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| Gary | Jun 22 2015, 11:08 AM Post #1 |
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![]() Hotel Username: JesterCoyote Character Name: Jensen Kelsh Character Alias: Polish Smoker Character Age: 17 Character Affiliation: Wayne Foundation Character Powers: Typhokinesis: The ability to manipulate smoke.
Character Abilities:
Character Weaknesses:
Edited by Gary, Jun 22 2015, 06:47 PM.
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| Bullseye | Jun 22 2015, 06:06 PM Post #2 |
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Ehh, remove Death Inducement for now - you can dev into it down the road. Ya' have no real reason to be both proficient in both marksmanship and hand-to-hand, so drop them both to beginner. You also have too many apps clunked together in Aerokinetic Constructs/Aerokinetic Flight/Invisibility. Write them all out separately like you did with the rest of the apps. |
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| Gary | Jun 22 2015, 06:47 PM Post #3 |
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All done all added |
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| Bullseye | Jun 22 2015, 10:57 PM Post #4 |
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![]() Dear <character name>, Please stand-by while we try to decide whether your character is fit enough to stay in the manor. However, you are fine to walk about for now. Yours faithfully, Alfred T.C. Pennyworth. |
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| ULFRIC | Jun 23 2015, 05:52 AM Post #5 |
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![]() Dear <character name>, Bruce Wayne has formally invited you to attend his manor, on your next available evening, to support a new act of justice. It is advised you turn up with the utmost respect towards learning. Yours faithfully, Alfred T.C. Pennyworth. |
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| Gary | Jun 27 2015, 06:50 PM Post #6 |
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Development 1: Username Here: JesterCoyote Character File Name here Jensen Kelsh Character Development:
Reason: After constantly training to put his rage out due to the bloodbath that appeared in the tournaments, Jensen Kelsh realised he has grown stronger... Yet as it comes to his attention now being stronger is nothing when you face the loss of hope. His mental wounds are deeply staggering, making him even more vulnerable to psionic attacks or mind control now. As he grows stronger in power, he slowly fades away, becoming weaker in being human. |
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