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| The Forum of Madness; The TTFF fanfic | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 20 2006, 11:35 AM (2,443 Views) | |
| Jet Prower (TF) | Sep 20 2006, 11:35 AM Post #1 |
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The Forum of Madness! Chapter 1: A Wonderful place The great community of Two Tailed Fox Forum is usually a peaceful place. There are the many member roaming the town all happy playing games, writing stories, showing off their artistic skills, and just having a chat with friends. New people constantly visited the community, and some even became citizens of the great town. Everything is peaceful most of the time, there may be the small squabble that the mod, the other name for the police, have to deal with, and it usually ends peacefully. The mods roam the street keeping the peace and even socialize with lots of the citizens too. Everything is peaceful and everyone is happy. Even right near the town is the magnificent castle where the leaders meet up and discuss things. In the main area of the castle is the throne room, where the highest up of everyone sits on her thrown and rules with a kind heart over everyone. Her name was Queen Trixie. A lovely lady who though her great ruling has made the community what it is today. Just do not be fooled though, she may be a kind hearted queen, but if you make her mad, you better start praying for your life. She was a magnificent color pink that everyone admired, and she wore her purple cape and her huge crown showing she was the one in charge. Standing right next to her, on her left side, with a shield on his back and a sword sheathed by his side was her head advisor and Knight, Tails Fanatic. TF or Jet as he was more known as, Stood firm by Queen Trixie’s side and always gave her advice and had some of the same authority as her when she was not available. Jet was colored in his bright green fur and stood proud to be in the position he was in. By the door, were two other high up knights that you would not want to mess with. On the left stood a dark blue fox by the name of Ray. He wore the same weapons as Jet did, just he wore more clothes than Jet did though. Besides the clothes, the only thing Jet wore most of the time, was his head knight patch. Ray and Jet had once had a squabble over who would be head knight, but it was settled in a nice way, and they both respect each other still and have even become really good friends too. Ray did more behind the scenes paper work than some, but he was still very important and valuable to the community. Now on the right was a yellow fox wearing the same shield and sword, was another Knight by the name Sunshine. Sunshine was a very lighthearted knight. He was usually always happy. The only thing he ever got upset at were rule breakers. Those that cross him, are in big trouble. Sunshine and Ray, where very important and without them, the community would be very hard to live in. Standing inside near the main entrance was the new knight to the castle. This one is a first also. It was a female knight by the name of Ryan Prower. She is Jet’s little sister, so she has stuck close to him and though hard work earned her way up to her position. Her biggest annoyance though was when people hear her name and assume she is a guy. If you do this, run for you life, you will be dead in less than a second if you don’t. She spends some time in the castle but you are more likely to find this knight in the RPG suburbs playing with friends. Out in the city, there are many happy residents who like to have fun. They are fully guarded by the town soldiers. They may have a job to do but they still have many friends and things they like to do. They only go all forceful with they have to, and you have to bring it on first for them to attack. So as long as people are on the good side, the mods will leave you alone and respect and help you in any way that they can. There are many soldiers out there, and knowing them could mean the difference between life and death. There are first, the first class soldiers. These consist of first, Yamanaka Ino or YI, she is the leader of the first class soldiers and a good soldier at that. She may every now and then lose control, but most people have that happen to them from time to time, but everything is going good for her now. Next up is BC, some know her as BlackCrystal, but she changed it to BC for better use. BC is a quiet yet good mod. She doesn’t say much, but when she does, it is usually full of great wisdom and knowledge. Next on the list is Mr. J. He is a mysterious mod that no one knows his real name. People have asked, but he is known only to the public as Mr. J. His closest friends know the name, but they are sworn to never tell it or he will do something, yet no one seems to know what though, because maybe they don’t want to know. Next one is Immortal Cookie, she is the crazy mod that will just act silly and have a fun time the whole entire day. If you are mean to her though, she may be a cute and cuddly kitty, but when she is a mad kitty, she will dig those claws in and sink her teeth deep into you in furry. And the last of the first class mods is a guy that goes by the name of Splash. Now this mod is the one you do not want to make mad. He takes his job very serious, and if you see someone walking towards you with a pair of black sunglasses on and a frown, you are in deep trouble my friend, because he will not take kindly to you if you are a bad man. And finally are the regular soldier mods. They include Lisa Fox, the artist pretty girl of a mod who is always willing to do something for a friend. Next is La Koda, the flirtiest girl on the whole forum, yet can still have a fun time and party all night long at those sporting events. Next is Ozymandius, he is another serious mod that sometimes seem to have an on, off switch to emotions, but is still very friendly and helpful when he can be. Next is the forum undercover in the shadows mod, Shifty Powers. This guy, has a long bandit like tail and most of the time watches the people in the shadows and when he is needed he strikes, but if you see him in a normal mood, he can be really nice. Next is Amy and Cream r Kawaii, or