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Jensen Kelsh
Topic Started: Jun 22 2015, 11:08 AM (117 Views)
Gary
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Hotel Username: JesterCoyote
Character Name: Jensen Kelsh
Character Alias: Polish Smoker
Character Age: 17
Character Affiliation: Wayne Foundation
Character Powers: Typhokinesis: The ability to manipulate smoke.
  • Shaping/Manipulating smoke: Create smoke screens for cover to escape one's foes, or clear smoke from an area, clearing one's vision and air.
  • Aerokinetic Flight: By turning himself into the entity of smoke (only partially, see Invisibility), he's able to fly for as long as he's not out of breath (which is about 30 seconds)
  • Deoxygenation: By having foes in the area loose oxygen he is able to make them hallucinate and sometimes even faint.
  • Aerokinetic Constructs: Using the smoke, Jensen is able to enchance existing weapons or create his own (such as smoke hand blasts)
  • Invisibility: By turning himself into the smoke form his body is dematerialising into that smoke, thus he becomes physically unavailible to be hit. Lasts as long as Aerokinetic Flight, but it is a must to note he can not go through material objects. [perhaps will develop the ability in the future]

Character Abilities:
  • Marksman - beginner: Stands up for his status of a grim detective. Shoots well enough, though not 10/10.
  • Combat mastery - beginner: Not a good combatant, but he makes up for it by being smart enough and setting traps.

Character Weaknesses:
  • Psionic/Mental attacks.
  • Can be overpowered by Air/Gas manipulators.
  • If he uses the smokescreen he can be detected via thermal vision.

Edited by Gary, Jun 22 2015, 06:47 PM.
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Bullseye
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Ehh, remove Death Inducement for now - you can dev into it down the road.
Ya' have no real reason to be both proficient in both marksmanship and hand-to-hand, so drop them both to beginner.

You also have too many apps clunked together in Aerokinetic Constructs/Aerokinetic Flight/Invisibility.
Write them all out separately like you did with the rest of the apps.
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Gary
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All done all added
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Dear <character name>,
Please stand-by while we try to decide whether your character is fit enough to stay in the manor. However, you are fine to walk about for now.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
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Dear <character name>,
Bruce Wayne has formally invited you to attend his manor, on your next available evening, to support a new act of justice. It is advised you turn up with the utmost respect towards learning.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
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Development 1:

Username Here: JesterCoyote
Character File Name here Jensen Kelsh
Character Development:

  • Peak-Human Endurance
  • Solidification Level I: Limited to his own smoke, can only create simple constructs such as swords/shards.
  • Constantly Active Depression/Diffused State of Mind: As a person that witnessed death of the Hope Lantern, he couldn't go through it nearly as the others did. Even now he doesn't see the point in things, and may easily abandon his teammates if he starts thinking about the eternal things, thus becoming unreliable as a member of a team.

Reason: After constantly training to put his rage out due to the bloodbath that appeared in the tournaments, Jensen Kelsh realised he has grown stronger... Yet as it comes to his attention now being stronger is nothing when you face the loss of hope. His mental wounds are deeply staggering, making him even more vulnerable to psionic attacks or mind control now. As he grows stronger in power, he slowly fades away, becoming weaker in being human.
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