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Tanner Smith
Topic Started: Jun 28 2015, 03:20 AM (82 Views)
Cameron

TANNER
SMITH
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<ACCESSING INFORMATION>...<PROCESSING DATA>...<OPENING FILE>..<loaded:'TANNER JOHNSON'>
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[] Tanner Smith's story is going to be announced soon.

<DIGGING...><PROCESSING GENERAL INFORMATION...><SUCCESS>
Name:Tanner Darius Bruce
Age:17
Race:Super-Human
Weight:173 lbs
Height:6'0
Sex:Male
Origin:New York City
Build:Moderate
Specialty:Looking Good
Merit Amount:No Merit System
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<DOWNLOADING ADDITIONAL INFORMATION...><ACCESSING POWER INFORMATION...><SUCCESS>
  • Mesmerizing Presence: Tanner has an overwhelmingly hypnotic presence which bends the minds of whoever gazes upon him to his whim. Tanner's presence has a dominating effect on the minds of beings around him and makes opponents utterly enamored upon being near him. This presence comes from a number of abilities that make up the power, rather than this power making the rest of his abilities. The sheer power of their versatile collaboration causes this effect. For more information click (here) UNLOCKED

    • Pheromone Control: Tanner has complete control over the pheromones, a secreted or excreted chemical factor that triggers a social response in members of the same species, of oneself and others, including releasing pheromones that induce attraction between subjects (or within a subject for oneself), to exuding pheromones strong enough to change emotions and draw crowds. Pheromones may induce a pleasure, or may put subjects into a state of high suggestibility (either of which is useful for limited mind control). Other uses of these pheromones can be used to mark territory (causing people to feel the compulsion to not go into a certain area), or to leave a pheromone path which others can follow. Tanner's pheromones may even increase stamina, slightly stimulate the healing process or (used offensively) cause foes to become disoriented, violent or extremely sick. UNLOCKED

    • ... Bow.: Tanner is capable of utilizing his mesmerizing presence to induce moments of defeat to his targets. This ability was made solely for those with indomitable will, capable of eating away at their willpower the longer they notice him and/or are near him. Those who are more highly developed in willpower are capable of defending against it, however those without indomitable will have little to no chance against this power. This ability is only possible through manipulating the emotional energies of his opponent(s) with either his Empathy to directly deteriorate their emotion of willpower, or through his pheromone manipulation to bombard their minds with what seems to be primal instinct to see Tanner as alpha. This ability can be used once per OOC hour on one opponent, each use terribly strains his power and deletes further usage of any other emotion affecting ability.UNLOCKED

    • Perfect Partner: Tanner's beauty is quite destructively present, and uncontrollable. Although he is incapable of manipulating people's thoughts with this ability, he is always, literally, the most eligible partner anyone can find (from their perspective). Simply by being supernaturally physically attractive. The previous statement regarding to him being unable to effect people's thoughts are slightly diluted due to his pheromone manipulation, which can force anyone to find him as the most attractive being ever.UNLOCKED

    • Empathy: Tanner can tell how ppl r feeling and change emotions to some extent but only after prolonged time of being around them.UNLOCKED
  • I Can't Fight: Tanner really can not fucking fight at all, and uses his mental manipulating powers to keep his opponents at bay.

  • There's a Limit: He is only capable of manipulating the pheromones inside of his body and not the pheromones inside of others. Most of his abilities usually take time to be utilized (aside from his supernatural beauty). Pheromones only work on people of the same species so ppl who aren't human are immune to his pheromone manipulation.
Edited by Cameron, Jun 28 2015, 05:32 AM.
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ULFRIC
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If you could do something similar to the template we've suggested, we'd love to look at your file!
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Cameron

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Jun 28 2015, 03:50 AM
If you could do something similar to the template we've suggested, we'd love to look at your file!
seriously? i'd put the same information on there and i wouldnt even simplify it this just has more looks wtf.
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Just seems like something for a bio instead of a simple file, you don't need to add a story or anything and it makes it easier to read things.

you are telling that your pheromones can:
Increase Stamina
Increase Healing Factor
Cause Vertigo
Ward people off
Attract people
Induce sleep
Mind Control.
- All of that is too much for a beginner, tone it down drastically.

Also tone down your empathy and bow ability.
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Cameron

huh why am i not allowed to do those things if theyre able to be resisted against. the ability is there for the sole reason for being powerful. the bow ability doesnt need 2 be toned down bc it .. cant be .. LOL.. im already letting people resist against it and its just the ability to eat away at ppls will.

ur basically asking me to change my power as a whole bc mesmerizing presence is supposed to be just that, mesmerizing. i need to be able to have some type of offensive capability and youre asking me to remove all of them with ur list. u cant increase stamina with pheromones bc that makes no sense. you can stimulate the healing factor with pheromones but that doesnt mean youre gonna be healing any faster, just means it'll be healing more efficiently, which has little to no effect in this rp unless doing open-heart surgery (which i doubt will be done). mind control? no. lol. never even stated. ward people off? yeah sure. because thats what pheromones are for in nature. attract people? hello its supposed to do that have u not seen "perfect partner" ability? it shouldn't be a problem to induce sleep i only plan on using that when .. allowed in special scenes ig..?

bow is only for ppl who insist on fighting me, its a defense mechanism. my character can't fight so he has to get people to think they can't fight him. just like in the wild, animals behave intimidatingly to get their foes to stand down (i.e.: frilled lizards, certain cobras, pufferfish, cuttlefish, even some peacocks). i need that ability or ill die ic on the first day lol. so no.
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its called you have too many applications under your umbrella power, lock some and its not a big deal to develop them.

your applications need some sort of weakness, ie state a time limit for how long you can hold the bow for before feeling extremely strained.
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Cameron

crossed some out and is now weak af
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Channy
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also i stripped your descriptions piece by piece and that is what i got out of it. it is literally stated plain as day in your descriptions, i take it how you give it to me. the point is to be weak af when you first start off as the roleplay, you are literally a new amateur to your power, you wont have all those unlocked abilities as a new student to the manor. there is also a thing called developments, which you will receive as the roleplay progresses and so does your character. and you wont die on the first day, killing isn't allowed, ggwp. dont give me shit because i'm a mod and not admin, it's not how it works.

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Dear <character name>,
Please stand-by while we try to decide whether your character is fit enough to stay in the manor. However, you are fine to walk about for now.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
Edited by Channy, Jun 28 2015, 07:23 AM.
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Cameron

no1s giving you shit fam this isn't even an argument im just saying what it is. im gonna die and lose every sim until i get like 30 devs and thats all.
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Dear <character name>,
Bruce Wayne has formally invited you to attend his manor, on your next available evening, to support a new act of justice. It is advised you turn up with the utmost respect towards learning.

Yours faithfully,
Alfred T.C. Pennyworth.
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