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zAUNITE
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Jun 16 2015, 05:07 PM
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- Mano Williams
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Real Name: Mano Williams Alias: Sharkbite Origin: Cursed Human Age: 17 Sex: Male Height: 6'2 Weight: 201lb+ Powers:
- Shark Physiology: Mano found a mystical shark tooth when he was 12 year old, that when it cut him, bestowed the powers of Chondrakha upon him, to a much lesser extent. He inherited incredibly powerful Shark-like attributes from the tooth. He is capable of changing from a Shark-Like Humanoid to a small Megalodon, or any point imbetween depending on his environment. He is semi-aquatic, meaning he is able to breath both salt-water and air. Mano's teeth are impossibly sharp, comparable to rare materials such as Amazonium or Promethium. In some instances they can break, however quickly regrow.
- Superhuman Durability: Mano has incredibly thick and durable outer dermal cortex, make of flexibly collagenous fibres and arranges as a helical network surrounding his body. It functions as an out skeleton, and a first layer of protection. This allows him to withstand high temperatures, the intense pressures of underwater as well as the freezing cold depths of the arctic ocean. The actual tissues of his body, fat and muscle are far denser, acting as blubber and protection. His skeleton is unlike that a terrestrial vertebrate, and is made of cartilage and connective tissues. It is highly flexible and durable, yet is about half as dense as human bones. (5 tonnes.)
- Superhuman Strength: Mano is far stronger than the average human, his muscles are efficient enough that he can lift a truck with relative ease. His muscles are capable of exerting extreme and raw power, even when on land. This strength extends to his jaws, although to a much greater severity. Mano can crunch his jaws with enough power to crush solid rock. In water, he is capable of dragging weights far greater than he can on land. (5 tonnes, + Bite.)
- Enhanced Senses: Mano's senses are strong, but only at their full strength when underwater. Along with the usual senses, Mano has an additional 2 senses, Electroreception and Water Sense. Mano is capable of smelly pray from huge distances, enabling him to track with almost the same accuracy as a bear or a wolf. Underwater, he outstrips both of these by a thousand fold, able to detect life over a mile away. He is capable of changing between humanoid and sharklike eyes, which enable to him to see in almost total darkness in sacrifice for protection.
Equipment:- Bladed Knuckle Dusters: Crafted from the fossilized tooth of an ancient sea-beast of Greek Mythlogy, Mano has a set of magical bladed knuckle dusters. They close on wounds once they taste blood or make a good connection, leaving miniature shark bites.
Skills:- Martial Arts: Mano has been trained in some Atlantean Martial arts and their land-adaptions, making him proficient at H2H and weapon combat.
- Peak Human Stamina: Due to his training in long distance and short distance swimming, Mano has extremely high stamina and lung capacity.
- Swimming: Even without his powers, Mano is an extremely talented swimmer, completing at an Olympic Level in every single kind of stroke. However, upon obtaining his powers, Mano is capable of swimming at 80mph
Limitations:- Hydration: Mano dries up if he is out of water for a long time, and does this faster in dry and hot enviroment, for example- he could survive without ever entering water in a swamp environment. However in a Sahara desert, he wouldn't be able to survive for more than 4 hours.
- Fresh Water: Mano is unable to breath fresh water, as it causes his cells to swell up. He is also unable to drink fresh-water.
- Blood: Although on dry land, the smell of blood is not heavy enough that it could influence Mano's behavior, blood in water causes him to go into a frenzy.
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Edited by zAUNITE, Jun 16 2015, 05:21 PM.
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ULFRIC
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Jun 16 2015, 05:18 PM
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Remove your "Prometheum-like teeth" and shape-shifting ability.
Drop your strength/durability to 3 tonnes in total, and make sure you don't roleplay having "two sets of durability". Things should still pierce your skin, like swords, bullets, daggers, etc.
If you could go into depth into what "electrorecetion" (not a real word, by the way) and "Water Sense" do for you, that'd be great too.
Make sure you state that if you're in the water, you should only be able to extend your senses to those in the water, not people above or on land. You might want to lower it, as well. A mile's a bit much.
I'd lock or remove the dusters, seeing as you already have strength and some sort of shark-bite ability (That I'm letting slide as a passive)
Drop your martial arts to basic, and remove peak-human stamina.
Drop your max swimming speed from 80 mph to roughly 30-40.
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Josh
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Jun 16 2015, 05:36 PM
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