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Topic Started: Jun 20 2015, 06:11 PM (108 Views)
Taijutsu

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Habboon Username: Taijutsu
Character Name: Rox
Character Alias: None
Character Age: Seventeen
Character Sex: Female
Character Affiliation: Daxam
Character Race: Daxamite

  • Daxamite Physiology & Solar Radiation Absorption: When on Earth, Rox is empowered by the yellow sun. Born under Daxam's red sun, the ultraviolet radiation of Earth's yellow sun can energize Rox's brain and all of her senses. Not only does it empower her senses, but her entire physiology is enhanced by the ultraviolet radiation and gains several abilities. Like Kryptonians, born on a giant world with a heavy gravity, Daxamites automatically become super-strong in Earth's light gravity. From this source, they also acquire super-strength, super-breath, super-speed and flight as well as non-muscular, super-powers such as superhuman senses, x-ray vision, telescopic vision, microscopic vision, super-hearing, super-memory and super-calculations.

    • Invulnerability: Yellow-sun radiation, which only tans humans' skin, it hardens Rox's skin to near indestructibility. It's almost impossible for her to be harmed by blunt, physical forces at or below three tonnes, even resistant to fire and lightning. However sharper objects may be able to pierce her hardened flesh.
    • Superhuman Strength: Rox's muscles expand once under the Earth's yellow sun and her strength is highly increased, she's able to lift three tonnes however her strength can be mixed with her hardening skin to create a harsher, desner force to add strength to each hit.
    • Superhuman Vision: Under a yellow sun, Rox has enhanced vision and is able to fire infrared heat beams from her eyes, these heat beams can cut through dense metal as if it were butter because of the intensity of the heat from her eyes.


  • Rox's Axe: Her trusted weapon from her home planet, Daxam, her axe is a weapon she home crafted and engineered. It is a high-technology weapon which is strangely lightweight as well as resilient because of the material is is made of, which can only be harvested on Daxam. Rox usually carries the weapon in it's axe form because it is large, long and easy to wield because it is so lightweight whilst able to cut easily through flesh, etc. When she spins it around however, the end of the hilt of the axe acts as a gun which she can fire high-voltage shots from, which can cause a person to be stunned for three minutes if hit directly. The axe can be broken by attacking the joint between the hilt and the blade itself and separating them.

  • Weakness: Unlike Kryptonians, whose super-powers are subdued from them by the radioactive remnants of their home world, a Daxamite's major weakness is his vulnerability to Lead, which does not exist on their planet. Another difference is that, while Green Kryptonite can eventually kill Kryptonians after prolonged exposure, once it is removed the pain eases and the Kryptonian's strength and powers eventually return to him/her. For Daxamites, any exposure to Lead causes pain and extreme weakness, even after they are taken to safety.

    Additionally, although Rox's physiology is highly enhanced with yellow sun radiation, this does not make her immune to magic and she is highly susceptible to it. Additionally, her physiology can weaken her as when her skin becomes hardended she becomes more dense, therefore slower and her incredibly tough flesh can be cut by sharp objects.

    Rox is not used to being on Earth and therefore has no unlocked her complete true potential under a yellow sun, her possible powers are highly restricted,
Edited by Taijutsu, Jun 20 2015, 11:29 PM.
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If you could list out your weaknesses, like Lead and Magic, Kryptonite, etc. That'd be great.

You should probably post up your strength and durability to four tonnes.

You should post up a limit on your invulnerability, probably linking up with your strength. The whole; "Neither radium rays, nor lightning, nor fire can harm them, making them invulnerable to almost all physical harm." Sounds a bit over the top, and we'd prefer you just form it into being resistant to damage, and having a durability, whereas sharp objects like bullets or swords may harm you more than most. (And could be a formidable weakness)

You seem to have three applications squished into superhuman vision at once; Telescopic Vision, Molecular Vision, and Heat Vision. If you want to stick with your four tonne strength and durability, you should pick one, and see where it goes.

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Taijutsu

sorry lol i didn't finish this but thank u for ur help teen titans sage
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You should probably lock the abilities that you don't have in your physiology description.

Please tone down your axe so that instead of firing insta-killing volts of electricity, it stuns most humans.

Now that you've added equipment, make your strength and durability three tonnes.

Should probably edit everything I've asked you to in the last post as well, except the one's tht I've just changed.
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Taijutsu

ok thank u a lot it is all done now
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seems fine

staffs open to share their opinion tho

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Please stand-by while we try to decide whether your character is fit enough to stay in the manor. However, you are fine to walk about for now.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
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State some sort of time limit for how long they're stunned for if they're hit by the blast from the axe.
And state some sort of weakness on the axe overall; like a weakspot or just that it can only take x amount of tons before breaking.
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Taijutsu

done
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thanks homie

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Bruce Wayne has formally invited you to attend his manor, on your next available evening, to support a new act of justice. It is advised you turn up with the utmost respect towards learning.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
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