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Ok, if you where in this sitch; Working on a story's flow
Topic Started: Aug 22 2015, 03:31 PM (21 Views)
Cryptic
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So I'm working on a story where I have a kid at camp who is lured into skinny dipping with the camp's caretaker's daughter. Thing is said daughter isn't human, and is in fact some kind of water spirit who has made people think she's human for years as she feeds on campers who she drowns in her waters ever few years.

The kid manages to get away when he manifests a latex like substance over his whole body, though he can't remember what happened that night, he just knows he woke up coated in purple "paint". Removing the paint proves problematic to his gender and she is left trying to cover things up.

what I'm stuck on is does she call her mother in a panic the next day, or covers things up for the rest of the week until she goes home to do laundry. Or do I mix the two having her call and the mother just says sit tight we'll deal with it on the weekend.
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Serenade
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First off, Im confused - does the latex substance turn him female? Or it is problematic to remove due to 'sensitive tugging' (unrelated: remember kids, use the right wax for the job).

That aside, I'd probably go with a mix of the two personally.
"Would you like something to drink?" She opened the fridge. "We have water, milk, juice, spiders, Dr. Pepper-"
"Spiders?"
"Spiders it is then."
"No, that wasn't-"
But she was already pouring him a brimming glass of spiders.
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First thing would depend on the chances of 'her' getting caught, as well as the possible consequences of 'her' no longer being a guy
"What would Kara Thrace do? She'd kick my @$$ for acting this way.
Sunswords, form on me."
--Haleanar "Roguewing" Donovan, CAG, BSG-47 Solaria
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"You cannot play God, then wash your hands of the things you've created.
Sooner or later, the day comes, when you can't hide from the things you've done anymore."
--William Adama, CO, BSG-75, Galactica
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Cryptic
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Serenade,Aug 22 2015
04:38 PM
First off, Im confused - does the latex substance turn him female? Or it is problematic to remove due to 'sensitive tugging' (unrelated: remember kids, use the right wax for the job).

That aside, I'd probably go with a mix of the two personally.

Yes and Yes. The sensitive tugging leads to a "Pop! AHHH!!!" moment.

As for getting caught, the only real change is below the belt so, so long as she's not caught naked she should be fine.
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Definitely have her call, then.
This is NOT something you just spring on someone when you come home
"What would Kara Thrace do? She'd kick my @$$ for acting this way.
Sunswords, form on me."
--Haleanar "Roguewing" Donovan, CAG, BSG-47 Solaria
~~~~~~~~~
"You cannot play God, then wash your hands of the things you've created.
Sooner or later, the day comes, when you can't hide from the things you've done anymore."
--William Adama, CO, BSG-75, Galactica
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