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Xun [ THE CROW ]; The Bird Man of Gotham
Topic Started: Jun 26 2015, 12:37 AM (202 Views)
Senpai

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Character Name: Xun Wayne
Character Alias: The Crow
Character Age: 18
Character Affiliation: Wayne Foundation, Bat Family
Character Powers:


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Crow's Feathers,

Crow Wing
: [Sharp Throwing Blade]
  • Power Application: Crow Wing -Similar to a Batarang, More Boomerang Shaped and molded as a wing.

    Crow Feather - Slender blade used for close range fighting, capable of cutting through thing metals such as zinc and aluminum alloys. Also can be used by hand to cut glass.
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    Utilities: Grappling Gun, Smoke Pellets, Standard Pistol, Fear Gas (Hidden), Collapsible Combat Pole which fans open to a bullet shield, . : Although used in secret, Xun is not afraid to use armed weapons when unsupervised. The fear gas formula archived in the Bat computer was taken and recreated by Xun in order to use for his own purposes without permission. When used, the Crow suit takes on its more zombified form to those inhaling its fumes.

    The Suit : The under garment, typically cloaked in that of a dark, fire-proofed fabric, is copied from Bruce Wayne's standard batsuit. The helmet is capable of standard night vision and contains a Wayne patented air filter as well as binocular vision.

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    Energy Projection: Unharnessed, Hidden capability. Only sudden outbursts when under extreme pressure. Typically harms both Crow and surrounded targets. Xun, when under pressure, releases a powerful and uncontrollably burst of psychic energy, blasting both himself and anyone within a 2-11 meter radius. This has only happened in certain simulations where life threatening or anxiety-causing situations have reached their peak. This level of angst can prove deadly to Xun, and has proved itself as a dangerous last resort, risking his life to save a mission. In spite of constant behavioral therapy, The Crow has yet to control his powerful psychic urges. The Wayne Foundation, however, proves to push its envelopes to create a hero with both technical and psychic prowess to meet the fronts of evil.

    Character Abilities:
    • Experienced Brawler, Not Fully Trained. Training towards peak-human capabilities: Currently Under Training within Wayne's jurisdiction.[/b]: Xun represents the early training of a Bat-Family recruit. Forming his own unique identity within the family as an untrained, street raised child with unusual gifts. He has not reached peak human capability, although his monthly assessments show a steady climb towards the goal. His fighting skill is not very high, although being an experience brawler has given him enough tactic to earn a place in many missions. He's sloppy, jagged, unrefined and typically an anti-hero. He has no problems blurring the line between the ethics of the Bat-Family and the law, when going unsupervised as evidenced by his Fear Gas and Dual Pistols. Where he has weaknesses, he makes up with dirty tactics. Unlike most members of the Bat-Family, the Crow's suit is not capable of gliding or extended flight, and is typically used as a ground agent.

      Stealth Xun's suit is just-about the standard of most other bat suit reincarnations sans the ability to glide. In terms of rendering capability, Xun's suit mimics that of the earlier bat suit, with a far simpler get up which favors speed, agility and stealth over armored rooftop brooding. Only the chest plates are bullet proofed, while the cape provides protection from medium level explosions and fire. A stealth-over-combat approach which was taken from Batman's earliest days is deeply rooted in this suit. Unlike Bruce's far more advanced, full proofed suit you will note that the Crow's is far less upgraded due to him being in his most early recruitment stages. The suit is built as a copy of a blue print which was a hand-me-down from the Caped Crusader to the young lad, to allow him to do simple missions. However, Xun's made a bit of a legacy among crime rings as a more ruthless, unrefined sidekick.




    • Character Weaknesses:
      • Weakness 1 Fragility
      • Weakness 2 Impatience, Anger, Bloodthirst
      • Weakness Can be hurt normally during combat.



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      A Bit of History

      Born first name Xun, without a last name due to an anomaly in his birth records according to his adoption facility, was raised in an adoption facility until being dismissed on his 18th birthday. Always a troublemaker, having displayed high levels of self awareness at a young age. As a popular trouble maker among his peers, Xun learnt to use fear and violence to achieve his status and protection among his peers. Typically getting into brawls and crime situations as a young child, Xun's high sense of justice and evil kept him a strong anti-hero brooding the Gotham streets with his more-than-average strength and capabilities.


