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When a superstar is murdered shortly before filming of the new meta horror blockbuster sensation, her costars and detectives alike try to crack the case of who's the killer before they find themselves killed too.
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Jan 24 2016, 09:26 PM
shiley740
Jan 24 2016, 08:56 PM
ONLY 4 DAYS LATER! (now only Matt, Tye, Tay, & Josh r left, even tho Tay won't be affecting anything here anymore )
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OH MY GOD EMILY DRAGGING GERT 2 THE PITS Y
em serving that suspicious rn
not drunk on cocaine
BITCH KEEP UR EYES ON THE ROAD WHILE U BOP DON'T LET RIH GETCHU KILT
OMFG THAT CAR IS GONEEEEEE
not police gal 92 & "cutie"
#GetThatPander w/
Honestly, how r EITHER of them still alive w/ this mess?
2 bad I already predicted he'd bite it, so no real devastation from me #LaterHoThatOnlyDidShit4AChap #NotEvenRelevantInDeath #BetterLuck2MatyldaAndLaredoTho #ButIAlreadyKnow1OfThemGotThatLOD #SoRIFP
ahhhh dahlia taking the fucking wine
DAHLIA IS WRECKING HER RN WHERE U @ HON?
I'm also getting the feeling Emily might just be a red herring now so
yes daniel shut her ass down, emily needs 2 be bopped back in2 line after her mess this chap
oop, them all leaving the room @ once, I know what's bout 2 happen
BITCH YES, I KNEW SHE WAS GONNA DIE, BUT IT WORKS CUZ U HAVEN'T SHOVED IN A BILLION RANDOS 2 DIE!
AHHHHH HER CRASHING IN2 THE FRAME
How did Emily even get separated from Matylda & Gert tho? & where is every1 else in respect 2 Jenna? This suspicious mess
all the simmer down usage in 1 chap tho
"Oh cut the sarcasm grandma"
Jenna might wanna come back when she isn't the most suspicious person in this chap, lbr
"Rockin' dude!" YYYYYYYYYYYY
Hmm, since the killer is bursting in rn, that means the killer can't be the obvs 3 dead-beats @ Frankie, Veronica, & Masyn, the ppl currently in the room @ Olesya, Daniel, & Mitchell, Gert or Pauline since they just teamed up, or Laredo or Diamond since I assume their lack of appearance can be attributed 2 them leaving the atudio last, but Matylda, Emily, & Jenna all went their separate ways after that 1 scene & all both Jenna & Emily have been #ServingTheSuspicionOnHigh & same goes 4 Dahlia bopping off 2 the bathroom rn, so while I'd rather not suspect Matylda, it could fit if u wanted 2 fake her out considering Olesya has been giving me slight final girl teas this chap, but I'm also not factoring in a #DoubleTeam even tho I know u have 2 options, so let's hope u just stick 2 1, ya?
WOW. IT ENDED RIGHT AFTER MY GIANT TIRADE WHAT MESS
Overall, not my all-time fav chap, since 5 still has that on lock, but I still liked it a lot, despite kind of reutilizing the "mansion" back-drop, it was @ least done in a fresh manner that contrasted greatly 2 the multiple doors, so kudos 2 u 4 that. I can agree w/ Ken that it wasn't the "funniest," but I feel it was the 1 that had the most story progress next 2 5 w/ all these little bits that seem 2 be winking @ us on things 2 come, so I'm ready 4 that shit whenever it comes around, since I know u've been sticking w/ the plans. This might fall around the middle of the pack 4 me, but still close enough 2 the top so it isn't like it wasn't enjoyable since u rly managed 2 balance every1 well enough, even if I found Masyn's death rather lackluster, but every1 can't have a Veronica-esque beatdown. Ready 4 the next chap tho!
Since I have 4 options, I'll just assume this is a 50/50 chance, unless u truly just wanna trash my charries, but I'mma go w/ D just becuz he craves that attention!
