2 maybe (I've actually loved it more on rewatches lemme watch it rn actually)
You said MOST, let us look @ all the franchises that ever have existed (not just horror-related) that gradually grew shittier with each passing sequel or movies unfortunate enough to not surpass just one shitty sequel, forever killing any chances of a franchise for them. :snazzrih:
SnazzyShadeEmily
Jul 2 2015, 07:13 PM
Sorry you didn't enjoy it much, I'll take your comments to consideration when I'm writing Ch3 and beyond. Though the Laredo joke is more a jab at when you posted it & the reactions moreso than the character (who I do plan to actually use to their potential, if not hed have gotten the LoD this chapter). As for Olesya sidelining them, that's really just because it was her first scene and they all met her right then so it's only natural she'd get the spotlight then, I don't understand why that would really be an issue when this was her first real appearance with everyone. And with tension, well I'm obviously gonna do my best to make deaths/chases/threats/etc tension filled but nothing happening in Chapter 2 even needed a lot of tension imo. That said, with LoD's & more, Ch3 will have plenty of tension.
I mean, I still enjoyed it to a degree, it just didn't feel as cohesive as the first chapter to me, as I am still excited to see what you have in store for these characters, I just wanted to be honest about what didn't sit right with me. Fair enough @ Olesya needing to be given focus with her late intro, but as you could see throughout my "review as I read," that wasn't my big issue I had with her cause I was totally here for her clocking ppl until she took a racist turn. Still, as I said, looking forward to what's coming with chapter 3 (I just hope I didn't rub you the wrong way cause that wasn't my intention :ohno: ). :excited:
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SnazzyShadeEmily
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They said I wasn't good enough for television. How do you like me now, voices in my head?
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 07:13 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 07:08 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 07:00 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:58 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 06:52 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:50 PM
I actually have this theory that kinda works for everything that ep/ch1 of anything is always better than ep/ch2 :poordat:
#MeanGirlsTease :snazzrih:

Why do you think ppl always say "Sequels suck" tho? :wiig:
They're delicious, most sequels are great :siptay:
If you say so, sweetie. :snazzrih:
Halloween 2 (not the RZ trash) :snazzrih:
Final Destination 2 (also new formula that lowkey slays the sequels that reset to the basic 1)
Scream 2 maybe (I've actually loved it more on rewatches lemme watch it rn actually)
You said MOST, let us look @ all the franchises that ever have existed (not just horror-related) that gradually grew shittier with each passing sequel or movies unfortunate enough to not surpass just one shitty sequel, forever killing any chances of a franchise for them. :snazzrih:
SnazzyShadeEmily
Jul 2 2015, 07:13 PM
Sorry you didn't enjoy it much, I'll take your comments to consideration when I'm writing Ch3 and beyond. Though the Laredo joke is more a jab at when you posted it & the reactions moreso than the character (who I do plan to actually use to their potential, if not hed have gotten the LoD this chapter). As for Olesya sidelining them, that's really just because it was her first scene and they all met her right then so it's only natural she'd get the spotlight then, I don't understand why that would really be an issue when this was her first real appearance with everyone. And with tension, well I'm obviously gonna do my best to make deaths/chases/threats/etc tension filled but nothing happening in Chapter 2 even needed a lot of tension imo. That said, with LoD's & more, Ch3 will have plenty of tension.
I mean, I still enjoyed it to a degree, it just didn't feel as cohesive as the first chapter to me, as I am still excited to see what you have in store for these characters, I just wanted to be honest about what didn't sit right with me. Fair enough @ Olesya needing to be given focus with her late intro, but as you could see throughout my "review as I read," that wasn't my big issue I had with her cause I was totally here for her clocking ppl until she took a racist turn. Still, as I said, looking forward to what's coming with chapter 3 (I just hope I didn't rub you the wrong way cause that wasn't my intention :ohno: ). :excited:
In Olesya's defense, she was raised in a russian spy camp. They dont teach you about how to not be racist :siptay: and slave wasnt cuz veronica was black it was just an insult :siptay: Then I realized :siptay: but I kept it :snazzrih: the other one was race tho :siptay:
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Matty
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If you're really doing this, I want to help.
#OlesyaForPresident2k15 :sipari:
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shiley740
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"This isn't over...this isn't over by a long shot!"
SnazzyShadeEmily
Jul 2 2015, 07:21 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 07:13 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 07:08 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 07:00 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:58 PM
shiley740
Jul 2 2015, 06:52 PM
Matty
Jul 2 2015, 06:50 PM
I actually have this theory that kinda works for everything that ep/ch1 of anything is always better than ep/ch2 :poordat:
#MeanGirlsTease :snazzrih:

Why do you think ppl always say "Sequels suck" tho? :wiig:
They're delicious, most sequels are great :siptay:
If you say so, sweetie. :snazzrih:
Halloween 2 (not the RZ trash) :snazzrih:
Final Destination 2 (also new formula that lowkey slays the sequels that reset to the basic 1)
Scream 2 maybe (I've actually loved it more on rewatches lemme watch it rn actually)
You said MOST, let us look @ all the franchises that ever have existed (not just horror-related) that gradually grew shittier with each passing sequel or movies unfortunate enough to not surpass just one shitty sequel, forever killing any chances of a franchise for them. :snazzrih:
SnazzyShadeEmily
Jul 2 2015, 07:13 PM
Sorry you didn't enjoy it much, I'll take your comments to consideration when I'm writing Ch3 and beyond. Though the Laredo joke is more a jab at when you posted it & the reactions moreso than the character (who I do plan to actually use to their potential, if not hed have gotten the LoD this chapter). As for Olesya sidelining them, that's really just because it was her first scene and they all met her right then so it's only natural she'd get the spotlight then, I don't understand why that would really be an issue when this was her first real appearance with everyone. And with tension, well I'm obviously gonna do my best to make deaths/chases/threats/etc tension filled but nothing happening in Chapter 2 even needed a lot of tension imo. That said, with LoD's & more, Ch3 will have plenty of tension.
I mean, I still enjoyed it to a degree, it just didn't feel as cohesive as the first chapter to me, as I am still excited to see what you have in store for these characters, I just wanted to be honest about what didn't sit right with me. Fair enough @ Olesya needing to be given focus with her late intro, but as you could see throughout my "review as I read," that wasn't my big issue I had with her cause I was totally here for her clocking ppl until she took a racist turn. Still, as I said, looking forward to what's coming with chapter 3 (I just hope I didn't rub you the wrong way cause that wasn't my intention :ohno: ). :excited:
In Olesya's defense, she was raised in a russian spy camp. They dont teach you about how to not be racist :siptay: and slave wasnt cuz veronica was black it was just an insult :siptay: Then I realized :siptay: but I kept it :snazzrih: the other one was race tho :siptay:
You sure bout that? She didn't see any black ppl there? :siptay2:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Afro-Russian
But, I'll let that one slide with how easily she made Pauline her slave tho. :siptay2:
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