      Xun's capabilities, although blurred in the ethical department and wildly unrefined in the combat sector, are on a steady growth curve towards peak human capability to rival that of the Dark Knight himself. As an incentives for his steady work, Xun was granted the blue prints of a standard, less upgraded batsuit similar to that of Bruce's very first appearances and missions as the Batman. By salvaging whatever novel pieces of equipment and material he can find, Xun managed to piece together a less-than-resembling suit and donned his own identity by which he'd fulfill his own ground missions: the Crow.


      "Batman is dead, the Crow has risen."
      Edited by Senpai, Jun 27 2015, 02:42 AM.
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Channy
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Remove how you're Batman's adopted son. Remove some utilities, you'll gain more through developments. Your whole suit wont be bulletproof. Lower meter radius for the energy since you stated it's uncontrollable, and provide a heat temperature/force measurement.
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1) Some utilities removed
2_Radius changed from 2-11 meters
3) Bullet-proofed Chest Plates Only for Stealth and Weight Reduction
4) Cape is used for protection against things such as explosions and burning buildings etc
5) Xun's adoption history has been edited
6-- Im not sure where to find heat and temperature information to suit this scenario, so I edited it out for a simpler explanation? If you'd like to provide information that'd also be great.

Edited by Senpai, Jun 26 2015, 04:09 AM.
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Melody
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Beware the Black Cat!
Explain more about your replicated fear gas, its not going to be something thats very powerful right off bat. You're going to have to develop that to have greater effects and durations . Also, either the suit is going to have to lose some major utilities or you're going to have to lock the Energy Projection for now and develop that later as well.
Edited by Melody, Jun 26 2015, 04:30 AM.
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Senpai

Please point out which of the utilities are too much to start with. Also just noting that the blue print image is not used to describe the suit in words, as in written on the blue print but instead just as a design depiction.

The energy projection was nerfed to begin with. I specifically noted it as a hidden capability, which I meant to imply that it almost never happens and when it does, happens at 2-11 meters in radius (which I will RP to be either significant or not depending on the appropriate context). It wasn't meant to be a full power, or combat move. It's more of a dangerous effect that happens when Xun's life is in immediate danger, as in death without an escape. I wanted it to be as random in danger as possible, being tiny flashes to larger booms depending on the severity of Xun's situation.

The fear gas will also be nerfed, lasting only 1:30 seconds due to an incomplete formula and an anomaly created when Xun tries to recreate the compound on his own, which causes it to diffuse quickly over time and be filtered out of the body due to its low toxicity content, unlike the full formula.

Would love to hear the Mod's opinion on this before I get to editing!
Edited by Senpai, Jun 26 2015, 05:08 AM.
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It seems fine, just know your fear gas wont drive others insane. I'll speak to some other staff members to see if you are qualified for Bat-Family. Also note that your gun wont house actual bullets unless on missions or during storyline scenes. Thx for cooperating xx
Edited by Channy, Jun 26 2015, 05:38 AM.
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Senpai

Thanks!
Yes, the fear gas is a downgraded, incomplete and improvised formula. It just provides low key hallucinations and typically is used for harsh interrogations or distracting more powerful enemies. I'm fine with using rubber bullets as well ^^
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Melody
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Looks good to me.

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Dear <character name>,
Bruce Wayne has formally invited you to attend his manor, on your next available evening, to support a new act of justice. It is advised you turn up with the utmost respect towards learning.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
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Senpai

Technicalities added for clearer scope of his ability:

Technicalities [Training Towards Peak Human]
Strength: 96 lbs.
Durability: 96 lbs.
Speed: 13 Mph
Stamina: 20 Minutes Straight

Feel free to correct me if this is over powered to begin with.


EDIT: When can I get my badge request accepted?
Edited by Senpai, Jun 26 2015, 02:39 PM.
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Channy
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Cut that out, this was accepted without it. If you want to keep those boosted you have to cut out things significantly.
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