Thanks for the indepth review, I live for them every time I appreciate your honesty as always, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter even if it wasn't your #1. I didn't expect it to be anyone's as this chapter was largely set up for things to come so while not the best, a needed chapter in the everlying story. Aaaah I live for your theories and still refuse to comment in detail on them because nothing I can say would be wise to say because it's a mystery for a reason Thanks for the review and answer! I'll try to not keep you waiting too much longer to find out if Laredo lived or died (or if he even had a LoD ) but we still need Olesya's piece in the puzzle.... #Soon
Sorry @ everyone else for not replying this big And I saw your review Jack idk if I ever said so
Oopya, I could tell it was hinting @ things 2 come & I'm ready 4 everything that will!
Understandable tho, but I'mma keep bringing em ur way!
Well, it'll obvs still be a long enough time given Matt still has 2 answer & u have 2 get the writing out of the way but #PatienceIsAVirtue
Srry 4 taking so long but here r my thoughts & answer 2 the question so ch7 can get into progress now!
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Emily being so generous 2 give free rides 2 extras
EMILY RANDOMLY DESTROYING GERTRUDE OUTTA NOWHERE
EMILY FUCKING FIXING MASYN’S GRAMMAR A ME TEA
Emily shutting down Masyn’s boring life story
Drunk on cocaine tho?
Emily serving a killer tea right now tho
The casual Man Down playing, but how does Rihanna exist when Diamond also exist where’s the logic but lemme ignore cause Man Down is a bop
NOT JEEPERS
Me lowkey struggling 2 follow what’s going on rn but I’m guessing there’s a crash?
Police Gal 92 made me shout
NOT DEDE
Officer Rae Rae’s impact
The random Marina 4 the Greg appeal but I bet it worked as that song BOPS
Masyn being a fucking mess #rip
Y is someone always in the hospital tho?
Not the random crawling
This SUPER random & dramatic scene of him checking her pulse tho
Bye bye Masyn! U won’t be missed!
The killer ignoring Emily serving such a ScreaMTV tea w/ Piper being knocked out rn
Betsy Takahanawogny-Johnson tho
BETSY CLOCKING THE NEWS WOMAN FOR GETTING HER NAME WRONG I HOWLED
Pauline ignoring the murder & making everything about her >>
PAULINE CLOCKING MR. HU RANDOMLY GAVE ME LIFE
Dahlia being an annoying bitch #dienextpls
Dahlia being shady when her bitch ass was fooled tho
GOD IS GOOD
SHE ALSO GOT SPARED CAUSE SHE BOPPED 2 MAN DOWN
Daniel honestly better put Emily in her place because she’s being SO extra right now
Emily’s bitchiness is serving such a killer tea
LAUREN MADE ME SNORTLE @ UNPROFESSIONAL SCUM
Not her ass..
Not them throwing bodies in the river
Olesya randomly saying she’s the worst, a bit ooc
NOT WHATEVER A FUCKBOY DOES AT 5:45 ON A FRIDAY EVENING
I rolled my eyes w/ Matlyda
DIAMOND LIGHTING A FRENCH VANILLA CANDLE FUCKING DESTROYED ME
Diamond destroying Dahlia
Pauline going 2 Diamond 4 advice & help
Diamond being touched by her story
DIAMOND’S OH DEAR LEFT ME SHATTERED
Not Susie
SUSIE’S NOT IN THE MOOD 2 DIE
Olesya casually tryna slay that shooting
WHAT IS THAT MESSY INT.
Emily’s shrieking
NOT HER FAVE PEN THIS MEANS BUSINESS
Daniel & Gert >
Mitchell is so annoying
Not the instagram pic
AHHHHHHHH FUCKING LUPE KILLED ME
NOT “RACIST” I FUCKING HOWLED EAT HIM LUPE
OMG THE NAMETAG BEING MARIA I CAN’T
OLESYA FUCKING ENDING GERTRUDE’S LIFE
Not Gettrude
Not lupe being dead
I’mma have to go with H) Grab the papers & attack the killer
But overall this was a pretty great chapter while it did have some weak moments they could be casually overlooked due to how the chapter’s pace was great & I was intrigued the whole time as there was never a dull moment in between. I did think some jokes were either a hit or miss but for most of the time they were hits. I’m starting to suspect Emily on the high due to her messy bitch ass the entire chapter and even though I was wary @ that 1 line from Olesya I do think it sorta works if ur trying 2 redeem her and make her more human-ish so it does work & I’m here 4 this if she doesn’t die next chapter hopefully. But this was pretty good & I can’t wait 4 the next ch.
