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Topic Started: Jun 13 2015, 10:36 PM (317 Views)
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Edited by Bill, Jul 20 2015, 10:54 PM.
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I'd drop the shield/blast from your photokinesis in total, but keep the app for blinding/disorientating targets, make yourself invisible, etc. I'd also like a time limit on your invisibility, and how long you can keep a person stunned.

If you want to keep the shield/blast for photokinesis, drop one of your other applications, (I recommend either reflexes or vocemnesis) and drop the potency of it to around 1-2 tonnes at maximum.

If you want to stay adept at one of your abilities, drop one of them. Otherwise, go with basic/novice on one of them, and make the other proficient.

PS: None of your abilities should be at their "Final Stage", there should always be room for improvement. I'd suggest removing the bits of that so it doesn't cause confusion amongst other roleplayers later on.

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Ulfric
Jun 15 2015, 06:37 PM
PS: None of your abilities should be at their "Final Stage", there should always be room for improvement. I'd suggest removing the bits of that so it doesn't cause confusion amongst other roleplayers later on.

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i am okay with the sub apps being in their "final stage" (sounds like some gay dbz shit lol)
lock vocal commands for now

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Dear <character name>,
Please stand-by while we try to decide whether your character is fit enough to stay in the manor. However, you are fine to walk about for now.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
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Josh
Jun 16 2015, 09:45 AM
(sounds like some gay dbz shit lol)
You sound like some gay dbz shit.
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Josh
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yes i do

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Dear <character name>,
Bruce Wayne has formally invited you to attend his manor, on your next available evening, to support a new act of justice. It is advised you turn up with the utter-most respect towards learning.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
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This is my active character.
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