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Raint
Topic Started: Jun 14 2015, 12:21 AM (106 Views)
Azaa

Hotel Username: Azaa
Character Name: Rhyan harris
Character Alias: Raint
Character Age: 6-18 (Advised that your character isn't above 18 for calendar purposes) 16
Character Affiliation: Wayne Foundation
Character Powers: Raint Powesuit: This Raint Powersuit can Withstand Explosions,Fire and block any magic source
  • Menal erase (): Ability to set time to dawn the time to a few minutes to few years this can only happen when raint has complete control over the persons brain
  • Power Negation: Declines the powers of others whilst focusing onto their body or physical touch this can only last about 30-40 minutes with the powers being negated
  • Preflex: To see anything happen before it happens while concentrating onto the players movements lasts 30-50 minutes
  • Animation: Able to bring this to life but cannot be dead humans this can come by Touching the one object with physical Touch But only can last through 20-30 minutes(Add more as you wish)

Character Abilities:
  • [Stealth [/b]: Raint Has trained with the best stealth ninja's and his parnets on how to keep his body descreet
  • Hand-Hand Combat:Raint has trained with ninjas and also has been working on his Jui-Jutsu Alot of the few years training with his parents (Add more as you wish)[/list
    Character Weaknesses:
    • Nuclear Origins or Anything Similar to that)
    • Emotional Reasoning
    • Possibly villainous
    Edited by Azaa, Jun 16 2015, 12:17 AM.
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you need to go more in-depth about your power abilities and explain what they actually do. also you will need to put actual limitations rather than weaknesses.
an example of this is the following:
"power negation" - can temporarily negate a targets powers for X amount of time through touch.

also, explain how these powers come under your umbrella term
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Dear <character name>,
Bruce Wayne has decided that you are not fit enough for the new act of justice. We're sorry to deliver this news to you. We hope you the best in the future.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
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