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Jan 25 2016, 03:14 PM
Srry 4 taking so long but here r my thoughts & answer 2 the question so ch7 can get into progress now!
Spoiler: click to toggle
Emily being so generous 2 give free rides 2 extras
EMILY RANDOMLY DESTROYING GERTRUDE OUTTA NOWHERE
EMILY FUCKING FIXING MASYN’S GRAMMAR A ME TEA
Emily shutting down Masyn’s boring life story
Drunk on cocaine tho?
Emily serving a killer tea right now tho
The casual Man Down playing, but how does Rihanna exist when Diamond also exist where’s the logic but lemme ignore cause Man Down is a bop
NOT JEEPERS
Me lowkey struggling 2 follow what’s going on rn but I’m guessing there’s a crash?
Police Gal 92 made me shout
NOT DEDE
Officer Rae Rae’s impact
The random Marina 4 the Greg appeal but I bet it worked as that song BOPS
Masyn being a fucking mess #rip
Y is someone always in the hospital tho?
Not the random crawling
This SUPER random & dramatic scene of him checking her pulse tho
Bye bye Masyn! U won’t be missed!
The killer ignoring Emily serving such a ScreaMTV tea w/ Piper being knocked out rn
Betsy Takahanawogny-Johnson tho
BETSY CLOCKING THE NEWS WOMAN FOR GETTING HER NAME WRONG I HOWLED
Pauline ignoring the murder & making everything about her >>
PAULINE CLOCKING MR. HU RANDOMLY GAVE ME LIFE
Dahlia being an annoying bitch #dienextpls
Dahlia being shady when her bitch ass was fooled tho
GOD IS GOOD
SHE ALSO GOT SPARED CAUSE SHE BOPPED 2 MAN DOWN
Daniel honestly better put Emily in her place because she’s being SO extra right now
Emily’s bitchiness is serving such a killer tea
LAUREN MADE ME SNORTLE @ UNPROFESSIONAL SCUM
Not her ass..
Not them throwing bodies in the river
Olesya randomly saying she’s the worst, a bit ooc
NOT WHATEVER A FUCKBOY DOES AT 5:45 ON A FRIDAY EVENING
I rolled my eyes w/ Matlyda
DIAMOND LIGHTING A FRENCH VANILLA CANDLE FUCKING DESTROYED ME
Diamond destroying Dahlia
Pauline going 2 Diamond 4 advice & help
Diamond being touched by her story
DIAMOND’S OH DEAR LEFT ME SHATTERED
Not Susie
SUSIE’S NOT IN THE MOOD 2 DIE
Olesya casually tryna slay that shooting
WHAT IS THAT MESSY INT.
Emily’s shrieking
NOT HER FAVE PEN THIS MEANS BUSINESS
Daniel & Gert >
Mitchell is so annoying
Not the instagram pic
AHHHHHHHH FUCKING LUPE KILLED ME
NOT “RACIST” I FUCKING HOWLED EAT HIM LUPE
OMG THE NAMETAG BEING MARIA I CAN’T
OLESYA FUCKING ENDING GERTRUDE’S LIFE
Not Gettrude
Not lupe being dead
I’mma have to go with H) Grab the papers & attack the killer
But overall this was a pretty great chapter while it did have some weak moments they could be casually overlooked due to how the chapter’s pace was great & I was intrigued the whole time as there was never a dull moment in between. I did think some jokes were either a hit or miss but for most of the time they were hits. I’m starting to suspect Emily on the high due to her messy bitch ass the entire chapter and even though I was wary @ that 1 line from Olesya I do think it sorta works if ur trying 2 redeem her and make her more human-ish so it does work & I’m here 4 this if she doesn’t die next chapter hopefully. But this was pretty good & I can’t wait 4 the next ch.
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Jan 25 2016, 03:14 PM
Srry 4 taking so long but here r my thoughts & answer 2 the question so ch7 can get into progress now!
