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| Cameron | Jun 28 2015, 03:20 AM Post #1 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ULFRIC | Jun 28 2015, 03:50 AM Post #2 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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If you could do something similar to the template we've suggested, we'd love to look at your file! | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Cameron | Jun 28 2015, 03:52 AM Post #3 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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seriously? i'd put the same information on there and i wouldnt even simplify it this just has more looks wtf. |
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| Channy | Jun 28 2015, 04:13 AM Post #4 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Just seems like something for a bio instead of a simple file, you don't need to add a story or anything and it makes it easier to read things. you are telling that your pheromones can: Increase Stamina Increase Healing Factor Cause Vertigo Ward people off Attract people Induce sleep Mind Control. - All of that is too much for a beginner, tone it down drastically. Also tone down your empathy and bow ability. |
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| Cameron | Jun 28 2015, 04:26 AM Post #5 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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huh why am i not allowed to do those things if theyre able to be resisted against. the ability is there for the sole reason for being powerful. the bow ability doesnt need 2 be toned down bc it .. cant be .. LOL.. im already letting people resist against it and its just the ability to eat away at ppls will. ur basically asking me to change my power as a whole bc mesmerizing presence is supposed to be just that, mesmerizing. i need to be able to have some type of offensive capability and youre asking me to remove all of them with ur list. u cant increase stamina with pheromones bc that makes no sense. you can stimulate the healing factor with pheromones but that doesnt mean youre gonna be healing any faster, just means it'll be healing more efficiently, which has little to no effect in this rp unless doing open-heart surgery (which i doubt will be done). mind control? no. lol. never even stated. ward people off? yeah sure. because thats what pheromones are for in nature. attract people? hello its supposed to do that have u not seen "perfect partner" ability? it shouldn't be a problem to induce sleep i only plan on using that when .. allowed in special scenes ig..? bow is only for ppl who insist on fighting me, its a defense mechanism. my character can't fight so he has to get people to think they can't fight him. just like in the wild, animals behave intimidatingly to get their foes to stand down (i.e.: frilled lizards, certain cobras, pufferfish, cuttlefish, even some peacocks). i need that ability or ill die ic on the first day lol. so no. |
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| Bullseye | Jun 28 2015, 05:13 AM Post #6 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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its called you have too many applications under your umbrella power, lock some and its not a big deal to develop them. your applications need some sort of weakness, ie state a time limit for how long you can hold the bow for before feeling extremely strained. |
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| Cameron | Jun 28 2015, 05:39 AM Post #7 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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crossed some out and is now weak af | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Channy | Jun 28 2015, 07:21 AM Post #8 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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also i stripped your descriptions piece by piece and that is what i got out of it. it is literally stated plain as day in your descriptions, i take it how you give it to me. the point is to be weak af when you first start off as the roleplay, you are literally a new amateur to your power, you wont have all those unlocked abilities as a new student to the manor. there is also a thing called developments, which you will receive as the roleplay progresses and so does your character. and you wont die on the first day, killing isn't allowed, ggwp. dont give me shit because i'm a mod and not admin, it's not how it works.![]() Dear <character name>, Please stand-by while we try to decide whether your character is fit enough to stay in the manor. However, you are fine to walk about for now. Yours faithfully, Alfred T.C. Pennyworth. Edited by Channy, Jun 28 2015, 07:23 AM.
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| Cameron | Jun 29 2015, 01:46 AM Post #9 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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no1s giving you shit fam this isn't even an argument im just saying what it is. im gonna die and lose every sim until i get like 30 devs and thats all. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ULFRIC | Jun 29 2015, 03:38 AM Post #10 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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![]() Dear <character name>, Bruce Wayne has formally invited you to attend his manor, on your next available evening, to support a new act of justice. It is advised you turn up with the utmost respect towards learning. Yours faithfully, Alfred T.C. Pennyworth. |
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