AC as some call him. Please for the love of god do not call him a girl, or you remember IC, that would be nothing to this guy. He will be furious to the roof, and that is not a good thing. And finally is TailsNeverFails, or TNF as most know him. This mod is kind of hyperactive and loves to go to parties and dance. He may be a wild man, yet he has a sensitive side that he only reveals to his closest friends. And these are the mods that protect this great place we know as Two Tailed Fox Forum. But one day, things seemed to be a bit different around the city. Things just didn’t seem right on this day. To normal citizens it looked just like any other day, but to the uppers, something seemed up, and they didn’t know where or what was going to happen or when, but they had a feeling something was going on. At about that time, there was a loud scream and from a nearby street in the General District. The nearby mod at that time was Shifty Powers. He heard that scream and had no time to go into hiding and immediately headed for the scream. He rounded a few corners heading for the sound of the scream. After one final turn he found the location of the scream, in front of him was a red fox laying on the ground holding a pair of car keys bleeding, but he was not breathing. Shifty feared he was to late, but in front of him was another person, this one wore mostly all black clothes, dark red eyes, wearing a headband on his head, and holding a bloody Kunai with an evil grin on his face as he stared down at the red fox he just took down and now at Shifty. ………..To Be Continued. |
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| Mcloud1 | Sep 20 2006, 11:42 AM Post #2 |
Aura-borialias
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Woo hoo! I got shot! I have to admit, it was quite fun. |
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| Mr J | Sep 20 2006, 11:43 AM Post #3 |
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Ayecarumbah! This is terrific TF I hope the next one is as good as this one! *coughBCisagirlcough* |
What do you think of me? I want to know.
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| Aurorae | Sep 20 2006, 11:43 AM Post #4 |
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Yup thats definetely me I have my moments X3 Good job |
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| Mr J | Sep 20 2006, 11:44 AM Post #5 |
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I think this should be pinned ^_^ |
What do you think of me? I want to know.
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| xBlackthornWolfx | Sep 20 2006, 11:45 AM Post #6 |
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Awesome job bro! Geez you know me to well XD |
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| Deleted User | Sep 20 2006, 11:59 AM Post #7 |
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Awesome job! Seems very interesting, keep up the good work. ^^ You seem to know me good as well. Woot. =D |
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| La Koda | Sep 20 2006, 12:31 PM Post #8 |
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... This Punk Princess loves her Cinema Boy ...
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lol You certainly pinned me right! Gotta love ya, TF! **hugs** It's good so far! Can't wait to see Chapter Two! ^_^ |
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| Kotetsu | Sep 20 2006, 12:40 PM Post #9 |
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Woah, very interesting fanfic. |
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| teh internet111 | Sep 20 2006, 12:40 PM Post #10 |
Whoa...I still exist?
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Nice but I have one question(Takes out a camara and microphone"Who is this mystirios fox" |
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| Riikka | Sep 20 2006, 01:16 PM Post #11 |
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well i suppose i should reply to this. got a instant message. i didnt reply earlier. its good so far. karrman stabbed XD wow. that guy sounds familure but i cant put my tounge on whom it is. i dont know if i agree with the long introductions then the lack of detail in the final paragraph. if this is a story then why introduce the characters upfront in almost a portrait like way. why not just jump right into it. scream is said lets see...5 times in 3 sentences. overall i liked it. i liked the discriptions of the characters, though as i said they could have been blended in when you first meet them, and also i liked the plot starting with a murder (will it be a murder i dont know but it appears with him in that condition it is atleast an attempted murder). im interested in seeing where it goes. *subscribes to this topic* |
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| Ozymandias | Sep 20 2006, 01:25 PM Post #12 |
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Very interesting fic. This will be based on fictional events I assume? Cause, well, Karr never got stabbed... Quick, get Sage, he has the first aid kit :P EDIT: And the only problem I had was how you said "scream" so many time sin that one part... |
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| Deleted User | Sep 20 2006, 03:26 PM Post #13 |
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I saw the word kunai, mwehehehe, there's a few people with a black headband, and a kunai *thinks* Nope, I got nothing anymore |
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| Lisa | Sep 20 2006, 04:25 PM Post #14 |
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see 'ya. ♥
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This is great, TF! ;D Oooh, I wonder who the mystirios fox is! =o This is great! ;) |
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| amy and cream r kawaii | Sep 20 2006, 05:21 PM Post #15 |
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Perfume.
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...People call me AC? O_o Since when? No one ever called me that before... O_o Anyways... Liek, whoa, I should subscribe this, or something... Mysterious fox of doom! Meep. Nice work! ^^ |
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