Spoiler: click to toggle
Emily being so generous 2 give free rides 2 extras
EMILY RANDOMLY DESTROYING GERTRUDE OUTTA NOWHERE
EMILY FUCKING FIXING MASYN’S GRAMMAR A ME TEA
Emily shutting down Masyn’s boring life story
Drunk on cocaine tho?
Emily serving a killer tea right now tho
The casual Man Down playing, but how does Rihanna exist when Diamond also exist where’s the logic but lemme ignore cause Man Down is a bop
NOT JEEPERS
Me lowkey struggling 2 follow what’s going on rn but I’m guessing there’s a crash?
Police Gal 92 made me shout
NOT DEDE
Officer Rae Rae’s impact
The random Marina 4 the Greg appeal but I bet it worked as that song BOPS
Masyn being a fucking mess #rip
Y is someone always in the hospital tho?
Not the random crawling
This SUPER random & dramatic scene of him checking her pulse tho
Bye bye Masyn! U won’t be missed!
The killer ignoring Emily serving such a ScreaMTV tea w/ Piper being knocked out rn
Betsy Takahanawogny-Johnson tho
BETSY CLOCKING THE NEWS WOMAN FOR GETTING HER NAME WRONG I HOWLED
Pauline ignoring the murder & making everything about her >>
PAULINE CLOCKING MR. HU RANDOMLY GAVE ME LIFE
Dahlia being an annoying bitch #dienextpls
Dahlia being shady when her bitch ass was fooled tho
GOD IS GOOD
SHE ALSO GOT SPARED CAUSE SHE BOPPED 2 MAN DOWN
Daniel honestly better put Emily in her place because she’s being SO extra right now
Emily’s bitchiness is serving such a killer tea
LAUREN MADE ME SNORTLE @ UNPROFESSIONAL SCUM
Not her ass..
Not them throwing bodies in the river
Olesya randomly saying she’s the worst, a bit ooc
NOT WHATEVER A FUCKBOY DOES AT 5:45 ON A FRIDAY EVENING
I rolled my eyes w/ Matlyda
DIAMOND LIGHTING A FRENCH VANILLA CANDLE FUCKING DESTROYED ME
Diamond destroying Dahlia
Pauline going 2 Diamond 4 advice & help
Diamond being touched by her story
DIAMOND’S OH DEAR LEFT ME SHATTERED
Not Susie
SUSIE’S NOT IN THE MOOD 2 DIE
Olesya casually tryna slay that shooting
WHAT IS THAT MESSY INT.
Emily’s shrieking
NOT HER FAVE PEN THIS MEANS BUSINESS
Daniel & Gert >
Mitchell is so annoying
Not the instagram pic
AHHHHHHHH FUCKING LUPE KILLED ME
NOT “RACIST” I FUCKING HOWLED EAT HIM LUPE
OMG THE NAMETAG BEING MARIA I CAN’T
OLESYA FUCKING ENDING GERTRUDE’S LIFE
Not Gettrude
Not lupe being dead
I’mma have to go with H) Grab the papers & attack the killer
But overall this was a pretty great chapter while it did have some weak moments they could be casually overlooked due to how the chapter’s pace was great & I was intrigued the whole time as there was never a dull moment in between. I did think some jokes were either a hit or miss but for most of the time they were hits. I’m starting to suspect Emily on the high due to her messy bitch ass the entire chapter and even though I was wary @ that 1 line from Olesya I do think it sorta works if ur trying 2 redeem her and make her more human-ish so it does work & I’m here 4 this if she doesn’t die next chapter hopefully. But this was pretty good & I can’t wait 4 the next ch.
Thanks for the play by play I lived for your thoughts <3 I dont think Olesyas line was ooc at all really, because while she does portray herself as someone who is completely self confident, she really has a lot of insecurity and a sense of lost purpose now that Mr. Hu is dead and shes out of the agency. That's where I was coming from writing Olesya this chapter, but I recognize your comment. But yeah thanks, glad you liked it & thankful I finally have that answer! Can't wait to start writing
Srry 4 taking so long but here r my thoughts & answer 2 the question so ch7 can get into progress now!
