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| Taijutsu | Jun 20 2015, 06:11 PM Post #1 | ||
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Edited by Taijutsu, Jun 20 2015, 11:29 PM.
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| ULFRIC | Jun 20 2015, 06:19 PM Post #2 | ||
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If you could list out your weaknesses, like Lead and Magic, Kryptonite, etc. That'd be great. You should probably post up your strength and durability to four tonnes. You should post up a limit on your invulnerability, probably linking up with your strength. The whole; "Neither radium rays, nor lightning, nor fire can harm them, making them invulnerable to almost all physical harm." Sounds a bit over the top, and we'd prefer you just form it into being resistant to damage, and having a durability, whereas sharp objects like bullets or swords may harm you more than most. (And could be a formidable weakness) You seem to have three applications squished into superhuman vision at once; Telescopic Vision, Molecular Vision, and Heat Vision. If you want to stick with your four tonne strength and durability, you should pick one, and see where it goes. |
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| Taijutsu | Jun 20 2015, 06:22 PM Post #3 | ||
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sorry lol i didn't finish this but thank u for ur help teen titans sage | ||
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| ULFRIC | Jun 20 2015, 06:27 PM Post #4 | ||
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You should probably lock the abilities that you don't have in your physiology description. Please tone down your axe so that instead of firing insta-killing volts of electricity, it stuns most humans. Now that you've added equipment, make your strength and durability three tonnes. Should probably edit everything I've asked you to in the last post as well, except the one's tht I've just changed. |
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| Taijutsu | Jun 20 2015, 06:38 PM Post #5 | ||
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ok thank u a lot it is all done now | ||
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| ULFRIC | Jun 20 2015, 06:49 PM Post #6 | ||
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seems fine staffs open to share their opinion tho ![]() Dear <character name>, Please stand-by while we try to decide whether your character is fit enough to stay in the manor. However, you are fine to walk about for now. Yours faithfully, Alfred T.C. Pennyworth. |
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| Bullseye | Jun 20 2015, 09:38 PM Post #7 | ||
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State some sort of time limit for how long they're stunned for if they're hit by the blast from the axe. And state some sort of weakness on the axe overall; like a weakspot or just that it can only take x amount of tons before breaking. |
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| Taijutsu | Jun 20 2015, 11:30 PM Post #8 | ||
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done | ||
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| Bullseye | Jun 20 2015, 11:44 PM Post #9 | ||
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thanks homie![]() Dear <character name>, Bruce Wayne has formally invited you to attend his manor, on your next available evening, to support a new act of justice. It is advised you turn up with the utmost respect towards learning. Yours faithfully, Alfred T.C. Pennyworth. |
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