Spoiler: click to toggle
Emily being so generous 2 give free rides 2 extras
EMILY RANDOMLY DESTROYING GERTRUDE OUTTA NOWHERE
EMILY FUCKING FIXING MASYN’S GRAMMAR A ME TEA
Emily shutting down Masyn’s boring life story
Drunk on cocaine tho?
Emily serving a killer tea right now tho
The casual Man Down playing, but how does Rihanna exist when Diamond also exist where’s the logic but lemme ignore cause Man Down is a bop
NOT JEEPERS
Me lowkey struggling 2 follow what’s going on rn but I’m guessing there’s a crash?
Police Gal 92 made me shout
NOT DEDE
Officer Rae Rae’s impact
The random Marina 4 the Greg appeal but I bet it worked as that song BOPS
Masyn being a fucking mess #rip
Y is someone always in the hospital tho?
Not the random crawling
This SUPER random & dramatic scene of him checking her pulse tho
Bye bye Masyn! U won’t be missed!
The killer ignoring Emily serving such a ScreaMTV tea w/ Piper being knocked out rn
Betsy Takahanawogny-Johnson tho
BETSY CLOCKING THE NEWS WOMAN FOR GETTING HER NAME WRONG I HOWLED
Pauline ignoring the murder & making everything about her >>
PAULINE CLOCKING MR. HU RANDOMLY GAVE ME LIFE
Dahlia being an annoying bitch #dienextpls
Dahlia being shady when her bitch ass was fooled tho
GOD IS GOOD
SHE ALSO GOT SPARED CAUSE SHE BOPPED 2 MAN DOWN
Daniel honestly better put Emily in her place because she’s being SO extra right now
Emily’s bitchiness is serving such a killer tea
LAUREN MADE ME SNORTLE @ UNPROFESSIONAL SCUM
Not her ass..
Not them throwing bodies in the river
Olesya randomly saying she’s the worst, a bit ooc
NOT WHATEVER A FUCKBOY DOES AT 5:45 ON A FRIDAY EVENING
I rolled my eyes w/ Matlyda
DIAMOND LIGHTING A FRENCH VANILLA CANDLE FUCKING DESTROYED ME
Diamond destroying Dahlia
Pauline going 2 Diamond 4 advice & help
Diamond being touched by her story
DIAMOND’S OH DEAR LEFT ME SHATTERED
Not Susie
SUSIE’S NOT IN THE MOOD 2 DIE
Olesya casually tryna slay that shooting
WHAT IS THAT MESSY INT.
Emily’s shrieking
NOT HER FAVE PEN THIS MEANS BUSINESS
Daniel & Gert >
Mitchell is so annoying
Not the instagram pic
AHHHHHHHH FUCKING LUPE KILLED ME
NOT “RACIST” I FUCKING HOWLED EAT HIM LUPE
OMG THE NAMETAG BEING MARIA I CAN’T
OLESYA FUCKING ENDING GERTRUDE’S LIFE
Not Gettrude
Not lupe being dead
I’mma have to go with H) Grab the papers & attack the killer
But overall this was a pretty great chapter while it did have some weak moments they could be casually overlooked due to how the chapter’s pace was great & I was intrigued the whole time as there was never a dull moment in between. I did think some jokes were either a hit or miss but for most of the time they were hits. I’m starting to suspect Emily on the high due to her messy bitch ass the entire chapter and even though I was wary @ that 1 line from Olesya I do think it sorta works if ur trying 2 redeem her and make her more human-ish so it does work & I’m here 4 this if she doesn’t die next chapter hopefully. But this was pretty good & I can’t wait 4 the next ch.
Thanks for the play by play I lived for your thoughts <3 I dont think Olesyas line was ooc at all really, because while she does portray herself as someone who is completely self confident, she really has a lot of insecurity and a sense of lost purpose now that Mr. Hu is dead and shes out of the agency. That's where I was coming from writing Olesya this chapter, but I recognize your comment. But yeah thanks, glad you liked it & thankful I finally have that answer! Can't wait to start writing
That was when I reading but I pointed out at the end that I ended up thinking that the comment rlly worked so keep at it stevearoo
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